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Reviewer: Haleylauren (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 12
I can't wait!
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: AJ is My Edward (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 16
This is great I'm loving it can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 16
Squeal! I am so glad they talked about his reaction. I love the concert idea. If turns out anything like the last one I read deep breath sigh....
Post again soon
Author's Response: lol. Edward is slowly coming around to the fact that he does need to talk and share with Bella. The concert should be something fun down the road I'm hoping.
Glad you enjoyed Bella and Edward's new closeness. :)
Reviewer: the_real_MrsEdwardCullen (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 4
I'm glad you didn't stop here
Author's Response: Yes well...now I'm glad I didn't stop there either. :)
Reviewer: xtothey (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 16
Only left me desperate for more!
Author's Response: hehehe :)
Reviewer: lrlovestwilight (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 16
Just found your story today, but wanted to drop you a line & let you know it"s one of my favorites on the site. Keep writing . . .
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
And welcome aboard. ;)
Reviewer: the_real_MrsEdwardCullen (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 2
I think you did a good job capturing Edward he is very much like Stephanie Meyers version almost identical.
Author's Response: Thank you. That's my goal. I'm not her so sometimes it is a challenge but oh well that is part of the fun.
Reviewer: LOVECARLISLE (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 16
Nice chapter.Cant wait to read the next.
-Helen x
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 16
loved it =) can't wait to see what happens in seattle!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: youngmei (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 16
i can't wait to read the next chapter.post again soon!
Author's Response: I'm hoping to submit the next chapter tomorrow. After that it's up to the powers that be.
Reviewer: 24601 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 16
Wonderful chapter! I loved the last one also and agree that it's better if the subject is addressed.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Fanfickled (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 16
Yaaayy... for Edward!! I'm glad he's starting to relax more around Bella.
Let's hope practice makes perfect??!!
I really do love the way you write this, it's soo..special!
Thankyou
xoxo
Author's Response: Yes finally he is starting to relax a bit. He's still very nervous but he is finally settling in to the fact that if this is going to have a prayer of happening he has to go with the flow more and let them be closer.
Well if not perfect, at least fun. :)
Thank you. I love Bella and Edward's relationship. They have a very special connection and I love writing it.
Reviewer: cullen wannabe (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
I'm enjoying this story, I like how Edward is turning to Carlisle and his brothers for advice. I'm interested to see what else Rosalie has to say apart from her mental insult hurling! You write well, and keep the reader interested. Well Done! Now can we have more chapters please?!?! xxx
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Edward is very close with his family. Well I guess one would be after spending several decades with them. Rose will be making a few other apperences and as always she will have something to say.
lol. I'll see what I can do. ;)
Reviewer: Misbehaving Mom2 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 16
Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: NicoleCullen (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 16
I loved how you had bella and edward spend the day together, Just the two of them, especially since he'd been away. cant wait to read about seattle :)
Author's Response: This is sort of how I always viewed them together after he'd been away (well unless there was school). Both of them feel so empty when they are apart and they were away from each other for three days here. Both of them needed to feel that connection. It didn't have to be complicated or anything over the top. They just needed to have the other one near.
Reviewer: windchime (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 16
I like the way you handled this part of their story. Can't wait till the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks. :) It was yet another obsticle they needed to address. There is so much Edward has been holding back and that has to stop in order for them to reach their goal.
Reviewer: SweetImpakt (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 16
Ah I like it :D Edward and Bella in a hotelroom. It sure gives some possibilities.
Update soon again ;) Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: lol. Yes it does. Things will stay cannon but I have a rather big night planned for them that hopefully you will all like. :)
Reviewer: maisydaze (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 15
LOVE the blood. It's simply a physical reality so I am happy you addressed it. It's HOT too! :)
Author's Response: lol. Thanks.
It is reality for them and with Bella being a virgin on their wedding night, it will be an issue that needed to be addressed.
;) Hot is always good.
Reviewer: Beth818 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 16
Ooooh I want to know what happens!!!!! I love the way this is going... Poor Edward... He's like an awkward little boy!
Author's Response: He really is. Bella does bring out his 17 year old self and he is so cute when he's uncomfortable.
Reviewer: smalls (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 16
very excited to see what happens next...and i thought the previous chapter was really good too. keep going please!
Author's Response: Ah what happens next. :)
Sorry I couldn't resist.
More soon.
Reviewer: girls_got_bite (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 16
This story is getting better and better. Can't wait to get to practicing...
Author's Response: lol. Thanks. I'm glad you don't think it's getting worse and worse. ;)
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 16
Don't let the PMSing police get you down about the last chapter. Some of us thought it was great and we're right anyway...So there. You rock and we love this story.
Author's Response: Thanks. :) Most ppl did think it was done well and I was actually amazed when I got the first 'gross' comment. Oh well...to each her own I guess.
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 16
Great job..really cute chapter..can't wait for more...
Author's Response: Thank you. Edward is very cute when he's uncomfotable, which he is a lot in this story. :)
Reviewer: mariarlongview (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 16
Don't keep us waiting too long!! Love it!
Author's Response: lol. I won't. I will be submitting the next chapter for validation in a couple of days. After that it's up to the powers that be. :)
Reviewer: Shellbowen (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 16
I am enjoying your story very much. I think you are handling every aspect of their relationship very well. Keep up the good work and I am looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you. I loved their relationship in Eclipes. It was still sweet and loving but much more equal than in Twilight.
More soon. I'm trying to get one chapter up per week.
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