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Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 17
Bella surprised me with her putting-Charlie-in-his-place action. Didn't expect that at all, but I liked it. And what are Edward and Jasper up to? Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response: Bella in her own way is trying to comfort her father by forcing him to acknowledge Edward's place in her life. She is going to be leaving for good and she wants her father to see that she is happy with Edward and that he loves her.
I just started to write the Edward and Jasper chapter so you will just have to wait and see. ;)
Reviewer: jm2138 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 17
Wow! This is really good! Please keep writing more, I really am enjoying reading it. It follows the context of the book and the way that Stephanie Meyer writes so well.
Author's Response: Thank you. :) You sound suprised in your review.
This story will go to their wedding night so lots more to come.
Reviewer: jdhsmomth (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 17
Can't wait for the next update! Looking forward to some Lemons!
Author's Response: Thanks. :) The real lemon won't happen until the Island but there will be lots of fun practicing leading up to that.
Reviewer: MistyAnn (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 17
I really like this story. I understand that you want to stay with the cannon. However, I would not mind if you veered from it. I didn't like BD for many reasons, the sea monster being one of them.
Author's Response: Thank you. I am sticking with cannon and I do understand many didn't like BD begining with Nessie which is why Perspective will end with their wedding night. If I decide to continue Edward POV from that point on, which I might, I will do it at a sequal so those who will not want to read about the "sea monster" won't have to and it will not ruin this story for them.
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 1
Cant wait for the next chapter! Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 17
I like the way you have kept Edward's character a gentleman.
Author's Response: Thanks. I've read so many fics where he just becomes a sex crazied vamp once they start "practicing" and while entertaining it isn't how I see Edward reacting.
Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 5
Very engaging
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting...I am enjoying hearing Edward's POV...
Author's Response: Edward is such a complex character, his view on things is always fascinating to me.
Reviewer: LDS (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 17
I got the biggest charge out of your response to my review. I am anxiously awaiting your Isle Esme chapter and will not need an "edited" version. You see, I am a post menopausal mother of four and have been around the block a time or two. I can proudly admit that I am able to check off quite a few of the items on "The List" by Laura Cullen. (See my 03/15 review at "The List.") Thanks!
I am not a writer......just a voracious reader!
Author's Response: LOL. Glad I could provide you with some amusement.
I'm happy to see there is someone else out there that doesn't shy away from stories just b/c of their ratings. I'm also reading The List, a fic that goes in a completely different direction than mine. :)
Maybe the ladies of your ward are different than mine but I don't think many of them would touch an NC-17 fic with a ten foot pole. (hence the offer to edit)
Reviewer: LDS (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 17
Have to admit, I was a "lurker." Now I am addicted. Although your story is rated NC-17, it is not vulgar and graphic as many other stories are. I see more sensuality and passion. Leaving something to the imagination is definitely more arousing. Please maintain........ Thanks!
I am not a writer.......just a voracious reader!
Author's Response: I am so glad you reviewed. I'm assuming by your name you are LDS. :)
Obviously there is some adult content in this story and when we get to Isle Esme there will be sex, however I promise it won't be too bad and if you would rather have an edited version once we get there, let me know and I will send it your way via e-mail. I write my love scenes as just that, love scenes. If someone is looking for straight smut, this is not the story for them.
Reviewer: Jeno (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 17
I admit, I was really skeptical about the whole idea of fan written up stories surrounding the twilight saga. But, you did it. Loved all your chapters and cannot wait to read more from you. You are giving us what we really want to read.. after all let's face it Stephenie Meyer will never let us have Bella & Edward this way.. x
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad I gave you a good impression of fan fic. There were are some good authors on here, you just have to find the stories you like.
You are right...SM would never write this but hey that's what fan fic is for. :)
Reviewer: youngmei (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 17
Please please please update soon!
Author's Response: lol. ok.
Reviewer: the_real_MrsEdwardCullen (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 17
WOW great job I can't wait for more....
Author's Response: Thank you. :) More soon.
Reviewer: lionandlamb101 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 17
more more more more more more more more more more
please please please please please
Author's Response: LOL. Impatient are we? :)
Reviewer: tina_cullen (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 17
oh, can't wait for more. Edward, always thorough in his preparations.
Author's Response: Your right he is. He's going to try and make himself as safe as possible for her.
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 17
I've really never enjoyed having to practice anything, but I think this kind of practice might be nice. We am I kidding....Freakin' Hot.
Author's Response: lol. Yea I somehow don't think many of us would pass up on this type of practicing. :)
Reviewer: winniec887 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 17
Another great update (as always)! I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Enna (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 17
amazing! i love this story! its very peaceful in a way and very passionate too.
Author's Response: I like the way you put that "very peaceful in a way and very passionate too." That's a very a very acurate discription of their relationship for Edward at this point.
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 17
Such a short chapter! But I loved it nonetheless. Can´t wait for the Seattle trip :)
Author's Response: lol. You ladies always think my chapters are short. ;)
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 17
Very Good
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: twitina (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 17
I just read your entire fanfic. I love it. I believe you have stayed to canon for the characters. And your method of portraying Edward's POV is fantastic. Well thought out and well written!!! I hope you'll write more.
Author's Response: Thank you. I have a lot more story to write so I'm not going anywhere anytime soon. :)
Reviewer: cbear (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 17
I love it! I cant wait for Seattle!! This is such a good story, Ill be watching for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: lionslamb1901 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 17
Awww. Loved it! I hope Bella let's him take her to Seattle (: That would be so cute! Annd I loved that Charlie caught them. Hahahaha!
Author's Response: Thanks. More about Seattle next chapter. :)
Got to love Charlie.
Reviewer: lionslamb1901 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 17
Awww. Loved it! I hope Bella let's him take her to Seattle (: That would be so cute! Annd I loved that Charlie caught them. Hahahaha!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 17
more, more, more, please!
Author's Response: LOL.
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