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Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 19
Great chapter...it was really really good..Post more soon
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: fanficgirl (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 03:33 PM · On: Chapter 19
What a cliffhanger! Please update!
Author's Response: You think that was a cliffhanger. Oh my you are not going to like me in a few chapters then. lol.
Sorry I couldn't resist. ;) More soon.
Reviewer: melissa95 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 19
a very cute chapter : ) and the next chapter should be interesting... hmmm i dont know what else to say wellll i cant wait for 20! xoxo
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes the next chapter will be interesting with Jasper coming into play.
Congratulations btw. You are review number 600 for this fic. :)
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 19
hoooeeeee! I'm looking forward to reading what Jasper's gonna do!
Author's Response: lol. Thanks. :)
Reviewer: lionslamb1901 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 19
Aww Bella! She's soo...I dunno. It was cute! Can't wait for more (:
Author's Response: lol. Thank you. Yea this was just supposed to be a nice cute day for them to be together as a couple. Something a little normal.
Reviewer: barrett322 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 19
Ok, so I am bouncing like Alice in my chair waiting for more! Love it all!
P.S. Spitting water on your computer would be a bad thing....hehe
Author's Response: lol. If you are bouncing like Alice I feel bad for those you live with. ;)
Yes. Spitting water on my couputer would be a very bad thing.
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 19
I did enjoy they're little day trip. nice chapter!
i'm interested to find out what happens in the next chapter, so update as soon as you can pleeease!? i'm sending you extra special birthday wishes
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the b-day wishes. :)
I'm also quite interested in what you all are going to think of next chapter. I'm not sure when it will be up though. Probibly end of this week or begining of next.
Reviewer: LOVECARLISLE (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 19
Nice chapter,Looking forward to the next.
-Helen
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 19
I loved the part where Bella and Edward are in the bookstore! He's very thoughtful when it comes to Bella and well really protective!! I really liked also the way you managed to show the affection Charlie feels for his daughter.
Next chapter will be a little awkward but I can't wait to see how you'll make Jasper help Edward!
Author's Response: Edward is wonderful when it comes to Bella. It is his love and affection for her that is so endearing in the books. And who doesn't like a protective Edward. :)
Charlie. *sigh* Charlie is one of those characters that I really felt for going into and throughout BD. He really does love his daughter more than anything and wants her to be happy.
Yes it will be ackward but it will still be in cannon so I promise it won't be out there in left field somewhere.
Reviewer: rohmareng (Anonymous) · Date: March 24, 2009 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 19
I keep repeating myself: well done, again :-) the chapters feel like they are all in order, like they are a piece of a puzzle and fit well into the canon of the whole story.
want more!! ;-)
Author's Response: Nothing wrong with respeating yourself. And thank you. I am trying to make everything fit. This is a process for Edward, which means going one step at a time.
lol. More soon.
Reviewer: cravingtwilight (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 19
Just read "Goodbye" it was really well written, and made me really sad--which, duh, it is sad. Good job though!
Author's Response: Thank you. Yes Goodbye is very sad. I cried while writing it and had to stop twice to clear my eyes. And even after reading it several times, I still get choked up there at the end.
Reviewer: One crazy monkey (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 19
Ok wow. You are an amazing writer. I just started today and can not wait til you get more chapters up. Thank you for writing this, it is exactly what i was looking for.
Author's Response: Thank you and welcome.
I try to post at least once a week so I don't make you wait too long. ;)
Reviewer: cravingtwilight (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 19
I really liked this chapter. I loved how you brought out his possesiveness in the bookstore "mine." Your writing, as always, is wonderful and smooth. I'm not going to lie, I'm a little bitter about Breaking Dawn, and am a little smug at the idea of you mailing your chapters to SM and being like, "This is what you should have written, instead of disappointing your readers." But thats just me.... Great chapters this week, thanks :)
Author's Response: LOL. When I read this review I couldn't stop laughing. My cats were sleeping around me and all looked up at the same time to see if their owner had gone out of her mind. ;)
I agree this is what I would like to have seen with BD. It wasn't that I hated BD, which I know some do, but it was more I missed Edward and Bella's relationship. We got so little of it before the wedding, the honeymoon was cut and snipped into little pieces, and then after that...well we didn't get too much of anything.
Reviewer: popsewini (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 19
I know authors love getting reveiws but I'm not really sure what to write exept that was AWESOME and to please write more soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Yes we authors do love to get reviews. lol. Most of the time people just write what they thought or felt about a chapter but I'll take AWSOME. :)
Reviewer: mitihifi (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 19
oh i cant wait to read how jasper helps edward!! i hope its sooooon!!!!
Author's Response: The first Jasper chapter will be up next. It will be a progression as with everything that has been Edward and Bella's relationship but just for the ackwardness I think it will be fun. :)
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: March 24, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 19
Haha, Port Angeles finally got a new bookstore!
A bookstore turns them on? Haha. Yay for literacy!
Edward, what a human reaction. that's right; mine. Haha :)
Just under 100 is slower? To a vampire I guess...
Very good, and I do like the way you're building it up. I think it would hurt the story a bit if you didn't.
Author's Response: Yea I had to add a new bookstore. They're going to Seattle in a few days but I wanted them to get out of the house and go somewhere around people. A bookstore seemed ideal but I needed one close. Well as close as was possible given the location. :)
lol. Well I don't know if it was the bookstore per say. It was more they kind of have sex on the brain right now so it doesn't really take much to get thing heated up quickly.
Got to love a protective Edward. :)
I took the 100 as being slower from Midnight Sun. That is about the speed he was going when he took her home from their dinner and he said that was slow.
I agree. This wouldn't be the same story if it moved quickly or jumped around.
Reviewer: andie72 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 19
Thank you so much for this story. I have really enjoyed it. Your writing has such feeling and ease. I cannot wait to see Jasper "help" Edward and will anticipate their trip to Seattle as well.
Author's Response: Your welcome. We have quite a ways to go yet to get to the island.
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 19
Good transition. Book store Bella, of course she is naughty there in her element. I can't wait for what is going on in Edwards mind when Jasper helps him. Thank you so much for your writing. You rock and have me checking for updates daily.
Author's Response: Thank you. Well as we know, Edward can make lose her barrings just about anywhere if he puts a little effort into it. :)
Next chapter will be interesting and very ackward for both of them.
I'm not sure when the next update is going to be submitted yet. It will depend on how much I can get written this week.
Reviewer: Intheriver (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 19
"Walking toward the registers I stayed close to her side. The boy’s thoughts were one of disappointment. That’s right; mine."
I loved this little paragraph. Edward may be a vampire but when it comes to Bella - he's just such a guy.
Author's Response: lol. Yep. :)
Reviewer: yihyu (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 19
please continue
Author's Response: Will do. :)
Reviewer: Hidden_Forces (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 19
Bella in the bookstore made me laugh because that's EXACTLY how I get when shopping for books. I lose hours of my day in the blink of an eye. GREAT update sweetie! Keep 'em coming. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see how Jasper helping Edward goes ;)
Hugs,
Kristi
Author's Response: Yea I could so see Bella doing then as I wrote it. She loves her books. :)
Reviewer: Leesh (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 19
I'm totally not even gonna say that it was too short this time :o)
Awsome chapter!! I like the Charlie tid-bits you are putting in here! It seems very him and very believable!
Can't wait for the Jasper chapter :o)
LOL~Leesh
Author's Response: lol. I appreciate that. :)
I love Charlie. He really does love Bella and wants the best for her.
Reviewer: Lilly9999 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 19
Great story, I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Shelly_gurl88 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 19
oooh! update soon, update soon!
Author's Response: lol. I shall try. :)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 19
Poor Edward and Bella! This has got to be embarassing for them! I'm really enjoying your story!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
And yes this is very embarressing for both of them.
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