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Reviewer: TwilighLove25 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 19
Can not wait for the next Chapter, Loved this one.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 11
I was hoping he would get in bed with her. Come on practice means practice this is like coming to the track and just warming up and then deciding you don't feel like running.
Author's Response: Edward was still shaken by her little dream and the revelation it brought. About some things Edward can be quite clueless.
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 10
your not just torturing Edward
Author's Response: lol. sorry. :)
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 9
Good ol Angela to the rescue. I agree with Bella I don't think Edward gets caught up in the moment enough either
Author's Response: Angela is great isn't she? :)
No he doesn't but that is mostly due to fear for her safety. Frustrating but he is trying to do the right thing.
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 8
Emmett cracks me up, and I'm glad that Edward really is working on his desire and now that Emmett has given him some homework, maybe he will get a few more ideas
Author's Response: Well you know he couldn't let his little brother off without any ribbing. :)
Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 19
can't wait to read how this lil meeting goes =)
Author's Response: I think one word to sum it up would be...ackward.
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 7
Nice practice
Author's Response: Lots more where that came from. ;)
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 6
Yea my idea that Jasper helped was used ;-)
Author's Response: lol. :)
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 5
Ha Ha Edward is worrying about worrying thats so typical of him
Author's Response: Yes it is very typical of Edward. He is the king of worriers. :)
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 4
I'm glad you didn't end the story there I think it would have been lacking. Maybe Jasper can simulate some of the feelings Edward would feel being intimate and force them on Edward alittle at a time to build up his strength to it?
Author's Response: So am I. There was just so much more to tell.
Hm. Are you in my head or something. ;)
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 3
I'm glad they took edward's fellings seriously and are trying to comfort and help him
Author's Response: Yes they might like given Edward a hard time but they aren't stupid. They know this is very serious.
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 2
poor bella. alice really is a force of nature, you know earth, wind, fire, water, Alice
Author's Response: That's a good way to discribe Alice. Force of Nature. :)
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 19
Wow! You're totally going to spoil us with all these super-quick updates! But I'm definitely not complaining! This chapter was great! Actually it was beyond great; it was like my definition of a fantasy come true. A gorgeous man (or vampire as the case may be) drives you to a bookstore, thinks it's cute when you get all excited and swept away in the books, kisses you senseless before giving you time to browse contentedly, and goes all jealous and possessive before leaving the store! So in case you didn't realize, I loved the bookstore scene! The stuff with Charlie was also great. I really don't think fan fics utilize Charlie enough...he's such a terrific character and his relationship with Bella is fascinating. Loved that Edward confessed to her that Jasper is going to help him. And Bella's reaction to that was great. Can't wait to see how you handle that scene! Thanks so much for the really quick chapter updates!
Author's Response: lol. Well don't get used to it. It was mostly due to posting an extra chapter for my b-day and then the quick work of my validation beta on this last chapter.
So glad I could put your fantasy on paper for you, well computer. ;)
I agree with you on the Charlie part. So many fics either ignore him altogether or don't do him justice.
Reviewer: DeniCullen (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 19
I read your one shot on fanfic and i really liked it. it is very true to the characters. I wish there was no pregancy and breaking dawn was more about the treaty and all the goodbyes bella was going to have to go through. Anywh0. i really enjoy your writing. =)
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I liked BD but the goodbyes for Bella were always something I wondered about, hence the story. :)
Reviewer: LittleCatSoul (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 19
Okay, I've been reading this fic on Archives, until I read chapter 15 last night. You mentioned that you were ahead on other sites, and I got lucky and found you here. I'm really enjoying this fic. Edwards struggle with his own desire is right on the mark. The difficulties that he has, as well as the successes all make sense in the universe that SM created. I'm really looking forward to this next chapter. I was wondering exactly how Jasper would help, and now I can barely wait to see how it comes out. I will be looking to this site now for updates, but I hope you keep posting on Archives, for the rest of your fans who didn't go running off searching for more chapters. I have no patience, but I do enjoy a good story. Thanks for writing this one. LCS (rayloren on Archives).
Author's Response: Well welcome to Twilighted. :) There are some great stories here.
Don't feel bad about searching the extra chapters out. I've done that before myself for stories I love.
I am planning to continue to post the fic on Archives and I'm hoping to eventually have them caught up with what is on here but it's taking a while to get everything through the system and posted.
Reviewer: mommakay (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 19
First off, I love how edward is jealous and sort of staking his claim at the bookstore. Ha Ha. I like how he still feels he doesn't deserve her. I also loved the kiss by the way in the bookstore. Very nice touch! I know its not all that private but a thrill nonetheless. Great job on the chapters! I loved how you gave us a little extra this week. Can't wait for the rest!! My friends were the ones who keep me informed when you update new chapters!! Ha Ha. I'm the one who showed them your story!! Ha Ha. Thank you!
P.S.- I'm all stoked for seattle!! Let's do it!
Author's Response: Yes Edward jealous is quite amusing. I just couldn't resist.
lol. That's funny about your friends. Thanks so much for sharing my story with them. :)
Reviewer: LolaRose (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 19
Sorry that it took me so long to get caught up love, but it was worth the wait. I really like hearing Edward in your writing. I like the practicing too, makes it sound a bit more realistic than to go from cold shoulder to knocking boots. :)
keep up the good work and I can't wait to see how the Jasper chapter goes.
Author's Response: Not a problem. I knowy you've been occupied. :)
I totally agree. There is no way he would have been able to go from their simple kissing sessions to making love to her. Plus, Edward is a perfectionist. I can't see him NOT doing everything in his power to prepare for the biggest night of his existince.
Reviewer: EdwardCullenBoy (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 19
Ok well i wanted to finish before i review.... You right extremely well i love this plot..... i still dont understand the whole jasper think.... ok well i will be reading and if you need a person to review b4 you post here is my email
Tjcool93@hotmail.com
Author's Response: Thank you. The Jasper thing will make more sense after next chapter, I think. Not to worry. It's not going to be anything creepy or weird. This is a cannon story. I'm trying to keep it so it could have fit into the saga.
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 19
Oh, my! You just described how I react when I go to the bookstore. If I could, I´d live in a bookstore!
Therefore, I loved this chapter.
I can´t wait for Jasper´s Help.
Soon please. Pretty please.
Author's Response: :) Glad you enjoyed it. Bella does get quite lost in her books.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 1
I try not to squeal LOL
My husband finds it annoying btu if some where during your chapter i do squeal then I have to put it my husband thinks its the funniest sound of giddy me squealing while reading but what can I say I love it!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL. Oh that's just too funny. Husbands just don't how addicting stories can be. ;)
Reviewer: Tigerkitten (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 19
Please hurry I am dying to know what happens next. It is such a great story and you are a talented writer. Don't stop please!!!
Author's Response: I won't stop, I promise. :)
The next chapter won't be up for at least a few days yet. Probiblly end of the week or even early next week.
Reviewer: edwardsproperty21 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 19
that was really good i really can't wait for the next chapter i've been dying to see how this goes
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 19
Squeal I so can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!
LMAO This is gonna be good Post again soon!!!
Author's Response: lol. I think you squeal at the end of every chapter. ;)
I'm hoping you all will like the next chapter. I'm really feeling the pressure here.
Reviewer: twilight girly 1901 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 6
can i just say that i love edward cullen!!!!!!!!!! :]
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p.s. this is an amazing fanfiction! can't wait to keep on reading :D
Author's Response: You can say it all you want. You can shout it from the roof tops if you'd like. :)
Thank you.
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 19
Very good, I like the bookstore part. I'm a Little Confused about the Jasper thing, it will be interesting to see how that goes. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Glad you liked their little public make out session. :)
Don't be worried too much about Jasper. It won't be creepy, I promise.
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