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Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 20

Very Good, I Just LOVE Jasper.



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 20

Its sweet that Jasper wants to help Edward, its weird what he has to do to help him, but the idea of it is great



Author's Response:

Yea Jasper really is being a sweetheart here especially once you see how hard this is going to be on him as well.

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 20

Well, this is good!  It is not at all what I expected. I like how you kept pointing out how uncomfortable it was for Jasper too.  No pun intended, but it helped maintain perspective of the scene :)



Author's Response:

Yay you are reivew #700! Congrats. :)

I'm glad you liked it. I know a lot of people were thinking it was going to be kinky or something but again I'm trying to keep this realistic and I couldn't see Edward and Jasper going in that direction.

Having this be Edward's POV has it's advantages given his mind reading abilities.

Reviewer: xjennjennx (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 20

I started reading your story last night and finished it just now.... I want more! I can't wait to see where you take B&E!



Author's Response:

lol. I'm glad your enjoying it. :) I've submitted the next chapter to my beta so hopefully chapter 21 will be up soon.

Reviewer: Jensy (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 20

Eki, I really liked this chapter. Jasper is my favorite Cullen, other than Edward of course; I guess I like the emo characters ;)

<< His head tilted to the side in thought. “Why did you stop? It didn’t feel like you were losing control.” >>

I love how well he reads things.

<< I opened my fist and released what was left of the broken tree. >>

Yikes! A little foreshadowing to the headboard, hee hee.

<< And then I saw it in his thoughts. He was remembering Bella’s birthday. “Jasper you know we’ve both forgiven you for that.” After all, what I’d done had been much worse. >>

 

Aw, that's great that you brought back this incident from New Moon! Awesome chapter!



Author's Response:

lol. You like the emo characters huh?

Jasper is quite good at what he does isn't he? ;)

A bit of foreshadowing yes. hehehe

The reasoning was totally unplanned. This came to me while writing and it just made sense as his motivation. It was such a dark point in both of their lives and it centered around Bella.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 20

Squeal go Jazz~~~~

Go Edward Yummm wow what an active imagination hehehe

Post again soon



Author's Response:

lol. Yep Jazz was pretty awsome wasn't he. Such a great big brother. :)

Our Edward does have a pretty active imagination once he opens up doesn't he.

 

Reviewer: Jeno (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 20

very nice. maybe a bit short???



Author's Response:

Thanks. You ladies always think the chapters are short. lol.

Reviewer: bloodredlust (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow.  You write beautifully.  Looking forward to more.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Reviewer: blairbass (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 20

thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

your welcome

Reviewer: Leesh (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 20

hhmmmm....interesting :o) Great chapter! Looking forward to the next :o)



Author's Response:

lol. Thanks. :)

Reviewer: clairedelunetaz (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 20

greaat chapter. love jasper. keep it up



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Reviewer: ashkan00dle (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 20

More please?



Author's Response:

lol. I'll see what I can do. ;)

Reviewer: One crazy monkey (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 20

Loved it! Thanks again for writing this! You're awesome!



Author's Response:

lol. Your welcome and thank you. :)

Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 20

Great chapter! Jasper is one of my favourite characters and I love the way he tried to help his brother.. and apologise again for the incident at the birthday party.


Can't wait to read what happens next!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Jasper really grew on me while writing this chapter.

Reviewer: Misbehaving Mom2 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 20

Loved it!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Reviewer: yihyu (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 20

great one. please continue soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

Reviewer: jdhsmomth (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 20

Good chapter! Can't wait for the next!



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Reviewer: mommakay (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 20

I loved this chapter!!!  awesome!  I loved all the aspects taking place at this time....i love how edward's mind just races away with him thinking of bella, then himself, then jasper....all at the same time!  haha.  To top that off he is having to deal with these overwhelming emotions....everyone has a breaking point....

 

Great capture of the characters here!!  Amazing job as always....can't wait for the next update!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you. :)

Edward's mind does go a mile a minute doesn't it. He kind of reminds me of a juggler at times trying to keep everything in the air at the same time. Of course that is in part due to his vampire mind which allows him to be able to do all that thinking.

Your right that everyone has a breaking point. Bella, and his reaction to her, has always pushed those limits for him although in different ways. 

 

Reviewer: TwilaEveningStar (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 20

Hey! Great story that you have created for Post-Breaking Dawn. It's a little slow for my taste but I enjoy reading it.

Author's Response:

Hi Twila. This isn't a Post-Breaking Dawn story, it takes place between Eclipes and Breaking Dawn to start and will go up to the wedding night on Isle Esme. As for the pacing... That is intentional. This is from Edward's POV and he is very mathotical in his thinking which is reflected in the story. Also, there is a lot to cover. He has to build his tolerance and that does not and will not happen quickly.

Reviewer: melissa95 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 20

amazing chapter as usual: ) and it was as akward as i expected which was a good thing i can nott wait for 21! xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you melissa. :)

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 20

I wasn't sure how I would feel about Jasper's help but I really enjoyed this chapter.  You did a great jon with it.  I can't wait to read more!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. Believe me you weren't the only one worried about this chapter. I can't tell you how many sighed of relief I have heard through reading reviews so far. lol.

Reviewer: iamjenn (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 12

I'm not any good at this, because this is the first review I've written. I don't usually write anything, so I don't know how this works...all I know is that I'm enjoying this story SO much and it is one of the best ones I've read on this site. Good job!



Author's Response:

Well hello Jenn. I'm honored to get your very first review. :)

As for reviewing, don't stress about it. Once you get a few under your belt it comes quite natually.

I'm so glad you hear your loving my story.

Reviewer: PatzRob (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 20

that was.... interesting



Author's Response:

lol. It a good way or a bad way?

Reviewer: twilover09 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 20

Oh Jasper, just such a nice guy :o) This was a simple, to-the-point chapter, and I enjoyed reading about Edward's and Jasper's interaction together.



Author's Response:

He really is and he's a great brother, too.

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 20

Very interesting!  An effective way for Jasper to help Edward.  I like it, well done! 

xoxo Sarah



Author's Response:

Thank you and yes it's very effective. It's also very uncomfortable for both of them.

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