Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: Corrdelia (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 21
Ohhh I can't wait to read more :)
Could the book that Emmett gave Edward be in her hands :P
Author's Response: lol. I don't know. Could it? ;)
Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 21
Great chapter but...how could you stop the chapter like that??
Anyway I think that she had found the Kama sutra that Emmett had given Edward in the earlier chapters...I really can't wait to see what will happen next, especially Edward's reaction if my guess is correct!!
I also really loved Carlisle's reaction about Edward's eavsdropping..
so please update soon!
Author's Response: lol. sorry. ;)
Carlisle is great isn't he? He is so full of patience and wisdom.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 21
Great update! I can't wait to find out what she was reading!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: Misbehaving Mom2 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 21
loved it!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 1
great chapter! Iam a fan from brasiland I have to say that I'm LOVING your storie. congratulations!!
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I'm glad you are enjoying it so far.
Reviewer: mommakay (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 21
My bet is on the books emmett gave edward a while back. The ones about sex for dummies. HA HA! Great chapter! Can't wait for the next! nice...
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: magicdreams (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 21
haha this is interesting!
Author's Response: lol. Yep. :)
Reviewer: detroitangel (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm pleased to have read all of this story so far in one setting. In the book series, I was put a back by how little Edward was involved. To read your story from his point of view has been thrilling. It makes the story much more full for me. The sensuality you've added is almost perfect. It's difficult for readers to realize the time that Edward has come from. Respect, manners, chivalry, and timidness would've been part of his environment. It's great to see his embarassment in all this as well. I'm enjoying your twists. I love that Jasper is able to be present and help out. I think that adding more of the human aspect, his physical needs, has truly added depth to Edward. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :) I know in the series I always craved more of Edward. He is so fasinating to me due to his complexity. And after reading the partial draft of MS I fell in love with him even more as a character. His love for Bella is amazing and complete. The wants and needs he has are real and sometimes very human but are contantly at war with both his upbringing and his vampire nature.
Reviewer: jdhsmomth (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 21
Really enjoy this story!
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: paige113 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 21
arghh cliff hanger...update soon i want to know what it is!
Author's Response: Yep a cliffhanger. sorry. Ok I'm really not. hehehe. I'm hoping to have the next chapter up by next weekend.
Reviewer: cravingtwilight (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 21
The books Emette gave Edward! Hahaha! Fun chapter! :)
Author's Response: lol. Thank you. :)
Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 21
Very good chapter. That's a good thought about the venom, I didn't think about that.
Hmmmmmm, whats in her hands???? I think it must be a How To, Sex book??
Author's Response: Thank you. I do occationally have good thought processes. :)
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 21
Hmmm...maybe a copy of the Kama Sutra? It would be educational, after all, and it seems like the Cullens would have a copy hanging around somewhere (Emmett probably has more than one!) Great chapter.
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: You are very right that an educaational book would be very Cullen like.
Reviewer: Caitylovestwilight (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 21
Of 3 things I was absolutley certain: 1. I Edward and Bella love each other 2. This story does a great job of showing that 3. I GOTTA KNOW WHAT SHE IS READING!
Great job, can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: LOL. I love it!
Reviewer: PhoenixRising (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 21
Is it the Kama Sutra? :) Or some naughty book that Emmett gave Edward? Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Well you are on the right track. :)
Reviewer: One crazy monkey (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 21
GREAT AS ALWAYS! MORE PLEASE!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm hoping to have the next chapter up by next weekend.
Reviewer: pepi-te (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 21
Well...what do you all think she's got in her little hands? :)
I don't know ...YET, but I'm waiting -patiently or not- to know.
Great story =)
Author's Response: lol. I'm happy with the not so patiently waiting. ;)
Reviewer: gentlereader (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 21
Seriously...we better yet another chapter ASAP.
Author's Response: lol. The plan is to have another chapter up by next weekend.
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 1
Sorry for the double reveiw, but it has got to be Karma Sutra.
Author's Response: lol. It's ok. I don't mind. I'm loving reading everyones guesses.
Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 21
Emmett's Guide to Sex. We can cross-over stories, right.
Author's Response: lol. Well your imagination can anyway.
Reviewer: xoTinyxo (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 21
whats in her hands?????!!!?!???? how can you leave us like this? LOL
Author's Response: lol. Yes I can. ;)
Reviewer: LOVECARLISLE (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 21
Looking forward to the next chapter.
-Helen x
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: odswartz (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 16
Your storytelling is very, very good throughout. I particularly enjoy and appreciate the delicacy with which you handle the intimate scenes; right in tune with 19th century Edward. I just love it!
However, there is one little point of grammar I have found particularly distracting. Please, please, not "His mind started imagining Bella and I in a hotel room." The correct form is, "His mind started imagining Bella and me in a hotel room."
The clue to correct usage is: if you drop "Bella and" does the sentence sound right? So, "His mind started imagining I in a hotel room" not right, but "His mind started imagining me in a hotel room" right.
Sorry for the English lesson, hope you don't mind :-)
Author's Response: Thank you for noticing that. I've read so many Edward POV's where he is just...well crude. Edward isn't like that when he speaks and I can't see him thinking that way either. He is a 19th century gentelman and he always will be.
As for the English lesson. I've never claimed to be an English major. In fact, English was my worst subject in school. I will try to remember the rule though for future referrence.
Reviewer: EdwardAlways (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 21
Ahhhh!! Cliffhanger! Please please please update soon!!!
Author's Response: lol. Yep a cliffhanger. I couldn't resist. It was just calling to me. :)
Reviewer: VampiresWillNeverHurtYou (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 21
Update! :D
Author's Response: lol
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved. Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws. Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
|