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Reviewer: Grace Ryan (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 22
I'm sooo happy the book wasn't something cheezy like the Karma Sutra. I'm almost giddy that it was Sex for Dummies. Sounds exactly like something Emmett would give Edward and exactly something Bella would choose to read. Great idea!
Author's Response: Well Emmett did give Edward the Karma Sutra but he hasn't read it yet and truthfully I'm not sure he will before the wedding. I think the Sex for Dummies will be enough.
Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 22
great chapter, really sweet and nice!! I loved both their reactions to the books!
If Edward could blush he would have surely outdone Bella after her question "Practical?Like?" !!! *grin*
I really love this sweet moments between those two, cause they show their love and affection for each other...and you've got to love Emmett!!
This is really of my favourite stories and I can't wait for the next chapter!! (3000 words? wow, i'm really impressed!!)
Author's Response: Thanks. :) And you are so right. Edward would have been beet red.
I love their sweet, loving moments. It shows they aren't just horney teenagers getting caught up in the moment. They truely love each other. And well yes...you have to love Emmett. :)
Reviewer: quirkyquad (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 20
Good writing; good job keeping characters in character. Watch you "your"s and "you're"s....
Author's Response: Thank you.
Reviewer: mitihifi (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 22
oh cant wait!!! love love love this story! i hope it never ends. updates make my heart flutter :)
Author's Response: Well thank you. this story will end eventually but I'm considering picking up where it leaves off if there is enough interest.
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 22
What a grat chapter!! I love how for just a minute his 17 year old mind kicked in and he was going to tease her..I loved that part. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you. :) Yes that 17 year old does come out every now and then.
Reviewer: popsewini (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 22
Haha at Bella finding the book. I'm loving this story!
Author's Response: lol. Thanks. :)
Reviewer: roadkill2105 (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Chapter 22
the longer the better and 3000+ plus words sounds mad! Update soon! x x Cassie
Author's Response: lol. the longer the better huh? ;)
Reviewer: AliKatt (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 22
I for one wil be one of the happy ones about the long chapter. Boy I used ONE alot in that sentence...lol! I just can't get enough. Em is such a perv...I love him. Still looking forward to the trip...hope it's coming up soon. Keep up the good work. THX
Author's Response: lol. yes you did like the word one. :)
What can you say, Emmett is Emmett. As for the trip...yes it's coming not to far in the distant future. We still have about 4 or 5 more chapters though I think first.
Reviewer: RobertLover (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 22
WOW! Excellent story. I love how its from EPOV. I could definately see all of this happening before the wedding. It was so well written and I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you keep writing and I would love to know EPOV of the wedding day, when he first sees Bella in her wedding gown and his thoughts through the ceramony and reception. Also on Isle Esme. SM should have written the whole series from EPOV instead of Bellas. Especially in Breaking Dawn when it changes to Jabob's POV. That should of been from EPOV instead of Jacobs. Awesome Story!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
This story will go through to the night they are together for the first time so the wedding will be in there. I've had a few people ask if I'll continue the story after that and I've decided that this story will not go past that point. I'm not ruling out doing this as a series though and continuing the story. We will just have to see if there's enough of an interest in that when the time comes.
Reviewer: SweetImpakt (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 22
ah good chapter :D
I agree with some of the others, this story is so nice because it could really have been happening between Eclipse and BD. It's so in character.
I'm looking forward to the next one! ( wow 3000 words :D Nice)
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Hopefully that will still be the case by the end and everything will flow into BD perfectly.
lol. I knew you all would love the 3000 words.
Reviewer: MrsDoctor (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 22
good chapter =]
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: Haruka81 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 2
Hi there!!
I´m just starting...interesting..lets see what happens next.
Greetings.
Author's Response: Hello and welcome.
I hope you enjoy it. This is a cannon story so it fits in line with the saga.
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 22
I knew I would be slapping myself in the head and saying "Duh!" when I found out what it was that she had and I was totally right. Should have seen that one coming. Although, unlike Edward I really wasn't surprised that Bella was happy he was reading the books. I mean I'm sure she's happy and appreciative of anything he does to prepare because it shows her that he's really serious about trying to be intimate with her.
Loved the sexy times in this chapter. I do have to confess though when Edward was looking at and tickling Bella's feet, the only thing running through my head was "Edward....foot fetish..." and me giggling horribly. Yeah, mature, I know, lol.
Can't wait for more and especially that long chapter next time!
Author's Response: lol. Yea I set that one up with the books. With as much as she's in his room it is no surprise that she found them. Edward, however, sometimes has his head in the sand. It was also very obvious to me that Bella would be thrilled he was reading the books and taking their goal seriously. Edward though... You got to love him but he can be such a prude sometimes.
I was trying very hard NOT to make it a foot fetish thing when I was writing it but the visual of him tickling her feet was just too cute to pass up. :)
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 22
I love your story. I love how it is following with the series. This is probably the most realistic verison I've read and it is quite good. I also love that it is also from EPOV. I also like that you are not switching from Bella to Edward every chapter. I can't wait to see where you go next! Happy writing!
Author's Response: Thank you. :) That is my goal to make it realistic and fit into the saga. The entire story will be in Edward's POV. This was a very difficult time for him and he was stuggling, going through very complex emotions, and I wanted to explore that. Next chapter should be fun. ;)
Reviewer: cravingtwilight (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 22
So excited for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!! This one was really cute too, and I totally KNEW it would be the sex books! Hope you're having a good weekend! Happy writing!
Author's Response: lol. Yep there were a few of you that got it right. :)
Thanks. I hope you have a good weekend as well.
Reviewer: TwilightFiction (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 22
Yay! That was a really nice chapter. As in, nice and sweet. Good job!
Author's Response: :) Yes it was. Edward pushed his boundries but still in a very Edward way.
Reviewer: iheartyoux100 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
i love this story so much please update soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks and there should be another update next weekend. :)
Reviewer: melissa95 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 22
amazing chapter as usual :) i can not wait for chapter 23! xoxo
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: EdwardAlways (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 22
Hmm after re-reading Eclipse and BD, I realized how off a lot of the post-eclipse stories are. Edward and Bella do things that would be near impossible consitering how Edward still deals with losing control. I think your story is actually very realistic in how far he can go and how he had to control himself! Update soon, wanna know what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you and I couldn't agree more. I wanted to give a very realistic view in this story. There are plenty of stories out there on this subject that are there for the smut value, and that's fine if that's what you want. I'm going to try to have a chapter up every weekend so we'll cross our fingers. :)
Reviewer: yihyu (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 22
I really like this chapter as they are taking it slow. It is supposed to be this way for both Bella and Edward. Other similair stories simply develped too fast and so unlike the characters. Edward was always cautious and Bella was always patient.
Author's Response: I agree wholeheartedly. Their personalities didn't change just because they were preparing to become intimate or try to become intimate. They are still Bella and Edward and they would have taken this slowly and she would have let him set the pace for the most part.
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 22
yay for Edward pushing boundaries :)
Loooking forward to the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Yep he really is. :)
Reviewer: archaeolgy and Twilight Love (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 22
yup that is deffinatly me! i am a huge fan of your writting. thank you soooo much for taking the time to write the stroy! fantastic work :)
Author's Response: lol. Thank you. :)
Reviewer: jennlyn78 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 22
This chapter was HOT!!!! Cant wait for the next chapter.....
Author's Response: lol. Thanks. :)
Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 22
Wow! Eki 3000 words, *I´m salivating at the thought*.
About this chapter I´m crazy about our adventurous boy´s reading material. LOL. He needs to thank Emmett. Ha, Ha.
That Bella and her one track mind.
I love your story. Anticipating next LOOOOOOOONG chapter. Thaaaaaaaaaaaaanks.
sincerely,
Karina.
Author's Response: lol. yep 3000 words. You all are going to get spoiled. ;)
Yeah he does need to thank Emmett but then that would just be asking for more nosiness from Emmett so I don't think that's going to happen. It is definately opening up the discussion though.
I do believe Bella's one track mind is what got them to this agreement in the first place. :)
Thanks
Reviewer: litlemiss_Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 22
that was awesome writing..i would like to read more!! please keepi writing,,,
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm hoping to have the next chapter up next weekend.
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