It's about time he lost some control! :)  Love the chapter as always.  Update soon!  :)

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I completely agree. Thanks. :)

I loved it, completely and utterly loved it.

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Thank you. :)

My goodness. While I just loved seeing him a little out of control, I also liked how you made sure to keep his sweet side present. His love for Bella never faulters, even when he can't think of anything but his lust. Well written. And very, very yummy. :)

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Thank you. Edward out of control does have a yummyness factor doesn't it. :)

God, Edward, it's about damn time you show Bella what you're trying to protect her from.

Okay, so since it was such a short chapter, you'll post update soon right?!!

Eager readers need to know!

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LOL

You ladies have got to give me time to write them. lol. Honestly I'm a bit behind. It took me a week and a half to finish a new chapter for my other fic, which just about killed me so now I'm behind on this one. Hopefully I can get some writing in this weekend.

finally Edward loosens his "old fashioned ways" and started being a guy. I mean, I'm still glad he's responsible and trying to wait but come on. I had to had slipped every once in a while. No ones perfect.

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lol. Glad you liked that Edward lost control a little in this chapter. He is a guy, not to worry about that. :) And if he'd hadn't been "controling" himself for the past 70 years I'm sure his loss of control would happen a lot more often and we would probibly be Bellaless.

Growling-Take-Control-Edward is a wee bit HOT. That's what I think.

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lol. That he is. :)

Great Chapter!!  I can't wait for the next chapter!!

 

{{hugs}}

 

Mac

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lol. Thanks. :)

I like it when he loses control. I think it is very good for him -he needs to "live" a little!

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lol. Very true. :)

A yes but edward can go at least topless!!! BD night before the wedding; don t hesitate to use that!!

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lol. Don't worry, Edward will be removing his shirt for Bella. :)

There is not a thing wrong with your pace. Take it nice and slow. It’s like word foreplay.

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Word foreplay. I like it. :)

Bella makes a persuasive argument to Gentleman Cullen there. You are a brave woman for exploring the oral sex issue in a fan fic! I think I could learn something from this Sex for Dummies book.

So what mile of the marathon are we on in this part of the story? ;) Great update.

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lol. Doesn't she now. :)

Well you know me. I don't shy away from much, even in fan fic. (Half Price Books has it.) ;)

We are somewhere around mile 13/14. About half way through but still a long way to go and the hardest part is still ahead.

this story is so very touching (no pun intended...lol.)  i love reading this... keep up the great work!

-gray

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lol. Thanks. :)

Hehe, I'm not sure Edward is spending enough time around modern women. Men may still think about it more, but I'm sure I know quite a few women that get quite graphic in descriptions, let alone what they're probably thinking, lol. But still you've got to love that gentlemanly part of him that dates from his own time period. And I love even more Bella learning to use her womanly wiles on Edward to get her way. Go Bella! lol. Another nice chapter!

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lol. This is true, although I still think modern women have more of an emotional attactment to sex than men in the general sense. But your right, even if he did over hear those thoughs him being a gentleman would have blocked them as quickly as possible. And Bella has always been able to ben Edward with her womanly wiles when she wants. She just doesn't do it often b/c she knows he can do the same thing to her. :)