Oh my edward! that was fantastic! update soon!

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lol. Thanks. :)

Aww, silly, naive Edward.  I guess when you were born in the early 1900's, oral sex wasn't something that you talked about, lol.  I loved how uncomfortable he was, and how comfortable Bella was talking about it.

xoxo Sarah

Author's Response:

No it really wasn't. Oral sex was considered tabbo then. It just wasn't something anyone with class or social standing talked about. Their difference in upbringing really showed here.

I think all the practice in the world won't truly prepare him.  I know it will help, and besides that I can't imagine Edward hurting Bella. 

Good chapter as always :)

Author's Response:

Your right. Nothing is going to prepare him for the real thing with all the emotions and feelings involved but it will help. It will make the experience just a little less overwhelming for him.

YOu do a good job of capturing their personalities, especially Edward's.  He's very believable, great job!

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Thank you. :)

I like when Edward loses a little control - it shows he's not so damn perfect!  And I know Bella likes to see the affect she has on him, who wouldn't?!

Keep going, this is great!

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lol. Very true. :)

Hi! congratulations, I've seen that your story has reached 1000 rewievs, well I'm really glad because it's definitely worth it..

I was reading the beginning of Breaking dawn (again!), you know till the wedding and I started to wonder if in your story you'll make Bella have her bachelorette party (since you have still 10 days to the weddind day). I know that in the book there's only Edward's bachelor party and it's more an excuse to make sure he doesn't 'eat' the guests at the wedding, but I was thinking that Alice will likely want to organise a party for Bella even if she's going to throw a fit about it.. meanwhile Edward can worry about his sisters trying to corrupt his precious, sweet, innocent fianceè! *smile*

I hope you don't mind my suggestion, it's just something silly and random that popped in my mind, I'm not trying to be purposefully annoying I swear!!

Yesterday I also read again the early chapters of your story in which Bella has her period..well let me just say that you've wrote them exceptionally...I can't wait for your next update!

Author's Response:

Thank you. I was rather excited to hit the 1000 review mark. I really do have some great reviewers.

I'm more than happy to hear suggestions. I did think about a bachelorette part for Bella but couldn't get it to work into my plan quite right so I'm working something else in that will be more of a "girls day." I'm still working on how I'm going to write it since this is from Edward's POV and he won't be there but well...I'm working on it.

Chapter 15 is one of my favorites. :)

You did a very good job taking the story this way....I've mainly seen them practicing "hands on" so its nice to see a different view....

I don't know what to expect next though...I hope it gets better : )

Author's Response:

Well I'm happy to hear I'm keeping you on your toes. ;)

It's getting good !!!! Exciting

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Glad you are liking it so far. :)

so amsome

 

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lol. Thanks. :)

When you kiss for a prolonged time you breathe through your nose.  Do Bella and Edward (a two time medical school graduate) not realize this?  I've never understood why the act of kissing means she can't frigging breathe - unless she's congested, then I'll give her a pass.

On a more fun note...love the part where Edward loses control.  Until that annoying breathing thing kicks in.  Through the nose, Bella!  Through the nose!

Author's Response:

lol. I've always wondered that too but again this is cannon so I'm going with what SM gave me to work with. My theory though...I think it's more she forgets to breath b/c she gets so caught up. Just a theory but it's the only one that makes any kind of sense to me.

This chapter was fantastic! OMG, i loved it! I loved how Edward didn't wake her, how he just rode out the whole experience w. her. Very well written as always, and it was also just incredibly hot to read about! Great job! Can't wait for more! Have a happy week of writing!

Author's Response:

LOL. Glad you liked it. :)

Thanks for the well wishes. I'll be writting this afternoon so I'll take all the good vibes I can get.

Wow!  It's getting hot in here... :)

Author's Response:

lol. You say that and your only on chapter 7. :)

I like this so far.  The first fic I've ever read, but, I'm anxious to read more so it's great.  I liked that Carlisle was positive, but, careful.  This seems true to the characters which I really like.  Great job!

Author's Response:

Thank you. :) I've tried to keep the characters 'in character'. I love them the way SM created them and wanted to try and do justice to that.

So I'm just curious but what made you pick this fic to read first?