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Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 26
Edward goes through so much for Bella
Author's Response: He really does. I don't think there is anything he wouldn't do for her.
Reviewer: loveAnnie (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 24
Very well done!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: loveAnnie (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 23
Very interesting. I didn't think of this aspect.
LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: loveAnnie (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 22
I really love where you are taking this story. I am also very impressed with your writing. You are conveying Edwards torment in his feelings very well.
With all that being said, I hope you don't take my next thought as being rude. As they certainly aren't meant that way.
Sometimes during the chapters, with Edward calling Bella "Love" so often, it seems to be a bit redundant.
I believe I know the reasoning behind this, but it does tend to stick out in my mind.
Once again, I hope you know that I truely do enjoy your writing. I wouldn't read it if I didn't, and I am tearing through your chapters like water.
Once again, keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. And yes there is a reason; with Edward there is always a reason.
Reviewer: jennlyn78 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 26
Loved it!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 26
Excellence always! I keep wanting to tell Edward that nothing bad wil happen, but then again he hasn't read Breaking Dawn haha :)
Author's Response: LOL. I love it!
Thanks, Eoin. :)
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 26
very intense indeed; looking forward to Seattle; it'll be interesting if edward can use the practise with jasper at all.
interesting chapter good work!
Author's Response: Yes, very. Edward is really pushing himself. He is trying so hard to prepare so he doesn't hurt Bella.
Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 26
As usual a great chapter! I have to say that I'm happy that guilt won out because we got this unexpexted update and it was very nice of you since you did not manage to update last week so...thank you!
Anyway I love Jasper and Edward session even though their so difficult for both of them...Edward fears to hurt Bella and gets frustrated and well poor Jasper has to feel all the emotions increased through his powers...
I really like their brotherly interaction though, and Edward's will to try and do his best...
Your writing is amazing, this story is the missing part at the beginning of Breaking dawn (and I mean it) so I can't wait for Seattle's chapter!!
Author's Response: lol. Well I'm sure your not the only one that's glad I posted an update. I am hoping to get a new chapter up soon. I just have no idea when I'm going to have time to write in the near future.
Thank you. I love that you love this story. :)
Reviewer: popsewini (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 26
luv it
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 26
Seems that's what you get from 100 yrs of repressed sexual frustration! ;D
Very hot and intense immagery as always! Thanks for writing. Still loving the premise.
Author's Response: Yea it is. ;P
Thanks. :)
Reviewer: missloonylovegood (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 26
I guess Edward's gonna have to start practicin' on Bella with lack of clothing. *wiggly eyebrows*
Author's Response: lol. Maybe. :)
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 26
YAY Jasper this chapter and Seattle the next!!! Okay so I really liked this chapter. It was good to see Edward loosen up a bit and talk to someone about all this.
Author's Response: Yeah I know I'm spoiling you. ;)
Jasper and Edward are really bonding over this and it's no wonder. Do experience something so intense and ackward with your brother... It really shows how much love and trust they both have in the other.
Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 26
You know, with Edward's control as it appears in this chapter, Bella was lucky to have escaped with just bruises from the wedding night.
I can't wait to see how this turns out! Although the 'practising' with Jasper is a little weird. Not a bad weird, just odd.
(sorry if this was posted twice)
Author's Response: True but think back to the night she had her sex dream. He was out of control them but was able to pull himself back. What was different? Bella.
Reviewer: yesyov (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 26
OOooooooo!!!!
my mind is running wild
Author's Response: lol. In a good way, I hope. ;)
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 26
it has to be hard for him....but at least he is trying...that's what matters....
can't wait for more
Author's Response: you are so right.
Reviewer: RobyPattinson (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 26
Wow lil' poor Edy is having trouble with his control !!! I love the way you describe that, simply great !!!
Update, Update, Update !!! soon ? (or not ?)
=D
Thank you !
Author's Response: Yea he is. He's getting better though even though it doesn't seem like it and that's because he keeps trying to push the envelope and experience new things. Thing about the first few chapters and how far he's come though.
I don't know when the next update will be. I hoping for next week but I have my doubts.
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 26
As usual, another great chapter. I love Jasper time. He's so sweet to be helping Edward like this, lol. You know it's got to be an uncomfortable situation for them both, and it's really romantic that Edward is so determined to see this through and give Bella what she wants. Really excited about going to Seattle!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
The love both of them have for Bella really comes through in these sessions. It's uncomfortable for both of them but they do it anyway and it's all because of her.
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 26
Great Chapter! I feel sorry for Edward I hope he can work through his issues for Bella.
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: magicdreams (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 26
Ooh type, type, type! Hehe. Enthralling chapter! I hope Edward gets it down pat
Author's Response: lol. Typing itself is not the problem. Alone time is. I can't write with other people around b/c I need to focus and get into the characters. And alone time has been somewhat lacking lately.
Reviewer: cravingtwilight (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 26
*happy sigh* I love your writing so much. this chapter was such a great charcter and storyline build. these one on one sessions between J&E are really important to the story and something that was def. left out in the originial books. you do the concept justice and its wonderfully written. i dont think SM could have made it as intimate or intense as you have. great job, cant wait for seattle!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
I'm so glad you like the sessions. They are very important to the story since Edward and Bella will still have a lot of the boundries he's set up until their night together.
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 26
oh poor edward...I hope you post more soon.
Author's Response: I will try.
Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 26
nice job this was some intense practicing. yay edward for pushing himself. =)
Author's Response: It was. Edward has some things in mind for Seattle and wanted to prepare himself as much as possible.
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 26
Just what I have been waiting for!
Author's Response: lol. Glad I could help.
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 09:00 PM · On: Chapter 26
Oh poor Edward... hes really struggling. I know the end result is perfection but I feel sad for him.
Author's Response: I know. Can you imagine living in his head. ;)
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 26
Jasper must be having such a hard time. He has to push all these emotions towards Edward and then calm him...must be tough. Poor Edward though. He's so frustrated because he feels he's going to kill her. At least he's trying though.
Author's Response: Yes it is hard on both of them. Jasper is also picking up and having to deal with Edward's self loathing b/c of his inability to control himself. But then again, Edward can pick all that up from Jasper's mind. I'd say it's an even tie as to who is suffering most durring these sessions.
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