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Reviewer: LittleCatSoul (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 28

One word, TANTALIZING! This chapter was beautifully written, and kept me glued to the page with every paragraph.

One tiny critique, and maybe it's just the girly in me talkin', but I would've liked a better descrition of thered dress she wa wearing.

But honestly, another terrific chapter. I can barely stand the wait for the next! -LCS-



Author's Response:

lol. Thanks. :)

As for the dress...well that might be b/c I am Bella when it comes to fashion. I could care less. Also, being it's from Edward's POV I'm not sure he would have paid attention beyond the fact that she looked beyond amazing.

 

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 28

That was a really lovely date that they had.  It sounds like Bella really enjoyed herself, and I was as happy as Edward was that she didn't complain about the cost, she just said thank you.

xoxo Sarah



Author's Response:

Yes Edward was very happy about that but it goes back to who she is really. She did agree to this weekend so as long as he doesn't go TOO far, Bella will just go with the flow and enjoy her time alone with him. After all, that is what she really cares about on this weekend.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 28

Squee!  The nexy chapter holds so many promises doesn't it! muah hahaha  I look forward toit!  Bella was inher glory as Edward was in his element!  She accepted everything and he was in awe squeee next chapter has be bouncing so post again real soon!



Author's Response:

lol. Next chapter will be fun. I'm excited about writing it. I feel like it's been in my head forever!

Reviewer: girli565 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 28

I'm loving this update!  i wish my fiance would take me to the symphony!



Author's Response:

lol. Yes well my husband wouldn't take me either. Now a Metallica concert... ;)

Reviewer: scrider (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 28

Really enjoying your story! I love the sweet love you have shown between your Bella and Edward.

 

Keep up the great writing,

 

Sarah



Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

Reviewer: CullenDreamer (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 28

I've finally put my finger on what's been bothering me about this story...it's the way Bella is acting like she's in her 40's and Edward's internal dialog which fosters this.  I know she was more mature than other teens and Renee said she was born 35 yada yada yada, but now Bella actuall IS middle aged.  It doesn't help that Edward keeps calling the 18 year old Bella 'woman' in his thoughts.  She's a teen aged girl for pity's sake.  When he uses the term 'woman' it makes her sound ancient.  And I know he's from a different era but they used 'girl' back then too.  It just bothers me that an 18 year old is being viewed as 'a woman' when she's not old enough to drink and just barely graduated high school. It sounds ooky.



Author's Response:

Everyone has their own view of the characters and this happens to be mine or my interpretation of Edward's. That is all I can offer you. I won't appolize if you don't agree. Fan fiction is great because if you don't like the path an author took with a story or it's characters, you can write your own version.

Reviewer: Pigletsmom (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 28

I love the story! Please, keep up with great writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

Reviewer: rohmareng (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 28

awwwww... I know edwards was positively shocked to see her in the dress, but he should have complimented her... Im surprised to read Alice didnt pick blue :-)

liked it other than that. authentic and true to character as always. way too short. :-)



Author's Response:

Don't worry, he will. He's a bit nervous at the moment. Other things on his mind. ;)

Oh never fear, blue will make an appearence. hehehe

;P you always think it's way too short.

Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 28

Hi there -

I am SO enjoying this story! I didn't comment sooner because I wanted to get to the latest chapter before I did.  I think this fits perfectly with what SM would have had Edward and Bella doing before their wedding and I can't wait to see how you will tease us next - and I hope you keep writing through the wedding... and the honeymoon... and the change... and, well, let's be honest, the 2nd honeymoon! Thanks for sharing your talents with us and putting into words the sense of intoxication I feel from this story (we should all be so lucky to have such a true love in our lives - I hope I'll find my Edward someday!) - thank you!!!!

 

Beth :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

This story will end after their first night on Isle Esme but I am consitering making this a series and continuing it from there. We will have to see how everyone feels about it once we get closer to the end of this one though.

Reviewer: twilightfreak09 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 28

I really am loving this! More more more!

Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2009 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 28

You still have a great knack for leaving the reader wanting more :)

I love how you describe Edward as being completely into whatever Bella is saying, doing, etc.  We all know that is how he feels, but you do a good ojob of putting a face on it :)

I love this chapter!



Author's Response:

lol. Well thank you. :)

He is quite obsessed with her but she is just as obsessed with him.

Reviewer: ArabellaPotter (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 28

Very Good



Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 28

That was a lovely chapter, I don't think I'd have been able to leave the hotel room though ;)



Author's Response:

lol. I'm sure you wouldn't be the only one. :)

Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 28

Great date! It was so romantic and sweet and..totally Edward, he's so thoughtful when it comes to his Bella (worried about freezing her with his touch or heating their room)! *smile*


“I’m not going to listen to Alice though.” Great line, really and I liked very much also the part when Edward compares the night of the prom to this night..lol about moose/mousse!


You write really great romantic parts before more intimate part, because many authors focus just on the latter while you do a great job, combining perfectly both!


Now, I can't wait for their night together..please update soon!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  Yep, totally Edward. *sighs* I can wait to get to the room. ;)

I just saw Bella saying that line. It just seemed so her.

These two have a very romantic relationship and I think so many authors leave that out and jump straight into the physical.

Will try my best. :)

Reviewer: Eiko007 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 28

Hi xD wow it's kool xD well i was so surprised when i saw that number 28 chapters xD jijijiji i just got it xD well thanks for the update and don't worry we're all reading xD well good luck with averything and take care xD byebye



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. Thanks. :)

Reviewer: melbel (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 12

i am absolutly engrosed in your story. Thank You



Author's Response:

Your welcome. :)

Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 28

i really love edward's progress so far in the story and the fluff at dinner and in general between the two was lovely!

i'm interested to see how far he'll push his limits here

as always, i'm looking forward to more! good job!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you are noticing the progress. He really has come a long way.

Thanks. :)

Reviewer: sillygoose85 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 28

hey there i really like your story! i think its going the right way!cant wait to see the next chapter!!:):)):



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Reviewer: sadiejade (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 28

dirrrtier please?



Author's Response:

dirtier?

Reviewer: 4EverBlue21 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:41 PM · On: Chapter 28

Great Job! can't wait for the hotel room :)



Author's Response:

Thanks. Neither can I, :)

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 28

Another satisfying and intriguing chapter.  I really enjoy reading this!

More please.



Author's Response:

Aw thanks. :)

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 28

Great chapter. It was so sweet that Edward did all of that.

The restaurant part was my favorite, though. I loved how he fed her and ordered her dessert. It was funny when she asked him if he liked moose. XD

Please update soon?



Author's Response:

Well Edward is a sweetheart. :)

I am working on the next chapter. It isn't anywhere near done though.

Reviewer: RobyPattinson (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 28

Ok ,not funny .. what's gonna happen in that hotel room ????

We certainly do need an update hahah !! It's great!



Author's Response:

lol. Sorry. I so knew you all were not going to be thrilled that I left it there but next chapter will be good as it will take place entirely in their room.

Reviewer: cravingtwilight (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 28

hi! loved this chapter! was such a fun read! :) dinner was adorable. bella's dress sounded really sexy and beautiful. the symphony was really lovely! looking forward to next chapter! didn't know there was a thread...on my way to say hi now :)



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Even though there is no practice in this chapter it is one of my favorites.

Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 28

Great chapter! They're so cute together. Its so sweet when they have little moments when they just focus on each other. Like at dinner when he was sharing his food or when Bella told him thank you.



Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

They really are. And Edward is such a romantic when it comes to Bella.

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