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Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 29

great job...ud soon..



Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 29

Great update.  He is gaining a lot of control with her!



Author's Response:

Yes he is, little by little. :)

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 29

YAY!!!!!!!!!  So romantic!  I could just about feel the sexual tension!  GREAT CHAPTER!  Very tasteful!



Author's Response:

Aw thanks. :) These two LIVE the meaning of sexual tension.

Reviewer: Unfable (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 29

Great chapter. I love the control Edward seems to be building and him touching her like that. I wished it never ended. Please update soon, this is wonderful.



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

His control and trust in himself are growing nicely. He is still scared and of course he would be but he's beyond thinking this just isn't possible anymore; he wants this too.,

Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 29

OK  TO much WIllpower!  GReat Chapter!



Author's Response:

LOL. Well that IS Edward for you.

Thanks. :)

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 29

Squee!!!  OMG That got so close wow darn you and sticking with SM original no sex until you say I Do!  Look forward to fun with Alice Post again soon!



Author's Response:

LOL. Got your hopes up there for a minute didn't I? ;)

Reviewer: kim1974a (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 29

Great Job, Very Sweet and very erotic all at the same time.

Kudos to you!



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Who says non sex can't be erotic. ;)

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 29

It may have been a challenge to write. I however, thought it was a brillant chapter to read. I'm excited as always to read more.

Brie,



Author's Response:

Thanks Brie. :)

Reviewer: jennylbayliss (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 28

really good, can't wait for the next chapters, but they are moving kind of slow aren't they?  please post more!



Author's Response:

Thank you. And yes it is moving a little slower than I'd like as far as posting but it can't be helped. RL demands more of my time than I like lately and that has to take priority of my story. I'm hoping to have another chapter finished soon.

Reviewer: Melinda the Proud Bookworm (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 23

I forgot to review a few chapters earlier.  I think Carslile's explanation for venom/semen is the best I've ever heard.  I read stories all the time where comdoms are required but that never made sense.  Great story. 



Author's Response:

Thank you. This explaination just sort of popped into my mind when I started thinking about the technicallities of the situation. It just made sense with the world SM created. As for the condoms...well the only way that makes sense to me is if you're taking your que from the contacts Bella wore when coming face to face with Charlie.

Reviewer: EllieCullen (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 21

EDWARD'S SEX BOOKS OF COURSE!!!!



Author's Response:

LOL!

Reviewer: twilightfreak09 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 4

U know I was re reading this chapter and I think that when u are done with this fic u should write an alice/jasper fic! Edward and bella are without a doubt my favorite twilight couple, but I also LOVE alice and jasper! I think u could write a fic about them and capture them beautifully! If anyone else agrees please speak up!!!!!

Author's Response:

Hm. I've never thought about writing an Alice/Jasper fic. Can't say I never would but... It is something to think about.

Reviewer: tante88 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 28

I love this story!!!!!!! I was reading it at work and its managed to keep me busy for quite some time which is great...  I'm waiting for any other chapters which I hope is very very soon



Author's Response:

lol. Thanks. Nice to know I was able to make your work day go by faster. ;)

Reviewer: kschelte (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 28

Dang you tease...Can't wait for the next update!!



Author's Response:

LOL. I'd say I'm sorry, but I'm not. ;)

Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 28

I loved the chapter what more can I say. I believe my favorite part was the dinner scene with the two of them. As always I'm excited to read the next chapter.

Brie,

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Tainted. :)

Still working on the next chapter. I'm hoping to have it up sometime next week but we will see.

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 12

so please keep in mind that i'm probably not the only person re-reading, so your reads will be higher than the reviews. also, i can't speak for anyone else, but often when i really love a story, i just want to get to the next chapter asap.



Author's Response:

lol. That is very true. You get so caught up in the story line that you just have to hurry up and see what's next. :)

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 7

i'm quite aware that author's enjoy reading reviews; it must be very frustrating to see that so many people have read the story and not receive any comments. first, i want to let you know that i truly enjoy your writing. as a matter of fact, i originally found this story on archives, but looked for it immediately once i came upon this site. your story is one of the first fanfics i ever read. second, although i have you listed as one of my favorites, i have not received notices that there were updates, so i've missed a few chapters. since it's been awhile i am re-reading so your read numbers will go up, but not necessarily the number of reviews.



Author's Response:

lol. That we do although it is a fact that most people do not leave them. Someone told me once you can usually expect one review for every 100 readers and I've found that to be pretty close to the truth.

Not sure why if you had me listed on your favorites you didn't get notified. Hopefully you are not too far behind and can catch up quickly. And I re-read my favorite fics too. ;)

Reviewer: twilightfreak09 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 28

Ok. I just have to say that I LIKE the fact that Edward thinks of Bella as a woman. I mean if she was just another silly little girl he wouldn't be in love with her. He is, afterall, over 100 years old himself. And Bella is mature enough to be considered a woman. She has taken care of her mom all her life and then when she moved to forks she took care of Charlie. She's about to be married and she's about to give up her human life to become immortal. Those are some pretty big decisions she's had to make. I'm sorry. This just bothers me because when I was 18 I was living on my own going to college full time and working two jobs. I was as much a woman then as I am now at 24. Age is just a number.

Author's Response:

Yes what she is doing, the decisions she is making are definately not small ones. I wasn't in quite the same boat as you at 18 but I was extremely grown up for my age and didn't act like a typical 18 year old either so it's pretty easy for me to relate to Bella on that front as well. Our experiences shape us and living with her mom definately forced Bella into making decisions effectively. With Charlie it was a bit different. I think she moved into her role with him b/c it was comfortable, it was what she knew from being with her mom.

Reviewer: cece (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 28

Loved it! I am a little bummed we didnt make it back to the hotel with them, but you are right Im now totally excited for the next chapter. I love how you make Bella still react to the gifts but she reigns it in for Edward... And then of course his reaction to that. Like I said, I loved it!!



Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

Originally I'd planned to take them back to the hotel but I have quite a lot planned for that so I thought it would work better as a separate chapter; don't want to rush it after all. ;)

Bella is really making an effort here to accept his gifts graciously; afterall she did agree to the weekend.  

Reviewer: Emily Lee (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

Well, you have "dazzled" me! I am so happy I found this! You have done an amazing job capturing Bella, Edward and the Cullens. I CAN NOT WAIT until you post the next chapter. Thank you!



Author's Response:

Aw thank you. Happy to hear I "dazzled" you. ;)

Reviewer: sandrajestrella (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 28

your stories are absolutely greats, i just love the natural way you put things, so please, please, please...dont stop writing!! and put up the next chapter soon!...I cant wait!



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Don't worry, I'm not stopping. RL has just been taking more time than in the past so I haven't had as much time to write. I don't abandon my fics though once I start them.

Reviewer: sistergrimm (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 28

great job with this story! What i really like about it is that you capured the anxiety and love that edward is feeling for bella. you also succesfully conveyed to the reader intimate moments between the characters without making the reader feel embarrassed or weird about it. It seemed natural when it was bellas time of the month and edward helped her out like that. again, great job-s.g

Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

I love Edward and the love he has for Bella. When reading Twilight, giving that it is from Bella's POV, I always felt she minimized his struggle somewhat since there was really no way for her to understand it.

Chapter 15 was one of my favorites. ;)

Reviewer: CullenDreamer (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 28

"Everyone has their own view of the characters and this happens to be mine or my interpretation of Edward's. That is all I can offer you. I won't appolize if you don't agree. Fan fiction is great because if you don't like the path an author took with a story or it's characters, you can write your own version."

Well, I neither expected or wanted an apology, not sure why that came up.  And yes, fan fiction is great because if you something doesn't add up with the path an author takes with a story or its characters, you can tell them with this handy little Review feature - unlike in the world of the published book where you often never know if your letter ever reaches the author.  But saying a reader who disagrees with the plot direction or the OOC-ness of a story can just 'write their own' is a bit dismissive.  Just because a reader questions something in a story doesn't mean they are wrong or have to go write their own.

Reviewer: singingkat (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 28

I've just spent the past few days reading the whole fic, and I've really enjoyed it!  I like how you're keeping canon in mind, and this fits nicely as a prequel to some of the events in breaking dawn without being unrealistic.  can't wait for more :)



Author's Response:

So happy to have you on board. :)

 

Reviewer: iiheartec (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 28

awesome story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

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