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Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 25

Those Cullens sure are pushy and nosey!! I know they are just thrilled tod death (pardon the pun) for Edward that he's found the love of his eternal life and the way you are handling their efforts of exploration without doing the deed is pretty wonderful. Thank you for that. It makes it that much more exciting and erotic.



Author's Response:

lol. Yes they can be. Especially Alice and Emmett.

I'm glad you said that. Most people are happy to have this more realistic version of events but I've had a few want me to push it farther. I have a very real boundry in my head that I'm not crossing though until the first night on the island so not to worry. :)

Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 24

He's stronger than he thought! ha, ha. Edward is such an innocent, it seems to me, and that coupled with the fact that he knows he could, in effect, kill her in his throws of passion, must be horrifiying to him. Very good writing, I'm loving it and can't leave my computer at all until this is finished!! Yet I don't want it to end yet! Bravo.



Author's Response:

That he is. He loves her way too much to cause her harm. Doesn't mean he'll stop worrying though.

Well I can't say I don't love to hear that you can't stop reading it. :)

Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 22

Well Bella and Edward may be handling these practice sessions well, but that's not the case with me! LOL. Great sexy writing.



Author's Response:

lol. Having a bit of trouble are we? ;)

Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 18

I sure hope we are going to Seattle after all, and soon.  Please don't disappoint me! LOL.

I love all these "practice sessions". Sigh...



Author's Response:

lol. We do get to Seattle but it does take a while. For those who are current with the story, we are there now.

Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 12

Beautiful chapter. The last three lines brought tears to my eyes. Very moving. Thank you. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 29

I'm addicted to this story! Amazing... I just wish you were able to update sooner. Waiting for the next chapter is painful.

Author's Response:

lol. Sorry. If it makes you feel any better the next chapter has been submitted for validation so hopefully it will be up here anytime.

Reviewer: kkendall (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 29

its getting so good! Thank you!



Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

Reviewer: kkendall (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 24

i'm loving this. just enough sex to be interesting without being raunchy.



Author's Response:

lol. That's a good way to put it. Thanks. :)

Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 29

Amazing storyline. I like it that you're taking it slower and keeping close to the book, yet still giving us a little bit of "action" lol

keep it up! cant wait to read what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I know the slower pace is unusal for fics of this sort but this is how I view Edward. He isn't the impulsive type and we are after all in his mind. ;)

I'm working on the next chapter as we speak so hopefully I will have it to my beta in the next day or so. :)

Reviewer: clark21412 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 29

Thank you for this story - I'm enjoying it immensely!  I like that the pace is slower, and that you're sticking to the actual plot of the books.  Thanks again!



Author's Response:

Your welcome. :)

Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 29

Edward's making a lot of progress!  I'm proud of him, especially for learning to trust Bella in this area of their life together.  It wasn't easy for him, though.  I could tell by his thoughts whenever Bella got close to his pajamas.  But he did trust Bella and she more than earned his trust, so maybe next time will be less stressful to him.  He won't have to worry about Bella so much and can concentrate on his reactions and his control of them.

You did a good job with this chapter!



Author's Response:

He really is!

And no it wasn't easy. Building that trust with Bella will help greatly but his strength is always going to concern him for obvious reasons.

Thanks. :)

Reviewer: showme8900 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 29

omggggggggggg sooooooooooo goooooooooooooooood

 

phewww i'm seriously hot and bothered LOL



Author's Response:

lol. Thanks.

Do you need a cold shower? ;)

Reviewer: AliKatt (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 29

Really great chapter and really hot too! I like the way this is its own story and not just a retaling of their wedding night...did that make sence? Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more.  THX



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

And yes that does make sense. I've had a few people tell me this is what they hoped BD would be but wasn't. I can't say I disagree with that. To me the first three books were all about their relationship and then BD just kind of went off on a tangent.

Reviewer: Fanfickled (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 29

I would just like to thank you for this amazing story.  I think the effort you put into it obviously shows by the fantastic chapters you produce.

 

Thankyou

Lesley xx



Author's Response:

Aw well thank you, and you are very welcome. I do enjoy writing and being able to put my imagination to good use. :)

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 29

Very good!  Even the most chaste of us can get caught up in the moment.  I really like how you are humanizing Edward!



Author's Response:

Thanks Eoin.

Bella really does bring out that seventeen year old in him. Thank goodness for all those decades of honing his self control. ;)

Reviewer: baldtomato (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 29

aww, i hope Edward will change his mind and join them for the day time part. I don't really wanna read a whole chapter's worth of shopping details, or any other activity, without Edward in it...



Author's Response:

This story is all from Edward's POV so we won't be going shopping with them. I have something planned for him, don't worry. :)

Reviewer: frostbitten (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 29

OMG!!!! you have to keep writing this story!!! i waited until i got to the last chapter posted before i wrote anything. I LOVE IT!!! ALL OF IT!!! I NEED MORE!!!! LOL!!!! i'm so jealous of Bella ;-)



Author's Response:

lol. Don't worry, I'm not going anywhere.

I'll have more up hopefully next week but I should also be posting a teaser for next chapter on the Twilighted forum thread if you want to drop by and say hi. :)

 

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 29

I really felt Edward's conflict, although if I were him, I probably wouldn't have stopped.  But then again, Edward has supernatural self control, lol. 

xoxo Sarah



Author's Response:

True, very true. lol.

Reviewer: twilightfreak09 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 29

Your best chapter yet! Yay!!! More more more! And I agree with the person who posted about feeling the sexual frustration! As I was reading this, I was thinking that if I was bella I would just rip edward's clothes off right then and there! But that's just my edward obsession talking. I'm so glad u are keeping this canon! I like the slow pace because it means that the story is kept true and in character. You are so awesome! Please continue.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

And trust me, I am feeling the sexual frustration while I'm writing it. You have no idea how much I wanted Edward's hand to continue upward and shred her panties. lol.

I think you make a good point though. Everyone comments on Edward's self control but Bella isn't too shabby in that department either. And most of us here have an Edward obsession so... ;)

Reviewer: TemptingFruit (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 29

This is the first piece I've selected (being newly joined) from Twilighted, and I must say that if half the stories are of this quality then I'm very glad that I joined! 

I'm very excited to read a more detailed version of the events on Isle Esme!  I'm sure I wasn't the only frustrated fan who got to "... the next morning there were feathers everywhere" ..... WTF! I know the books were writen for young adults, but really? to skip the whole night? 

I'm really enjoying your writing.  You're doing your best to keep true to the characters and I like that.  My favourite line (so far) is, "Do you like mousse?" I laughed right out loud!  That was such a Bella thing to say!  I could just picture Kristen Stewart gazing at him from across the table, eyebrow cocked.

One thing that is bothering me is the repeating "What are you thinking?"  Edward has many years of language and vocabulary to draw from and I don't think he'd repeat the same question so many times in the same way. 

Great job!  Keep writing! I can't wait for them to get to the island!



Author's Response:

Thank you and yes there are some awsome fics here at Twilighted. I think you will be very pleased you joined.

I was in the same boat as you'll find were a lot of others with the version of Isle Esme we received in BD. There are a lot of stories on this site dealing with both their wedding night as well as the time leading up to it as this one does. I haven't found one though, outside on my own, that sticks to cannon and Edward's boundries.

"Do you like mousse?" was purely spontanious. When I came to writting the ordering of desert it just came to me. That isn't unsually though. I very rarely write from an outline.

True. That would be one of the downsides to fan fiction. Because chapters are posted as they are written verses an entire story that has been edited as a whole, little things like that get lost in the mix. There would be no way for authors to re-read every chapter they've written before writing/posting a new one. Well I guess there could but people would be waiting a really long time between chapters.  

Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 29

Amazing…simply amazing..once again you managed to express Edward’s complex internal struggle.


I loved that he let Bella take the initiative, showing his complete trust in her and knowing that she would not overstep the rules..even if I’m a bit shocked that he asked Bella boldly to touch him..anyway it was so intimate, passionate and sweet..just so right! *smile* Oh, and at the beginning I loved when Bella put her hand on Edward’s chest right where is heart is, that reminded me of Breaking dawn when the newly weds are in the water on island Esme and she does the same gesture..really sweet..


I read you’re AN, Bella’s temper will explode for sure before the wedding with her ‘before’ car and her new credit card..Edward will have to use all his charm to dazzle her into accepting them!!


I just can’t wait to read what will Edward do the next day, when Bella is being kidnapped (and probably corrupted!!) by his lovely sister!!


Please update soon!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

This chapter was so huge for Edward. Giving Bella that control was not easy. I don't think there was really any other way for him to accomplish his goal other than just come out and ask her. Sure they could have began making out and he could have directed her hands or something but it wouldn't have been the same. He knew this would be difficult and needed to concentrate; if his lips and hands were on her that wasn't going to happen.

The car has actually already happened. In the saga it makes it sound like he gave it to her shortly after their engagement so that would have been June, maybe first part of July. The first chapter of this story was mid July.

lol. I like the way you put that, 'corrupted by his lovely sister'. :)

Reviewer: kcat0109 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 29

This story is very well written! Kudos! I read quite a bit and so far this story is one of the best stories out there. I was sometimes frustrated with the pace but that made it all the better if you get m drift! Please keep it up i will be looking forward to an update!

Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

And yes I totally understand about the pacing. lol. Some of that is totally intentional. Although I don't tend to rush my fics, Edward's personality fits this pacing.

Reviewer: gangral (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 12

Ok, I'm a lurker, guilted into it.  :)  Seriously, I am enjoying the story, but wish the chapters were a little longer.  I'll try to be a better reader and leave reviews more often.



Author's Response:

lol. Guilted into it? Well I'm happy you decided to leave a review. Unfortunately RL doesn't lend me to longer chapters if I want to get updates posted regularly. There should be a few longer chapters coming up though as we move closer to the wedding.

Reviewer: Alis (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 29

Your second fic ever? Wow! Amazing.

I agree that Bella makes a decision and sticks to it, as you said in the author's note. There's only so much protesting about money one can really take, in any case.

Looking forward to the rest of the story... :]



Author's Response:

Yep. Well I started number 2 and 3 at the same time but you get the general concept. Plus I don't tend to write short stuff. My first story was 120,000 words and 65 chapters. Not small by any means of the imagination.

Exactly. Plus in nine days it will be her money too although she won't see it that way.

Reviewer: jennlyn78 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 29

So HOT!!! can't wait for the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

lol. Thanks. :)

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