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Reviewer: twilightfreak09 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 30
Ooooo!! What's in the bag?! What's in the bag?! What's in the bag?! One week left huh? I feel like Bella. I'm gonna spontaneously combust! You and your darn cliffhangers....
Author's Response: lol. I've got to keep you coming back for more don't I? ;)
Your not the only one that feels like Bella. Edward is going stir crazy as well. He just hides it better.
And for a hint as to next chapter make sure to stop by the thread in a few days.
Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 30
Oh gosh poor Bella!I would be dying of embarrassment too if I were her!!
I can't believe Alice told her..I mean I just hope that somehow during shopping it came out not that she purposefully told her about the smell..she surely knows how easily Bella is embarrassed!
Poor Edward too..being with Bella when she dreams about them is really getting difficult for him..but I'm happy that he's becoming more hopeful about their wedding night!
So what has Edward planned for the night?And the famous pink bag Alice gave to Bella..what's in there?? (Although I'm a bit afraid to know, since Alice was amused about it while Bella was as red as a lobster!!)
Please update soon!!
Oh, nice new banner..I like it, but also the old one was really nice in my opinion..!
Author's Response: Yeah I wouldn't want to be where Bella is at the moment. Well okay, being that she's in Edward's arms I would but the other thing...not so much. ;)
Drop by the thread, I've given a little explaination about the Alice/Bella conversation and what happened.
It really is getting difficult for Edward. He wants her physically just as much as she wants him but she is getting at least some release and he is not. If you notice, Edward tends to go back and forth with his optimism about their wedding night.
All I have to say about next chapter is that you have to come visit the thread in a few days. I'll have the teaser up then. :)
I liked the old banner too. I was one of the first people Anne Cullen made a banner for and she offered to make a new one for me.
Reviewer: kim1974a (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 30
So embarrasing for Bella, I'm sure Edward will come up with something.
Author's Response: Bella is very practicial. She wants answers. And although she is embarressed, she is also a little hurt by Edward's silence.
Reviewer: WritersBlock (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 2
I think it was a very good set up. I can't wait to see what Jasper and Emmett say. Edward's frustration seems quite appropriate and it is interesting to see the take on what he does to prepare for his wedding night.
Author's Response: Welcome new reader. :) Nice to hear you like it so far. I've tried to keep as close to cannon as possible with this story so I hope you continue to enjoy it.
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 30
oooh great chapter. Poor Bella. Go ahead Edward, make everything better = )
Like the new banner too = )
Author's Response: hehehe. You know he will. :)
Anne Cullen is a very talented lady.
Reviewer: bb123 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 30
That was awesome write more.....
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: msutton1977 (Anonymous) · Date: July 21, 2009 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 30
Oh, very nice, very nice indeed
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: Moody One (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 30
OMG! ALICE! Well at least she knows now. Eddie boy will make it all better. ; )
Author's Response: lol. That she does.
Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:28 AM · On: Chapter 30
ohhhhhhhhhh someones got some 'splanin to do!
well sorta...
great chapter by the way, your edward is always very well written! keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 30
oh shit....alice is the little devil.
can't wait for more
Author's Response: lol. Yes, well Edward isn't real happy with her right now.
Reviewer: ladyb25 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 30
Okay so I've just stayed up super super late, it's 3am where I am because I found your story a few hours ago and could not stop reading it. It's ridiculously perfect and amazing!!!!! I can't wait till you update next, this seriously helps fill my void now that Im done with the whole saga. your writing style is awesome!!!!! Update soon!!!!!!
Author's Response: lol. Well thank you and I know how you feel. I've done that whole 3am thing a few times. In fact, when I read Midnight Sun I couldn't put it down and ended up being awake for 36 hours straight. I should have a teaser up on the story thread over on the forum in a few days and then the next chapter will hopefully be posted next week. :)
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 30
Poor Bella, how embarrassing!
Author's Response: very
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 30
WTF? Her arousal? Her menstrual cycle? Her arm pits? What smell is she referring to? Why did Alice upset Bella like this? GAH!
Author's Response: Her arousal. Remember a few chapters back after they had their oral sex discussion and she rubbed herself against him to bring herself to climax?
Reviewer: sistergrimm (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 30
hahaha. aww, poor bella!! that was cute! keep writing!
Author's Response: lol. Thanks. :)
Reviewer: showme8900 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 30
OH YOU SLY GIRL!
what a teaser! you just know she got some lingerie. damn you!
I need some sexin' LOL. Can't wait til the next installment. I love your story so much!
Author's Response: lol. Well I've been called a tease many times. :)
Reviewer: AliKatt (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 30
I would love to read an outtake of that conversation...lmao!
Author's Response: lol. I'm sure you're not the only one. I did post something over on the thread in way of explaination though.
Reviewer: AliKatt (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 30
Great chapter as always. Looking forward to see what Edward took 4 hours out to prepair for tonight, but Bella might have other plans. I would just die if I was her. THX
Author's Response: lol. Thank you. :)
Yeah I would soooo not want to be in Bella's shoes right now.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 30
Great chapter!
Poor Bella. I feel so bad for her. :(
Please update soon?
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
I should have a teaser up for next chapter by the end of the week and hopefully the new chapter ill be up next week some time.
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 30
ok. now you've got me curious. UPDATE!! lol
Author's Response: lol. curious is good. :)
Reviewer: Undercover (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 30
How rotten of Alice! Poor Bella.
Author's Response: I'm going to write a bit of an explaination for everyone regarding Bella and Alice's day over on the thread. I've had several people ask.
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 30
Poor, Bella! Makes me glad not to still be a teenager!
Nicely done!
(Poor Eddie, too! Restraint sucks for both of them!) :)
Love wicked little Alice too. She's practically my hero! *mwaha*
Eager for more as always. Hope time and muse power reaches you in copious quantities! :D
Author's Response: You and me both!
Thank you. :)
Yes I've been called a tease more than once. ;)
Alice is great even when she's being a royal pain.
Thank you, thank you. :)
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 30
Okay, so Edward really does have the right to take a few body parts away from Alice! They were having such a lovely time-what was she thinking?!!! Of course, Edward wouldn't want to embarass Bella due to something that was naturally human! How will he salvage the weekend?
Author's Response: Ah Alice. Yes well I struggled with this chapter a little because this story is only in Edward's POV and so no one got to see exactly what happened between Alice and Bella. I've had a few people ask me about this so I think I'll post something over on the thread in way of explaination to all.
As for salvaging the weekend... Bella can never stay mad at Edward for long as we all know.
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 30
well I wonder how in the hell her and Alice got on that subject!?!?!?!
Author's Response: lol. I think you'll be able to figure that one out once you find out what's in the bag. ;)
Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 30
Poor Bella! Damn vampires! Gotta love the angst - I never get tired of it! I enjoyed the chapter and can't WAIT for the next one! :-)
Author's Response: lol. Thanks. :)
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 30
Oh Alice, don't you know our Bella is a shy little thing?
And to embarrass her like that...not a very friendly thing to do. Really!
Poor Edward...think someone needs to tell him that a "release" will be good for him and will keep him from losing complete control...maybe Jasper? I can't see Emmett doing it without completely irritating Edward...
Ready for more when you have it...
Author's Response: Alice doesn't exactly take hints very well. Especially if it doesn't fall into her "plan".
It wouldn't be a bad idea for Edward, you are right. But he is old fashioned, which is one of the reasons we love him so much.
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