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Reviewer: Brandywyn1220 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 12

The ending was so great.  I almost cried when Edward actually asked Carlisle to stand up for him, and Carlisle accepted.  It was a very sweet moment.  Short and simple, but still filled with the respect and love the two have for each other as father and son.



Author's Response:

I have a lot of favorite moments in this story and this is one of them. Carlisle and Edward have a special relationship and it really comes through here.

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 30

Well, kudos to Edward for pulling away and leaving the room.  What perfect self control he has!

I know that had to be maddeningly embarrassing to Bella, but it was maddeningly funny to me about her realizing everyone cna 'smell' her. 

Good one of course and I suspect Edward is overreacting as usual.  We'll see...



Author's Response:

Yep, perfect self control. It's that same self control that drives Bella nuts!

Well it was definately ackward but that usually does have a comic element to it. ;)

Reviewer: Fanfickled (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 30

Edward is always the gentleman isn't he......he's just wonderful! I just love the way he battles himself time and time again for the sake of his "love". It's just so beautiful to read.

I do think that Bella should have been told about the scent.....but would it have been more acceptable coming from Edward? Umm...not too sure... best friend or her beloved? How is he going to make this better for Bella?

A wonderful story!

XX

 



Author's Response:

He is a gentleman to the end.

Next chapter will answer the reason why Edward didn't say anything. As for Alice. You may want to stop by the Perspective thread. I have a little bit of an explaination to that.

Thanks. :)

Reviewer: Bellward (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 30

I have to admit that has to be pretty embarressing for Bella. To have all the Cullens  be unavoidably aware of something so personal. Gah!



Author's Response:

Definately.

Reviewer: baldtomato (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 30

awww poor Bellie!   nice new banner you got, i like it!



Author's Response:

Thanks you.

And Anne Cullen is amazing with her banners, isn't she. :)

Reviewer: madamkrust (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 30

aaahhhh Im loving it. More cullen interaction especially some teasing from Emmett? Great work!



Author's Response:

Thanks. And don't worry. Emmett will get some comments in. You know he's not going to allow such a good oppertunity as Edward being alone in a hotel all weekend with Bella to go unaddressed. ;)

Reviewer: NKubie (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 30

Good ending to the chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

Reviewer: brandella14 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 30

Another good chapter. The leading up to their 1st time is very entertaining. You are very talented and amazingly descriptive and I absolutly love your 4 play scenes. I can only imagine how your lemons will be and I'm very excited knowing it won't be too much longer. Great job.
brandella14

Author's Response:

lol. Thank you. I have to say writing this story has given a whole new to writing foreplay for me. I think their frustration comes out in the chapters because I feel it too while writing. Getting to the actual lemon will be a welcome relief not only for these two kids but for me as well. ;)

Reviewer: dioli17 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 1

thi is so awsome, you rock



Author's Response:

lol. Thanks. :)

Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 30

I am desperately awaiting more! You've got me hooked; I love how you write so true and close to character as possible. Please hurry with the next chapter!!



Author's Response:

lol. Thanks and welcome to the addiction. ;)

Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 30

Je TUERAIS Alice. Ou je tuerais Edouard si j'étais Bella. Grrrrrrrr ..... Bien, mettez à jour bientôt ! ! ! !

Translation from French to English:

I would KILL Alice. Or I would kill Edward if I was Bella. Grrrrrrrr..... Well, Update soon!!!!



Author's Response:

lol. Thank you for the translation. I only got about half of it.

I'm hoping to get this next chapter up a little sooner.

Reviewer: WritersBlock (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 30

First, I was surprised that Edward didn't tell Bella to take a shower before going to the Cullen residence.

Second, I am surprised to find that Alice told her about them "smelling" her.

I can't wait to see where this leads though.

I kinda wish that you could alter the story for them NOT to wait.  But I think it adds to the excitement of how they do stop.

Thanks for writing such a GREAT story...don't stop now...

 



Author's Response:

Hopefully that will be explained next chapter.

I kind of answered this on the thread so you might want to check it out.

Have I ever steered you wrong? ;)

Yea I know. I've been called a tease more than once for getting things all heated up and then making them stop. lol.

Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 30

I really wanted to tell Alice to "Go Away" and leave them alone this weekend! I want issue!! lol. Can't wait for the next chapters E. Very good.



Author's Response:

trust me Edward did too. lol.

Thanks. :)

Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 30

cant believe she didnt have a shower whether they could smell her or not, i mean cmon she had to be wet with the previous nights activities anyway let alone the dream haha i mean she's not a vampire yet hahaha



Author's Response:

lol. You're the second person that brought that up. And yes she would be wet to some degree but everyone is different and Edward did help with that a little. ;) Also, I'm imaginine actually having him there participating would make her moisture flow more than her dreaming of him. This is also quite new for her. She may have thought wipping up in the bathroom was enough.

Reviewer: wideyess (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 30

I love your story so much. It's so beautiful. I just wish your chapters weren't so short. It a killer waiting for each one, only to have it end to soon, when I'm just getting into it. :(



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm not sure what it is, but I've never been one to write long chapters no matter what the story. I'm going to try and get the next one out a little sooner though.

Reviewer: Phae (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 30

Oh dear, Edward is going to have to do some fast talking.  Perhaps the surprise he's done for Bella would be a good distraction??



Author's Response:

He is going to have to come up with something fast and Bella has gotten really good at reading him lately so he is going to have to be honest.

Maybe. ;)

Reviewer: Unfable (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 30

Awesome chapter just like them all. Every time I read them I feel like something is going to happen that I will expect and then nope something completely different, which I like. Keeps me on my toes and enjoying it even more. I am looking forward to more Edward with no control since that is very sexy and all haha, but just more Edward/Bella would be nice alone xD



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad even with a cannon story I'm able to throw a few twists in there to keep things intereresting. I like to keep my readers guessing. :)

Reviewer: Jensy (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 30

Hi Eki!

I'm guessing that some sexy lingerie pieces are in the bag? LOL Poor Bella. If she only knew how Edward is listening in to her sleeptalking and sex dreams, she'd be embarrassed, but probably not as mortified about his whole family knowing. I hope she figures out that they can smell any woman--not just her.

Anne Cullen is very talented--I think I liked her first banner even better since it had an old-world feel to it but this one is great too. It surprised me to see a new banner!



Author's Response:

You made it! :)

I'm sure it won't take you long to figure out the pink bag. lol. And your right, she'd be embarressed about Edward hearing her sex dreams but not nearly what she's experencing now.

She is. I like both of the banners.

Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 28

Awww. And hey!! You have an account here too!!! I rad this story at TA. Not many people reviewthere. Well, I can't wait to read the rest! :D



Author's Response:

lol. Yeah I do. I actually started posting the story here first. Twilighted has a much bigger following of readers I think too so that helps with reviews. :)

Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 15

lol....edward is such a gentleman! hes going to loose his mind when he finaly gets some action..lol



Author's Response:

Yeah he really is. Sex is definately going to be an experience for him.

Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 14 (J)

its nice that you touched on bella haveing a pierod...thats something stephany never did. I alwase wonderd how they delt with that little...problum :) thanks



Author's Response:

I touch on a few things in this SM never did. Of course this is my interpritation but it is within the guidelines given in the saga. I do wish SM would have addressed the period issue though considering its direct implications.

Reviewer: connmann54 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 30

Aww, Bella must be so embarassed. great chapter, can'twait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Oh she is.

Thanks. :)

Reviewer: yameen (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 12

i like how your wrighting edward keep it up



Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

Reviewer: miss-moon123 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 30

Please update soon..:) What a cliffhanger.. :D



Author's Response:

lol. Thanks. :)

Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 30

Oh poor bella.... she must be embararrassed.   What is in the bag?

Update soon



Author's Response:

Oh she is. She's also a little hurt b/c Edward didn't say anything to her.

I'm reminding everyone who wants some info on next chapter to stop by the thread in a few days. :)

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