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Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
i thought edward's surprise would include something more than massage.. hehe.. but it was altogether still good. i mean, just goes to show how thoughtful edward is. but still, i am a little worried that the honeymoon is only 8days away and he could only manage so much. which brings to your question about the pacing of the story. i would love for it to be the wedding already if only because i want to see edward in action already! haha.. but realistically speaking, given how edward still is at this point in time in this story, i think that's not okay. i mean, look at him on this chapter. he still has a super hard time and they're not really doing anything..i mean kissing. that's it. he rarely even lets his tongue dart out to taste any part of bella. i guess we would be surprised with the difference if edward suddenly manages to do so well on his honeymoon. am i making sense? haha.. it's just that, i feel like edwrad still has a long way to go despite his improvements and no offense but i consider the improvements small really. i mean, unless of course something BIG would happen on their remaining days in seattle. then it would be easy to assume that he really could manage being intimate with bella already. =)
Author's Response: Don't worry, Edward is worried too. The problem is, he's a gentelman and will only go so far before they are married since they have both agreed to wait. He does have a big hurdle to go through still and Jasper is going to have to help him with tht since he won't allow Bella to. Also, he is still VERY scared on their first night together and he does hurt her, which is what he has feared the entire time.
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
ill take a massage from edward anyday
Author's Response: lol. I think there would be a line. :)
Reviewer: concreteayngel (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
speed it up!
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
Reviewer: nothing2do (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
Oh I definitely want details, no glossing over the good stuff :) Congrats and keep up the great work!!!
Author's Response: lol. Thanks. :)
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
Loved the chapter. as for the pace, maybe somewhere in between this one and going faster. I dunno... maybe give details of what's happening, but not too many.
Author's Response: lol. A happy medium hun?
Thanks. :)
Reviewer: twilightfreak09 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
Oh I hate it that u are giving us that option! On one hand I want u to speed up the pace so we can get to the honeymoon but on the other that just means that the story will be over and I do NOT want it to end! So I say surprise us! Whatever u decide to do will be great anyway!
This was a great chapter. Makes me want to go buy some strawberry massage oil. Hehe! So when are they gonna see Alice again? Is Edward still gonna kill her or did those shorts make everything all better?
Author's Response: lol. Sorry. Yeah it is a catch 22 since this story will end after their first night together on the island. So the faster we get there, the fast it's over.
I thought the strawberry massage oil was a nice touch. :)
And Alice will appear in the next chapter. As for the rest...well I think the shorts helped. ;)
Reviewer: ladyb25 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
Great chapter!!!! I am enjoying the speed of this story but either way, Im sure itll be great!
Author's Response: Thanks. I appreciate the imput. :)
Reviewer: aylah50 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
Great chapter! On the chapter end notes - it's hard to say. I guess it depends on what you'd be glossing over, but we've had 31 chapters of foreplay here. I wouldn't mind speeding it up a bit! :)
Author's Response: Thanks I will keep that in mind. And yes, we have had 31 chapters of foreplay. It's no wonder they had a great first night on the island with all that build up. ;)
Reviewer: allisonlovestwilight (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 31 - (J)
Keep the same. I like details :]
Author's Response: Thanks. :) So do I. I think it's very Edward.
Reviewer: ds862 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 30
Poor Bella, having a sex-talk-constipated boy for a mate! lol You'd think in 100 years and hearing everyone's dirtiest thoughts he'd become less of a tightwad! lol ..Of course, he wouldn't be Edward if he did... Excellent!
Author's Response: lol. You are so right. He just wouldn't be Edward if the sex talk just flowed from his lips.
Thanks. :)
Reviewer: Mels78 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 30
Very good. I like how this story is going and I think it is a reasonable take on how the characters would have acted in this situation. Please update soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks. :) The next chapter is in the que waiting for validation so hopefully it will be up soon. If you haven't been on the thread yet, you might want to check out the teaser for next chapter.
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 30
Aww...poor Bella! At least it was Alice who told her though. I'm sure Edward will find a way to cheer her up. Loving the story!
Author's Response: Yes finding out from Alice was much better than some other alternatives. And you can bet Edward will fix it, he always does. ;)
Reviewer: jdhsmomth (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 30
Awww, poor Bella. Well at least Alice told her and she is her best friend. Now she know at least. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yes it could have been worse, i.e. Emmett. Next chapter was submitted last night so hopefully it will be validated and up soon. :)
Reviewer: Carlisle060 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 30
waiting to read more :)
Author's Response: I submitted the next chapter to Twilighted last night. It's waiting for validation.
Reviewer: hannah4274 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 30
Wow! I think you are doing an amazing job writing this story! I'm in love, you have a real talent! :)
I picked up this story just a couple days ago and it was hard walking away from my computer knowing there was more to read! Well i think its safe to say now im completely addicted to this story and cant wait to read the next chapter and chapters to come! (hopefully sooner rather than later) ;)
Just wanted to write this so you know people are out there reading and loving it!
Thanks so much
Author's Response: Aw thank you. And welcome to the story.
The next chapter is complete all except for some editing so hopefully I'll be submitting it soon. :
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 30
That would be embarrassing to anyone! I hope Edward can help her.
Author's Response: Yes, Edward has some explaining to do next chapter.
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 15
wow, my fav chapter so far.
Author's Response: Chapter 15 is one of my favorites. :)
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 30
Great premise for your story. Sexual is mostly in the mind. Actual encounters are very tastefully done. Throughly enjoying the small baby steps they are taking prior to the wedding. Very well written. Keep up the good work. Waiting to see how Edward will calm Bella down from her embarrassment over Alice's comments.
Author's Response: Thank you and welcome to the story. :)
Reviewer: PhoenixRising (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 30
Awww... poor Bella! Edward better do something to help her get over her embarrassment. :( Cant wait for the next update :)
Author's Response: Don't worry. Edward always fixes things one way or another. :)
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 30
Poor Bella! She must be so embarassed...I hope Alice had a good reason to tell her that...
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: She is, embarrassed and a little hurt that Edward didn't tell her.
I kind of explained what happened with Alice over on the forum thread if you want to check it out. There is also a teaser for next chapter. ;)
Reviewer: caddymack (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 30
Excellent!!!
I eagerly await new chapters, checking often to see if a new one has been posted.
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
I'm hoping to have the next one up no later than next weekend.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 30
Squee! Oh no bad Alice!!!
Author's Response: lol. Yes, Edward is not really happy with his sister right now.
Reviewer: cece (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 30
That was a really good chapter! I feel bad that Bella is embarassed but Im glad Alice told her :) I wish we could see that conversation... I cant wait for the next Im super excited!
Author's Response: Thanks. :)
As for the conversation, I did talk a little about it on the thread if you want to check it out.
Reviewer: Brandywyn1220 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 21
The only thing I can come up with is one of the books Emmett gave Edward. That seems to be the only thing she could find in his room that would make her blush so badly. Nice cliffhanger, though. You have to keep ppl on their toes...lol. What's life without a little antici...pation, right?
Author's Response: lol. Yes keeping people on their toes is a good thing. And even though this is a cannon story for the most part, I do throw in a few surprises. ;)
Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 30
OMG! As always I loved this chapter. I'm excited for the next chapter. I apologize for the late review. I miss my computer. I'll be happy when I have it back. Though its gonig to cost me, when my friend told me how much. I almost forgot to breathe.
Brie,
Author's Response: That's okay. I knew you were having computer problems plus everything else you have going on.
Did you get the chance to see the teaser I posted on the thread? And I do mean see. It's a picture. ;)
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