I know most authors beg for reviews after almost every chapter, but my personal rule is to read the entire story and then review. My favorite stories are ones written from Edward's POV and your pleasantly long version was a mesmerizing read. I really appreciated the way you wrote more of Charlie and Renee into this story (which was sadly lacking in SM's original) so we could learn more about them. I wish I had more time to do the forum and twitter stuff, because I feel like I miss out on a lot but I'd rather spending the time reading in what little free time I have. My only negative comment is that there were entirely too many spelling and grammatical errors and incorrect verbiage that were not scrubbed. Thank you for this story, I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response:

Thank you. I wrote this story without a beta so I know there are quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes. Glad you enjoyed the story overall.

That was brilliant. You have a real gift and possibly could even end up on the Best Sellers list.

Author's Response:

Wow. Thank you!

I am working on a novel right now so we'll see. ;)

Very hot!

Author's Response:

Thanks. :)

un mariage de rêve!

génial!

passionnant!

superbe!

j'adore

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