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Reviewer: EliseShaw (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2010 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 22 - BE CAREFUL WHAT YOU WISH FOR
Wonderfully done!
Author's Response: thank you so much hun :D bless your heart for sticking with me through the multiple postings xxxx PS: have you checked out my new banner?
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2010 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 22 - BE CAREFUL WHAT YOU WISH FOR
Wow these two are hot!
Great Lemon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: thank you very much hun! hope you went away and practised lol.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2010 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 22 - BE CAREFUL WHAT YOU WISH FOR
You don't have to beg for a review, as you richly deserve one; take a bow. Edward and Bella in love and making love, is purely a thing of beauty. They are everything and all things, to each other, and I love reading about them. Thank you much and keep writing.
Author's Response: thank you very much, that's so kind of you. it seems strange re-reading some of these old chapters now. life has changed so much in the past 6 months! I hope the writing muse comes back to me again soon before you all catch up with me lol.
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2010 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 21 - ADDICTED TO LOVE
WOW I WAS WISHING I WAS BELLA THERE AT THE END SO HOT. I LOVED IT
Author's Response: me too PDSIM, me too!!! however, am having fun trying out all sorts with the new love of my life - watch this space....:D :D
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 21 - ADDICTED TO LOVE
lovely! :D
Author's Response: TYVM Gwil :D
Reviewer: Squirt (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 21 - ADDICTED TO LOVE
It's been said, "When life hands you lemons, make lemonade". Yes m'am! More please.
Author's Response: thanks LemonySquirt!!
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 21 - ADDICTED TO LOVE
Damn they are hot stuff. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: TYVM glad you enjoying their ride to pleasure
Reviewer: EliseShaw (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 21 - ADDICTED TO LOVE
Wonderful!
Author's Response: bless your heart, dearheart :D
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 21 - ADDICTED TO LOVE
Wow I need a cold shower now!
Author's Response: lol that could be dangerous too!! glad you enjoying the passion.
Reviewer: AbruptlyChagrined (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 21 - ADDICTED TO LOVE
Lol, two more lucky people there never were.
;-)
Author's Response: yes indeed. young lovin' eh? those were the days...
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 21 - ADDICTED TO LOVE
Lemons are always good for you, must be all the vitamin C. Bella has to be the luckiest wife anywhere, and Edward the luckiest husband.
Author's Response: they're pretty evenly matched - each surprising the other, I think.
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 21 - ADDICTED TO LOVE
Oh dear sweet jaysus.......that was fucking hot!! There is such a family connection here but at the core, it is just Edward and Bella. These two can't exist without the other and thats the way it should be. It's like they can anticipate each others need....they know each other so well. Beautifully written, smoldering hot yet tasteful at the same time. Great job here, please send more, the sooner the better.
Author's Response: thanks so much Spunk. sorry I didnt respond to this review. as always, your support is much appreciated and very welcome. Am hoping the writing muse will come back to me soon - my own new love life is taking precedence just now!
Reviewer: mossgirl (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 1 - GENTLY DOES IT
I loved this story so much. You really stayed "true to the characters" Every single one of them! I felt like I was reading a S.M. supplement to Breaking Dawn. It felt so real. I loved (really enjoyed) the detailed scenes of E and B's intimacy. I loved how you can talk explicitly about sex without being raunchy and without using profanity.You used the F bomb only once! That was great. And that moment when it was uttered by E, it was very exciting. But that was just enough. I love how you altered the chapters from lemons to just cute fun stuff. I would love to see you rewind and do a 20 chapter story about Isle Esme! I loved these books, read them a whole year ago and I still think about the characters. Thank Heavens for this website and people like you who can keep this story going - and even make it more exciting than the books! Ha! This was very Satisfying and I want more! Mossgirl
Author's Response: TYVM Moss for leaving such a smashing review. am glad you've enjoying reading the story and hope you continue to do so. am about 10 chapters away from catching up with the other sites and then I'll have to get my writing hat back on!!
Reviewer: twilightbi (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 20 - MOTHER
SammiCat15, Great Story!
I like the way that you ballance the lemons with sweetness to make a purrfect blend, very tasty!
Author's Response: TYVM TwiBi - your feedback is much appreciated :D
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 20 - MOTHER
lovely!!
Author's Response: TYVM Gwil and thanks for your continued feedback :D
Reviewer: iloveedwardandrob (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 20 - MOTHER
Oh, what a wonderful chapter. The seaside escapade was amazing. I just love the whole sharing an earbud while making love thing! Yum! And the songs you choose are so perfect. Definitely enhances the story.
The picture of Edward with his beautiful daughter is beyond amazing. A man and his child is infinitely sexy, and Edward? There's nothing better! I really can't wait to see those moments in Breaking Dawn when it finally comes to the screen, but for now, I have your story to inspire me.
Can't wait for more of this story. I am so loving getting the chance to "see" all of those moments I missed in the books. You do a wonderful job of writing them.
Debbie
Author's Response: TYVM it's really kind of you to leave a nice long feedback. Yes I agree a man and child takes some beating in the heartmelt stakes. Thanks again.
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 20 - MOTHER
Excellent light hearted chapter after the emotional ones of late!
Loved it!
Author's Response: TYVM - yes I do try to mix it up a little.
Reviewer: sogian (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 20 - MOTHER
really difficult to have Edward and to have to be with others.... xaxaxx... I would be lost in my word only with him...!!!! but she have Renesmme also...
Great job!!! Keep updating!!!
Author's Response: TYVM sogian - what a dilemma eh lol?
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 20 - MOTHER
Despite the very different circumstances, Edward and Bella seem to be like any young parents, totally enthralled with their child, and excited by all the new feelings of newlyweds, too. Talk about having a lot on your plate, throw in being a new vampire, and it's no wonder Bellas' emotions are in a whirl.How nice that she has such a supportive family to help out.
Author's Response: TYVM! yes the family are amazing arent they - that's what makes them strong.
Reviewer: sogian (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 18 - A NEW MOON
I totally agree this song is perfect for New Moon!!!!! It describe their love, their separation, their everything... I liked the chapter because i know that they can't just leave all this pain behind them but they have to deal with it...
Author's Response: thank you sogian - I know how I get when I'm emotional and know it's hard to leave stuff behind. Tears are cathartic as long as there's positive stuff too.
Reviewer: sogian (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 17 - IN TOO DEEP
Yes good shaggy story!!!! Really like your story... And the way they enjoy all oa this is perfect!!!
Author's Response: :D glad you enjoyed it. I love the open air too :D
Reviewer: vampiremom1221 (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 20 - MOTHER
That was actually really beautiful. Great job.
Author's Response: TYVM VM1221 :D glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: AbruptlyChagrined (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 20 - MOTHER
Terrific last line there! :-)
My favorite parts of this chapter were the interaction with Carlisle. ( I utterly ADORE Carlisle!) Also the hungry wolves. ^_^
Author's Response: TYVM - yes I'm a Carlisleaholic as well and love Peter's representation of him because I've seen him with his own kids. Wish they'd let him loose a bit more in the movies. Thanks for the comps too.
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 20 - MOTHER
Great chapter Sammi. You have managed to capture the ease and comfort of family life, vampire style. Loved Edward with Renesmee.....so adorable and sweet. Enjoyed his little tiff with Jake......Jacob needs to remember Edward is the only father of this little girl and he is number 1 in her life. So much fun with Emmett, he just can't control his mouth but you have to love him no matter what goofy thing he says. Loved the moment Bella shared with Carlisle....oh to have him as your father-in-law, so supportive and loving, nothing rattles this man and that's why he is so revered.It would be Carlisle to see how much Bella and Edward have gone through and the potential struggles they might be enduring. You are doing such a great job with this story, you make loving Edward and all the Cullen's so easy.
Author's Response: TYVM - that's such a sweet review. really kind of you. I feel I know you somehow now! your continued support is much appreciated.
Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 19 - ON YOUR BACK
LOVING EDWARD IS A LOVLY STORY THE WAY EDWARD LOVES BELLA ANY WOMAN WOULD BE HAPPY TO HAVE THAT LOVE I KNOW I WOULD
Author's Response: Thank you so much PDSIM. Hope you're enjoying their journey.
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