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Reviewer: dedreader (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)
This is so original, and I love it! More, more, more please...What will it take to get Edward and Bella out of their self-involvement andinvolved with each other? Hmmm, I'm waiting to see!
Author's Response: Hi there-Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you're loving it...what will it take hmm? More than a vase of flowers that's for sure :) Cheers
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)
Rejection being uncommon in Edward's life seems to have sparked some good and not so good tendencies in his personality! It appears that he needed to prove his manhood, and it didn't quite work out the way he expected! Well, I guess persistence is the key, maybe if he tried to find the real Edward under all the facade and showed it to Bella he'll get a different result!
Author's Response: Hey there! OMG you're reading my mind! He needs to get back to who he was...the real Edward is in there somewhere :) Thanks so much for your review! Always love hearing your thoughts. Cheers
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)
Shit Eddie. Go see her again. And again. Get Alice on his side for her date. Can't wait to see what you come up with next. Meg
Author's Response: Poor Edward..what is he thinking? He will be going to see her these two have a lot to work on :) Thanks for the review. Hope you keep enjoying the story! Cheers
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)
Shit Eddie. Go see her again. And again. Get Alice on his side for her date. Can't wait to see what you come up with next. Meg
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 4 (shabbyapple)
Ugh he needed to let em know about the flowers lol. Meg
Author's Response: :) LOL...that would be using his head...Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)
Em bad boy. A little waring would have been nice.
Author's Response: LOL-exactly!
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
Poor Bella interesting beginning. Meg
Author's Response: Hey there-Thanks for the review! Keep them coming! Cheers
Reviewer: MPattz (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)
MUST HAVE MORE.........
I instantly picture Rob as Dali in Little Ashes all insane looking sans the stache!!!
lol
Author's Response: LOL! More is on the way...thanks for reading and for reviewing...it means a lot. Cheers
Reviewer: MPattz (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 4 (shabbyapple)
I am sucked the fuck in.........
Author's Response: :) Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: MPattz (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 3 (shabbyapple)
They're from Edward.....they have to be
Ummmm I'm a fast reader just so you know....so quit everything you do that does not involve writing and uhhh yeah that would be great!
xo
Author's Response: LOL-Fast reader-wow! Hmmm, how to quit everything now...must find way to clone myself...Thanks for reviewing!
XO
Reviewer: MPattz (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)
Me again...
I am dying to know if and how he figures out how to get through to Bella...poor Eddie has his work cut out for him...but i love it...I am a angsty kinda h00r ....movin on...........
Author's Response: Hey :) OH, yes, he's got his work cut out for him...where's the fun if she just gives in right away LOL. Thanks for reading and reviewing...it means the world to me. Cheers
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)
Great chapter!
I hope that Bella doesn't find out about what he did...She'll never go out with him then. =(
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: Hi there, Thanks so much for the review! Oh dear...Edward, what were you thinking? Hmmm, and will she find out? We'll have to wait and see :) Update is coming. Cheers, Leslie.
Reviewer: melsie69 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)
I am really loving your story. I read a lot of stories at a time, and it boggles my mind why you don't have more reviews, especially given that some stories have tons and aren't that good.
Anyway, I like that you aren't making it easy for Edward, but also that you didn't have Bella catch him in the stairwell. That would have been needless angst. Did Bella understand that he sent the flowers? Will she stop being so bitchy soon? I mean I know why she's acting like that, but I'm almost feeling sorry for old Eddie! Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for your words...they mean the world to me...you've made my day! Bella is pretty sure now that he sent them from his comment; "Did you know purple hyacinths mean I'm sorry." Oh, those flowers are coming back into play in a few chappys *insert evil laugh here*. I want Edward to suffer, just a little...lets face it, he's been a bad boy and he's used to getting what he wants. Bella will get there, trust me, but it will take a bit more time. Hope you continue to enjoy and to review. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: graceisgone (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 05:11 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)
i love this! poor edward. can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you're enjoying it! Update is coming. Cheers!
Reviewer: MPattz (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 1
MizzezPattinson here.....ahem
Well I didn't see that one coming...To be honest I barely read the summary I am jumping into this one because I like the way you write and well..... you're Canadian...just kidding...
I am now about to ignore my son (kidding again) to read this all....On to Chap 2...
BTW...I love!!
Author's Response: Ahem indeed! LOL...We Canadians must stick together! Hope you enjoy...looking forward to hearing what you think Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: withherownwings (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)
I really REALLY like this story! Bella is so angry/hurt/bitter, and with good reason, but I just want to scoop her up and hug it all out of her! I hope Edward doesn't give up--I know a lot of guys would have by now.
Keep it up! I can't wait for the next chapter!
-Sara
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for your review! It really does mean the world to me :) Yep, she's bitter and Edward's not giving up...at least not yet :)
Cheers
-Leslie
Reviewer: E_Cullens_gurl_09 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)
Well did he not think about office gossip? you know she's gonna blab I bet or let it slip one just proving Bella's theory.
I know Bella will have to open up soon to him...just wonder what it's going to take. Can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: Nope, he didn't..he's not thinking at all :) Thanks for the review-it makes my day to see what people think. Poor Bella, how long is it going to take? *insert evil laugh here* Keep those reviews coming! Cheers
Reviewer: usagicullen (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)
another great chapter. can't wait to see where this all goes and to have Edward beg Bella some more - poor guy is sooo lost.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! He is lost isn't he? And there is something to be said about Begward :) Cheers!
Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)
I have to say you have me intrigued. Seems to me that Bella is so angry it will take a sledgehammer to break through her protective shell. Looking forward to the update. You have your work cut out for you to make a beleivable segue between angry Bella and someone at least open to the idea of someone in her life.
Author's Response: Hey there, Thanks for the review..she definately has her issues :) that's what makes her so fun to write Cheers!
Reviewer: meaj123 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)
Thanks...I hope Bella gets over her issues with Edward. Thanks look forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Hey there, Thanks for the review! She's definately got her issues to work through...Cheers!
Reviewer: 123appletree (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 5 (shabbyapple)
Interesting and intriguing story.
I always like a strong Bella. Edward will have to work hard to get his muse, which seems to be something new for him. But I try to remember that Angela cheated on him and Bella isn’t the only one who’s hurt in this story (although their situations are very different, of course).
I hope Bella will take Edward (and not Jacob) to the auction, if she takes a date at all. I don’t have a problem with Jacob’s character, as long as he respects Bella’s boundaries. He seems to be a good friend and gets Bella, so I’ll try to not judge him. Yet.
I am looking forward to following this story.
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for taking the time to review...it means the world to me! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far...you're bang on about Edward-everyone seems to be focused on Bella but forgets that he's got his own issues and wants to work through them. Update is being beta'd as we speak. Hope you continue to enjoy, you've made my morning today. Cheers!
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 5 (shabbyapple)
I loved the new chapter! Bella's being a little hard on old Edward though - he sees her with a cane and then she's handling stairs like a pro, can't blame the guy for being a little confused by the situation. But I loved that her shell is starting to crack!
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for taking the time to review! It means the world to me-so thank you, thank you! Poor Edward-LOL She is being hard on him...it's what she thinks she has to do And the cane..yes...she didn't really even need it in the first place. She used it more to keep people away. Oh, she's so confused...I wonder if that shell is going to crack all the way? *insert evil laugh here* Update is coming soon. Cheers and thanks again for reviewing!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 5 (shabbyapple)
Well, if it takes serious eye candy (and serious pissing off) for Bella to realize she doesn't need to settle for milk toast, or be alone, so be it! I think she should take up the challenge that Emmett and her friends have been trying to throw down and land a man (the man) just for the sport of it. She still has that competitive streak after all!
Author's Response: Hi there, Thanks for the review. Yes! You know, sometimes serious eye candy is exactly what you need...she'll get there...eventually. Cheers!
Reviewer: meaj123 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 5 (shabbyapple)
Found this today and love it. Interesting plot and characters and its going at the perfect pace, not giving too much away at once, I really hate that in fics. Thanks and look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi there, Thanks so much for taking the time to review! It means alot. Glad you found it and are enjoying it! You've made my day! Update coming soon. Cheers!
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 5 (shabbyapple)
Rose just can't take "No" for an answer can she?
Author's Response: It's hard for her to LOL! Thanks for the review! Cheers
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