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Reviewer: brown0520 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 17(shabbyapple)
love your story. i just started reading.
Author's Response: Hi there and Welcome! I'm so glad you are enjoying it. There is a lot more on the way with these two as they try to figure out their own lives and each other. Hope you continue to read and enjoy...it means the world. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 17(shabbyapple)
Well, you can't hide nothin from nobody! First Jacob, then Alice and Rose. Then she runs into James and the whole art/auction/Edward/article Jane explosion! I think that Edward will ultimately be annoyed, but I think he really doesn't need Jane anymore. He seems to be established enough. As for an auction with James, he'll blow him out of the water for bids-so that shouldn't be so bad. But as for James trying to get to Bella-well, that might be an issue!
Author's Response: HI there! Oh, I know...lots happening to our Bella all at once! It's overwhelming for her. You're right, Edward doesn't really need Jane, but she is his art dealer and she's going to be around. James and the auction...yes...we'll just have to see about that *evil laugh*. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: DDStein (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 17(shabbyapple)
WOW! This is such a great story. I just started it today and read all 17 chapters in one sitting. Your Bella and Edward are so unique. Can't wait to see how Edward handles the news about James! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Hi there and Welcome! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing...and all in one sitting! WOW! That is amazing. Thank you! You are right, this isn't your typical B & E that is for sure...these two have some deep rooted issues that they need to start to work through. Update is on the way. Hope you continue to enjoy. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: Righteous_Babe (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 06:19 PM · On: Chapter 8(shabbyapple)
Wha?!
Is Edward much older than Bella? Why am I getting this vibe? He's made a few 'young' comments . . . .
Author's Response: Hi there, No, they are the same age...Thanks for reading and reviewing! Hope you continue to enjoy. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: Righteous_Babe (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)
Oh please tell me he's going to end up collapsed against his wet canvass at some point, on the verge of a breakdown . . . . (A la Little Ashes??)
Author's Response: Hi again! Perhaps...*insert evil laugh here* Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! You've made my day. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: Righteous_Babe (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 5 (shabbyapple)
That last line is fantastic.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you are enjoying! Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: Righteous_Babe (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 4 (shabbyapple)
Whee Lady!
I usually give four chapters before I decide to finish a story - and eff me, I like it already . . . Starving Artward and a fucked up Bella? This is my bliss.
At first I wanted a visual of his finished pieces, but now I'm thinking that I like making it up in my head . . .
Author's Response: Hi there and Welcome! I'm glad you are enjoying. These two are not your typical E & B and that has served to annoy some. Hope you continue to enjoy. I enjoy leaving it up to you to imagine what his work looks like. That's not to say I don't have pieces ready...when the time is right :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing...it means the world. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 17(shabbyapple)
cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Hi there! Hope you survived today on your 3 hours of sleep! Next chapter is on the way. Thanks so much for reading and for reviewing. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 17(shabbyapple)
Eosalie jut doesn't know when to quit does she?
Author's Response: Nope, she doesn't. She really, really doesn't. Thanks for reading and reviewing! More is on the way. Cheers!
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 17(shabbyapple)
Excellent chapter James was very creepy I hope he gets his face pounded in.
Author's Response: LOL- Hmmm, a violent Edward...and risk ruining that beautiful face? Thanks for reading and reviewing. Update is on the way. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: mizzezpattinson (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 17(shabbyapple)
Thank you for the fix!
I definitely needed that
I am LMAO at the convo between Bella and Rose when they are shopping. When Rose asked B if she saw his dick!!!! I can almost hear this convo between you and I but in a hush whispery voice.
MUST post chapter 18 soon!
love n hugs
M
Author's Response: Hey BB, Glad I could give you the fix. I enjoy their conversations...I was whispering them as I wrote it :) Ch 18 is betaing as we speak my dear. Thanks for reading and reviewing. You know I love you. Hugs, Leslie
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 17(shabbyapple)
okay, we all know that edward went to go jack off first, then went to the paint cave. it is a given. =)
i swear, both should just whip it out and measure to see how long it is rather than piss all over bella like a dog. james seems so jealous of edward and edward just hates him cause the guy is creepy. lol. well..he probably hates him for more than that, but he is really creepy.
phallic symbols in charity auctions? who knows. lol
Author's Response: Hi there! Hmmm, you think that's what he'll do? Am I that preditable? LOL Phallic symbols...I'll see what I can do about that - it gives me some ideas! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Update is on the way. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 17(shabbyapple)
SO not a fan of James, can't wait to see Edwards reaction to him at the auction
Author's Response: Me either! Thanks for reading and reviewing. Lots more coming up. Cheers!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 17(shabbyapple)
I don't think Edward will be happy at all about James joining the auction. I hope everyone has a storm shelter,lol.
I can't wait to see Bella and Edward's date! I bet it will be great!
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: LOL- A storm shelter is probably a good idea. :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Update is on the way...dinner, the painting cave, some wine...what could possibly happen there? Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: Mrs_Robward (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 17(shabbyapple)
James creeps me out too!
Stacy
Author's Response: Hi Stacy! Hmmmm...James...yeah, he is a bit unnerving! Thanks for reading and reviewing hun! It means the world. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 17(shabbyapple)
I think he's been painting all day and I have a feeling they don't like each other and will get competitive. Oh yeah....just look at my amazing insight :L
Author's Response: :) Thanks for reading and reviewing. Hope you enjoy what's coming up...there will be painting - could there not be? :) Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 17(shabbyapple)
with friends like Rose and Alice who needs enemies. Edward is not going to be pleased, and things were going so well. Up to you now to keep thing on track. Edward needs some release and so does Bella, what say you, they are after all figments of your imagination
Author's Response: Hi there. You think our Edward needs some release, huh? :) I'll see what I can do about that. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: axd3258 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 17(shabbyapple)
loving this story more and more with each chapter :]
Author's Response: Hi there, Thanks so much for reading and for your kind words. I'm glad you are enjoying these two. Much more is in store for them. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 16
it's called stranger than fiction by MAsenVixen...go..run to read this one..I promise you will be thanking me
Author's Response: I'll check it out! Thanks!
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 16
finally!!! I am going to bed>>just to get up in 3 hours!!! It was so worth it
Author's Response: :) You make me laugh and smile. I'm glad you enjoyed it...I hope your day is ok going on 3 hours of sleep! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It truly does mean so much to me. Lots more is on the way for these two. Hope you enjoy their journey. Cheers, hugs and sweet dreams, Leslie
Reviewer: jacoblucas (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2010 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 10(shabbyapple)
this is some awesome writing!!! I hate u right now....I am still up...starting this story when I finished your other story..i have to get up for work soon!!!....and yet, I keep clicking next
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing..I"m sorry you're still up - but glad you are enjoying!! :) Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 16
I just started reading this fic and I am so in love with it. I love that your Bella and Edward characters are so real and are a bit jaded. I can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: Hi there and welcome! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. You're exactly right, this B & E are jaded and have alot of issues that they need to work through. Hope you continue to enjoy. Update is on the way. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 16
I love them together!
Author's Response: Hi there! I'm glad you love them! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Lots more on the way for these two! Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 16
Wow! Could never have imagined how hot, erotic, and sexy cleaning an artificial leg could be! I loved Edward's reaction-affected and charged sexually and creatively. His need to get it right, to make sure he doesn't mess up the moment and his exhiliration at being able to spend the night and the fact that she didn't run screaming from him in the morning was really adorable and touching! I can't wait to see Bella's reaction to Edward's reveal!
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for reading for your wonderful review. Definitely a turning point for these two...her letting him in, letting him see her like this, him accepting, understanding - very big for both of them. Ah yes, dinner, painting, wine, lots more on the way for these two. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: Mrs_Robward (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 16
Damn.
I'm caught up. Boo!!
Sorry I didn't review more. I really like ur fic & writing style. I think we have a lot of similaraties in our stylesm
Will b looking out for next chapter!
Stacy
Author's Response: Hi Stacy,
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I love your writing style too! There's lots more to go with these two :) Update is on the way. Cheers, Leslie
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