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Reviewer: PINKSAPPHYR (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)

Nope, I'm sure it wasn't not a random street game.......I bet on James or Jane...Angela isn't that creepy or sickminded!!

That chapter was quite heartbreaking and emotionally intense...But they still have a lot to deal with, so I understand why she wants to go slowly...............But gotta say that I'm undoubtely waiting for her to figure things out very very quickly...

He's to yummy and exceptional to wait THAT long ...............;)

Update soon



Author's Response:

Hi there,  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  James or Jane huh? Interesting...we'll have to see.  Glad you enjoyed-its going to take some time for these two - they have a host of issues that go beyond physical ones to get over.  He is yummy, isn't he?

Update on the way.  Cheers

 

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)

Wow, Bella truly has changed Edward for the better and I'm not sure he's even begun to fully grasp how much so. Obviously he realises the obvious - he doesn't want to be an asshole philandering womaniser anymore; but the gentlemanly side of him buried deep inside is tearing screaming out of him. *L*

Bella, you are such a tease! *L* Understandably, becauase as much as anyone would want to fall into bed with a speciman as hot as Edward, she does have a lot of emotional & psychological damage to her self-esteem to work through.

P.S - I don't think psycho driver is a random...they have it out for Bella and my money is on a VERY jealous and vindictive Tanya!



Author's Response:

Hi there hun!  Thanks for reading and reviewing-it means so much.  She is a tease isn't she?  LOL -I'm evil I know, but you are exactly right-she has a host of issues to deal with and that's not going to happen in a nanosecond not matter how hot he is.  Interesting choice on the driver :)  We'll have to wait and see.  Lots more on the way.  Cheers Les

Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)

oh no...was it james????

Loved it, post soon plesae



Author's Response:

Oh-we'll have to wait and see.  Glad you enjoyed and thanks for reviewing!  Update on the way.

Reviewer: RaeRae (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)

Loved it! Just like every other chapter that you write xD

And while I am sad about you prolonging the lemons, I understand that need to "take it slow." 

I can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing-it means the world!  Oh, its not going to happen very quickly for these two--there are way too many issues for both of them to get through.  Lots more on the way.  Cheers!

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)

Oh my... It started out so sweet, and now this. My guess - it was James, playing some sick game with Edward, and thus with Bella. Or maybe Jane? 

I'm already addicted to this story as it is, but after this, I officially can't wait for the next update :-)

Thanks so much!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!  James or Jane huh?  Interesting...we'll have to wait and see!  So glad you are enjoying!  Update is on the way.  Cheers!~

Reviewer: lolabean (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)

Argghh! I now love and hate you for taunting me with all this deliciousness! Please please please update soon! I know I'm begging but I love this story too much to care about a little thing called self respect! ;)

And as for all the car shenanigans...it's just got to be James, right?!

Lola x



Author's Response:

Hi there Lola!  I know...I'm evil, eh?  Glad you enjoyed, hun.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  James...hmmmm-maybe, or maybe not...we'll have to wait and see!  Cheers, Leslie XO

Reviewer: cullenscougar (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)

Aw Leslie that was mean, lol. I really thought they'd be getting together finally in this chapter. They were almost there but of course Bella has other things to think about and can't be spontaneous. But Edward really does seem to be changing and respecting her need to be slower than he wants. At least she's acknowledging that she wants to be with him when she's ready. Let's just hope it's not too much longer. I don't think I can wait, let alone poor Edward.

And who was in the blue Lexus? I think it was Jane, jealous that Edward doesn't want her anymore. Of course, it could also be James, or even Jacob. Who knows?? Meanie, keeping us in suspense, LOL. Great chapter, as ever. hugs Clare x



Author's Response:

Hi Clare!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  I know-I'm evil-I can't help it!  You're so right-Bella does have alot to consider-its difficult for her to wrap her head around how she's feeling-its going to take some time for her to trust him completely.  Hmmm-interesting choices on who is behind the wheel...have to wait and see!  Hugs, Leslie XO

Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)

WOW! Literally WOW woman! That was such a freaking fantastic chapter! :D Loved the wine and relationship analogy, the heated kiss, the fact that he remembered she was vegetarian (very sweet), the 'game of discovery' (very nice! :D) and definately Edward's patience in regards to her needs. Her story was gruesome, but didn't make me feel queasy with too much detail - it was just right! Poor girl. That would have hurt like hell. Love Rose for holding her hand the whole time, too.

What a crazy mom she's got! LOL. Gotta love her! The end car scene was scary too! I was holding my breath the whole time. I'm guessing it'll be Aro somehow? Can't really see how, but he's my first guess. I don't think James would do it. Can't wait to find out!

Oh, and I also noticed that Edward's eagerness was great. Yes he was pushy, but that's him. He's used to getting girls and he's so damn eager for Bella, he was being complimentary (Bella wasn't offended, lol!) and I didn't think him a jerk. I loved how he told her he'd attack her every chance he got! :D Brilliant job!!!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thank you so much for reading and reviewin and for your kind words.  WOW to you!  So happy that you enjoyed this chapter.  It was extremely difficult for me to write.  You're the first person to mention her mom-she is a bit out there! LOL

Interesting choices on who is behind the wheel-we'll have to wait and see.

Poor Edward-he's trying so hard...its going to take some time for her to trust him completely.

Lots more on the way.

Cheers!

Leslie XO

 

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)

Great chapter!

I loved the end of their date! It was so sweet! =)

The car following Bella was creepy...It could have been some guy trying to scare her by playing a game, or it could have been James (because he might have seen Bella with Edward). It could have been Jacob (for the same reason) or it could have been Jane, spying on Edward and getting jealous because he was with Bella.

Looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.  Glad you enjoyed..interesting choices on who is behind the wheel-we'll have to wait and see!  Lots more on the way.  Cheers, XO

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 20(Shabbyapple)

This has to be my favorite chapter so far. I love this story so much. Awaiting your next!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!  Glad you are enjoying.  Lots more on the way.  Cheers

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 19(shabbyapple)

Bella finally understands that Edward really opened up to her. I hope she'll be able to give that back and to let him in...

Again, I don't really know what to say. This chapter swept me off my feet. I think I'm still trembling... Just amazing!

 



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Glad you enjoyed!  Bella is trying and that's a big step for her.  Lots more on the way.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Cheers!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 20(Shabbyapple)

So, Bella tells him not to stay in control around her and he bolts up to clean up water from the stove?!!!  I hope he makes up for that later!  I love how Edward is just coming clean about everything.  No games, only truth.  I wonder if Bella believes in his sincerity?  She seems to be questioning his motives!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Bella is skeptical - she's felt nothing for so long, this is overwhelming and she's fighting with what she wants and what she's experienced since the accident.  Lots more on the way.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 20(Shabbyapple)

When you put these two in a room together it's dangerous. They are on fire.



Author's Response:

:)_Glad you enjoyed!  Lots more on the way.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 13(shabbyapple)

The girl - it was Angela, right? Oh please let it be Angela. Otherwise there's no excuse for Edward... I guess I'll just go on reading and find out :-)



Author's Response:

:)-Read on!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!  Cheers

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

This chapter left me with the intense feeling that both Bella and Edward might be in need of a good old-fashioned hard slap on the head - to make them see more clearly. (Oh dear, does that make any sense? I'm no native speaker...) I'm eager to find out how everything will work out :-)



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Oh, these two - they aren't the typical E & B.  They both have a lot of issues and it will take them a while to work through them.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Cheers

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 2 (shabbyapple)

Wow. Just wow. This is so intense. I can't stop reading. Just amazing!

Well I guess I'll write more after I've read some more chapters :-)



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks for reading and reviewing and welcome!  I'm glad you are enjoying these two!  Lots more on the way.  Hope you continue to enjoy.  Cheers Leslie

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 20(Shabbyapple)

"Oh is it freaking hot i here? *Looks at her inner self...what did you think? I'm standing here with my head in the freezer trying to cool down!" she shrieks " How do you think I feel!"

I just have to laugh...author honey I think you got my inner self hot and bothered...I love how Bella and Edward toy with each other...

Although it looks like massive cockblock I am thrilled they are laying thier cards on the table...this is fabulous. I am doing a happy dance that Edward is being honest. I can't wait to see what you have coming for them next...

PS: I don't trust James or Jane for one second...



Author's Response:

Hi there!  You're amazing - if I could reach through the computer and hug you, I would.  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing-I don't know if people realize the difference it makes.  Edward has finally opened up and she's starting to, so a major breakthrough for these two.

PS-You're right to not trust them...bad news those two.

Lots more written and on the way.  Hope you continue to read and enjoy.  You've made my day hun!

Cheers and hugs, Leslie

 

Reviewer: DaisyAllday (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 20(Shabbyapple)

Oh shit woman, this story rocks!  I just discovered it today and couldn't stop reading until I reached the end...unfortunately :).  I can't wait to see what happens.  Very, very good writing.  Keep it up.



Author's Response:

Hi there and Welcome!  Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review and for your kind words.  I'm glad you are enjoying these two!  Lots more on the way!  Cheers, Leslie

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 19(shabbyapple)

Holy Hell I think I'm a puddle of goo on the floor...Inner self screams at me...You better not be or I'm gonna wipe the floor with you...

Sigh...my inner self can be a lil snipper at times...but I love her.

Anywho...I just loved the chapter...so much itensity...wow Edward is hot when he paints!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Edward is definitely intense - its like he enters another personality when he paints...hot indeed!  Glad you enjoyed!  Cheers

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 18(shabbyapple)

*Thump!...My inner self runs over...WHAT THE FUCK!...Looks at reader...look at author...What'd you do to my girl!*

Reader finally stirs...Jesus honey! I am in shock! I never would have thought that Edward would finally start standing up and making a change in is life...I am in awe *Inner self in background...WEll why the hell did you fall off the chair?* Looks bashfull...well I was in shock...jesus



Author's Response:

:)  LOL - Hope you didn't hurt yourself!  Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review - it really does make such a difference! 

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 17(shabbyapple)

Ok what a chapter...lol oh I think Edward is going to freak when he finds out about James. James...jesus that is one creepy fuck. Don't even get me started on Jane....full body shiver.

I am anxious for the evening... so racing over to read...



Author's Response:

:)-Hi Again!  James and Jane...they are quite a pair aren't they?  Up to no good those two.  Glad you enjoyed!  Cheers

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 16

That was BrillianT! I couldn't be happier with the way things are going...I sure as hell hope that Edward shows her how he feel, but without the added benefit of Bella flippin out. LoL...oh god I can just imagine the earful Bella is gonna get from Jake...can't wait for that conversation.



Author's Response:

Hey there!  Glad you enjoyed - yeah, Jake's not going to be too happy - Cheers!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 15(shabbyapple)

OMG! Thank god for shooters! This was an epic break thru! I am so excited right now I can't even begin to tell you how much! I loved every gut spilling minute of it!



Author's Response:

Ah yes!  Shooters!  So glad you are enjoying!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: skipabeat (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 20(Shabbyapple)

Excellent story... When is the next update?



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Updates are weekly - so it should be up next Monday.  Cheers!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 14(shabbyapple)

Wow...that's all sorts of fucked up for Edward! Damn that was Angela?!? Talk about an impression...lets just say I'm glad Edward got away from that one...

I was absolulty thrilled that Edward got to Bella before that bastard James could do anything to Bella...



Author's Response:

Hi again!  Oh Angela...didn't anyone ever tell you not to drink that much?  Glad you are enjoying!  Cheers, Leslie

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