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Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
Hmmm, first Edward must be losing his touch if Bella was actually able to walk out the door! Or Bella must be made of steel! And then, car stalker, could be James. Pissed that Bella was with Edward. Or it could be Jane pissed that Bella was with Edward. Or, it could have been Freddy Kruger.
Author's Response: Hi there! LOL-Freddy Kruger- hmmm interesting choice! Oh, he's not losing his touch-it was difficult for her to leave-but ultimately, she's not ready, and she does need to be prepared in order to stay the night. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Cheers~!
Reviewer: monica1981 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
A few things that were great about this chapter. It's great to finally hear what actually happened to Bella. I've been kinda wondering, Yes, we know itr was a ski accident, but what actually haoppened was a mystery.
Edward is becoming more and more caring, and less of an asshole. Love it!
Holy cliffhanger Batman! I don't think it's random, I'm guessing it;s Jake or James.
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Interesting guesses on who is behind the wheel! Love it! Edward is trying really hard and she's starting to see who he really is. Lots more on the way. Cheers!
Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
I'm thinking that maybe this was James or Jane, but why? I sure can't wait to find out.
I really enjoyed this chapter and look forward to more.
rox
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks for reading and reviewing and for your choices! Lots more on the way! Update is coming. Cheers! XO
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
Or James, excellent chapter romantic and scary. Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Lots more on the way! Thanks for reading and reviewing-it makes my day...really it does. Cheers
Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
who could it be... James, Jane... mmm love love love as always
Author's Response: Hmmmm-interesting choices-maybe...maybe not *evil laugh* Glad you enjoyed-lots more coming. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Cheers
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
woah is he a fast mover! introductions are made then they all get into bed. what the heck - bella isn't that type of girl. she practically caught him getting a bj not that long ago and not he is attempting to seduce her into his bed. hehe. maybe next time ;) glad to see their relationship really progressing though.
a street game is tailgating them like crazy to piss them off, not following them especially onto oncoming traffic. let me guess..lol. lauren? haha. no..red flame means something right?
horrible ski accident. open fractures are horrible, but glad to see bella attempting to make the most of it. she survived!
Author's Response: Hi there!~ Thanks for reading and reviewing! OH, yes, he's a fast mover! At least, he wants to be. Yes, open fractures are horrific - she's trying her best and wants to open up to him - it will take time for her to completely trust him. Cheers!
Reviewer: Ceradee22 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
James or Jane, or some other psycho associated with Edward, there are many!
Author's Response: Hmmm-interesting and yes, there are a few associated with our dear Edward, aren't they? Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
I think it was either James or Aro.
Author's Response: Ok-interesting choices! Thanks for reading and reviewing...update on the way. Cheers!
Reviewer: meaj123 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
I think its Jane. Thanks bb,another great chapter!
Author's Response: Ah, intriguing guess. Glad you enjoyed and thanks so much for reviewing-you know it means the world. Cheers! XO
Reviewer: k80cue (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
Hi
I loved this chapter - I like the way that Edward is prepared to take things at Bellas pace.
I bet the person in the car is Edwards Agent (Jane) she seems like the jealous type.
I hope that she doesnt manage to do anything to hurt Bella.
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed! An interesting choice in Jane - we'll have to wait and see! Update on the way. Cheers!
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
I'm betting it was psycho Jane playing road wars with Bella or another ex of Edward's. He seems to elicit hysteria in the opposite sex.
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Hmmm-Jane, huh? Perhaps...perhaps not :) *evil laugh* He does have issues with women, doesn't he? Lots more on the way. Cheers!
Reviewer: Kiwibeme (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
James??? Sounds like something his jealous ass would do.
Author's Response: Hmmm-maybe...maybe not. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Lots more on the way. Cheers!
Reviewer: skipabeat (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
Can we say hot and bothered!! That was nicely done, felt it in all the right places...!!!hmmm. Now, the maniac driver, the three possibities are the three J's, but I am not convinced that they would make it that personal. At least she is smart enough to stay somewhat calm and is definitely going to the police station with whatever info she can remember... Interesting, looking forward to your next update.
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks for reading and reviewing. I love that you call them the three J's :) Bella's tough and she's been through a lot, she's also really trying to trust Edward-but its going to take some time. Lots more on the way. Cheers!
Reviewer: fiesty_pookie (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
holy crow ... that is a pretty freaky driving there and i don't think it was just a street game, i think psycho Jane had something to do with that.
i love the little 'Canadian Tire' plug there :)
and i love intense Edward, god i wish he would paint me :)
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Ah, Canadian Tire...gotta shout out the Canadian icons :) Jane...hmmmm-maybe, we'll have to wait and see. Sign me up for Edward painting me as well...there's a line forming. Cheers!
Reviewer: mizzezpattinson (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
oooooh BB you are good! I did not see that one coming!
This is soooo NOT a random street game...someone is a little pissed at Bella for spending the vening with Towel..erm I mean Edward....
So many things I love about this chapter... The level of intimacy between them is great...not too rushed <---Did I just say that? I love E's attitude change and Bella ... I just want to hug her
Beautifully Done BB
Author's Response: Hi my BB,
Thanks as always for reading and reviewing-it means the world you know. Towel..ah..Edward is trying to give Bella the space she needs...its hard for him...LOL quite literally :) I want to hug her too! Glad you enjoyed hun. Lots more on the way for you.
XO
Les
Reviewer: lattecoug (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
Oh, I'm betting it was either James or Jane...probably James. Ewww.
Great chapter! I didn't want it to end. I skied a bit when I was younger and can completely picture that horrible time between the crash and getting life-flighted. Yikes.
Can't wait for more! I'm really enjoying this story. :)
Hugs,
Barb
Author's Response: Hi Barb! Thanks for reading and reviewing-you know how much it means! Hmmm-interesting choices-we'll have to see who was behind the wheel. Glad you enjoyed...skiing accidents are horrific...trust me. Lots more on the way, hun! Hugs, Leslie
Reviewer: PINKSAPPHYR (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 05:13 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
Nope, I'm sure it wasn't not a random street game.......I bet on James or Jane...Angela isn't that creepy or sickminded!!
That chapter was quite heartbreaking and emotionally intense...But they still have a lot to deal with, so I understand why she wants to go slowly...............But gotta say that I'm undoubtely waiting for her to figure things out very very quickly...
He's to yummy and exceptional to wait THAT long ...............;)
Update soon
Author's Response: Hi there, Thanks for reading and reviewing. James or Jane huh? Interesting...we'll have to see. Glad you enjoyed-its going to take some time for these two - they have a host of issues that go beyond physical ones to get over. He is yummy, isn't he?
Update on the way. Cheers
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
Wow, Bella truly has changed Edward for the better and I'm not sure he's even begun to fully grasp how much so. Obviously he realises the obvious - he doesn't want to be an asshole philandering womaniser anymore; but the gentlemanly side of him buried deep inside is tearing screaming out of him. *L*
Bella, you are such a tease! *L* Understandably, becauase as much as anyone would want to fall into bed with a speciman as hot as Edward, she does have a lot of emotional & psychological damage to her self-esteem to work through.
P.S - I don't think psycho driver is a random...they have it out for Bella and my money is on a VERY jealous and vindictive Tanya!
Author's Response: Hi there hun! Thanks for reading and reviewing-it means so much. She is a tease isn't she? LOL -I'm evil I know, but you are exactly right-she has a host of issues to deal with and that's not going to happen in a nanosecond not matter how hot he is. Interesting choice on the driver :) We'll have to wait and see. Lots more on the way. Cheers Les
Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
oh no...was it james????
Loved it, post soon plesae
Author's Response: Oh-we'll have to wait and see. Glad you enjoyed and thanks for reviewing! Update on the way.
Reviewer: RaeRae (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
Loved it! Just like every other chapter that you write xD
And while I am sad about you prolonging the lemons, I understand that need to "take it slow."
I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing-it means the world! Oh, its not going to happen very quickly for these two--there are way too many issues for both of them to get through. Lots more on the way. Cheers!
Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
Oh my... It started out so sweet, and now this. My guess - it was James, playing some sick game with Edward, and thus with Bella. Or maybe Jane?
I'm already addicted to this story as it is, but after this, I officially can't wait for the next update :-)
Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks for reading and reviewing! James or Jane huh? Interesting...we'll have to wait and see! So glad you are enjoying! Update is on the way. Cheers!~
Reviewer: lolabean (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
Argghh! I now love and hate you for taunting me with all this deliciousness! Please please please update soon! I know I'm begging but I love this story too much to care about a little thing called self respect! ;)
And as for all the car shenanigans...it's just got to be James, right?!
Lola x
Author's Response: Hi there Lola! I know...I'm evil, eh? Glad you enjoyed, hun. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! James...hmmmm-maybe, or maybe not...we'll have to wait and see! Cheers, Leslie XO
Reviewer: cullenscougar (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
Aw Leslie that was mean, lol. I really thought they'd be getting together finally in this chapter. They were almost there but of course Bella has other things to think about and can't be spontaneous. But Edward really does seem to be changing and respecting her need to be slower than he wants. At least she's acknowledging that she wants to be with him when she's ready. Let's just hope it's not too much longer. I don't think I can wait, let alone poor Edward.
And who was in the blue Lexus? I think it was Jane, jealous that Edward doesn't want her anymore. Of course, it could also be James, or even Jacob. Who knows?? Meanie, keeping us in suspense, LOL. Great chapter, as ever. hugs Clare x
Author's Response: Hi Clare! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I know-I'm evil-I can't help it! You're so right-Bella does have alot to consider-its difficult for her to wrap her head around how she's feeling-its going to take some time for her to trust him completely. Hmmm-interesting choices on who is behind the wheel...have to wait and see! Hugs, Leslie XO
Reviewer: Nyomi (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
WOW! Literally WOW woman! That was such a freaking fantastic chapter! :D Loved the wine and relationship analogy, the heated kiss, the fact that he remembered she was vegetarian (very sweet), the 'game of discovery' (very nice! :D) and definately Edward's patience in regards to her needs. Her story was gruesome, but didn't make me feel queasy with too much detail - it was just right! Poor girl. That would have hurt like hell. Love Rose for holding her hand the whole time, too.
What a crazy mom she's got! LOL. Gotta love her! The end car scene was scary too! I was holding my breath the whole time. I'm guessing it'll be Aro somehow? Can't really see how, but he's my first guess. I don't think James would do it. Can't wait to find out!
Oh, and I also noticed that Edward's eagerness was great. Yes he was pushy, but that's him. He's used to getting girls and he's so damn eager for Bella, he was being complimentary (Bella wasn't offended, lol!) and I didn't think him a jerk. I loved how he told her he'd attack her every chance he got! :D Brilliant job!!!
Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you so much for reading and reviewin and for your kind words. WOW to you! So happy that you enjoyed this chapter. It was extremely difficult for me to write. You're the first person to mention her mom-she is a bit out there! LOL
Interesting choices on who is behind the wheel-we'll have to wait and see.
Poor Edward-he's trying so hard...its going to take some time for her to trust him completely.
Lots more on the way.
Cheers!
Leslie XO
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 21(Shabbyapple)
Great chapter!
I loved the end of their date! It was so sweet! =)
The car following Bella was creepy...It could have been some guy trying to scare her by playing a game, or it could have been James (because he might have seen Bella with Edward). It could have been Jacob (for the same reason) or it could have been Jane, spying on Edward and getting jealous because he was with Bella.
Looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Glad you enjoyed..interesting choices on who is behind the wheel-we'll have to wait and see! Lots more on the way. Cheers, XO
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