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Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

This was a great chapter!

I loved the ending of their dinner date! I can't wait to see what will happen next...

Looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!  Glad you enjoyed and there is lots more on the way. XO

Reviewer: Jarbles (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

talk about a cliffie!! how frusterating!! I still love this story though.



Author's Response:

I live to frustrate you all!  MWUAH!   Lots more on the way.  Thanks for reading and reviewing. XO

Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

Fabulous! Am loving this story. Having just read thus far in one sitting I have to say, you need to update this sooner rather than later!!!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  WOW-all in one sitting!  That's amazing!  Update is on the way.  Hope you continue to enjoy.  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing-it really means the world.  XO

Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

Wow. Usually I'm not into lemons, because after some time, they are kinda repeating themselves. But this one - it was just a start, but they were so sweet, and I really like it that they are taking things slow. Amazing, thank you!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!  I'm glad you enjoyed and recognize that they are going to take it slow...that's not to say it won't be hot and steamy, but neither one of them want to rush into anything and as much as we would all love for them to...well, it doesn't work that way for them... they both have deeply rooted insecurities and issues to deal with.  Lots more on the way.  XO Leslie

Reviewer: twiggs66 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

Hey!  We didn't learn about ice wine...not that it matters.  That little squeeze of lemon at the end was great!  I can just picture Edward in the rain, under a streetlight...has RPatz ever done one of those?  Did you get the inspiration from one of his pics?  anyways...another great chapter, don't leave us hanging too long, update soon!



Author's Response:

Hey there...we didn't hear about ice wine...yet...the night isn't over *evil laugh*  I've not seen him in dark in the rain...but somehow I think it would be extremely hot.  Lots more on the way.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XO

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

well, i'd say he is forgiven.  reading bella's thoughts when edward was late was kind of heartbreaking.  after they had such a great time the night before, to be let down was kind of depressing.  yes, he had a good excuse - but it is also a trust thing.  getting caught up in your art is great, but being unreliable isn't so great.  hopefully, edward will work on it.

that photoshoot in the rain - very hot ;)

and yes, they can total do things besides have sex. lol.  i approve. he helped her with her prosthetic!!!  =D one step at a time.



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks hun for reading and reviewing!  Edward is trying hard-he's been a selfish ass for a very long time-he's a work in progress you could say.  Lots more on the way for these two...yes, there are many things they can do to *ahem* entertain themselves.  XO

Reviewer: Dark Angel (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

You are EVIL! LOL! leaving me hanging like that.....



Author's Response:

I know..I am evil *evil laugh*.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!  XO

Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

You're evil. So evil! I can't believe you left it there. God damn, you're good. Oh so good. Aside from the torturous end, I really enjoyed Bella's talk with Charlie. That was written so well and it was very emotional. You're doing a fantastic job with this story.



Author's Response:

Hi there!  I know...*evil laugh* its hard to stop myself...I so enjoy leaving you all hanging.  I'm glad you are enjoying-there's a lot more on the way  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.  XO

Reviewer: cemcclelland (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

Hot!  Hopefully James or Jane won't ruin the whole thing...



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Now, whatever would give you that idea? *evil laugh*  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  XO

Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

Hawt!



Author's Response:

:) Glad you enjoyed!  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  More on the way.  XO

Reviewer: aswinfor (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

Beautiful.  The connection between the two of them is just simply beautiful. I so look forward to reading each interaction you've created between them, each time a little more intense but for different reasons.  I absolutely adore this story.  Even more with every chapter I read.  Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.  And, for showing us all of their flaws and insecurities.  So many times these stories just have the perfect Bella and perfect Edward and while still being great stories they lack the reality of the real world.  You've done an excellent job here.



Author's Response:

Hi there.  Thank you so much for your review and your kind words.  I am glad that this story has touched you.  That was my hope in writing it.  That people could see that you don't have to be perfect...that everyone has their flaws and that life is about finding someone who can accept and embrace them.  I hope you continue to enjoy.  There is much more for these two to come.  XO Leslie

Reviewer: Fairest of Them All (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

Ahhh no fair stopping there! (please excuse the completely unintentional rhyme)



Author's Response:

:)-I love to leave you hanging. Hope you continue to read and review.  Cheers

Reviewer: demmy (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

I'm thinking... don't stop there!!



Author's Response:

:)- LOL-lots more on the way.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vashbak (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

*Squeel!*



Author's Response:

:)  Thanks for reading and reviewing...Squeeling is definitely permitted and encouraged.  XO

Reviewer: Mcullen123 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

KEEP GOING ITS SOOOO CUTE!!! :D



Author's Response:

LOTS MORE ON THE WAY!   Thanks for reading and reviewing. XO

Reviewer: Cindy0510 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

OMG, be still my beating heart. Please please don't make us wait too long!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Update is on the way.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!  Cheers

Reviewer: Belladonna75 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

Woo hoo!  I loved the idea of taking the photos outside in the rain!  Brilliant!



Author's Response:

Yes...there is something to be said for pics in the rain...its difficult to do, but oh so rewarding in many ways---especially this particular way.  Thanks for reading and reviewing! XO

Reviewer: Nightchill (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

wow, hot photo shoot! and it seems like there's going to be some hot stuff happening in the next chapter. I'm glad that Bella is not too upset about Edward beeing late and that she trusts him when he says that he was painting. i think it was James in the car. I hope that Bella tells Edward what happened. great update!



Author's Response:

HI there!  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  James eh?  Hmmm-interesting choice!  Lots more on the way.  XO

Reviewer: littlemiss185 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

Awesome!!!  Great chapter!!!  Love the story!!!  I can't wait for the next update!!!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I'm glad that you enjoyed.  Lots more on the way. XO

Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

Well done.  They are progressing nicely and I am loving this sweet caring Edward.  What a change for him from the beginning of the story. He is every bit as unsure of himself as Bella.  Can't wait for the next update, I mean you left them at a very pivital moment.



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks for reading and reviewing...Edward was lost at the beginning of this story and you are right, he has just as many insecurities as she does.  Let's hope they can help each other...I'm a sucker for the cliff *evil laugh*.  XO

Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 04:24 AM · On: Chapter 1

I don't know how it'll work out either but I'm so excited to find out!!!!!

Reviewer: cullenscougar (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

AAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH.

So close yet so far..... you're a meany Lesley.

Beside that, I love this chapter. I love how it shows Bella talking to Charlie and how she interacts with her friends. LOVE the photo shoot. Mmm wet Edward, yum.

Can't wait to see what happens next. Hugs Clare x



Author's Response:

hehehehehehehehehe-  I am mean and nasty...this, you should know :) *evil laugh*  Yummy indeed.  Lots more on the way, Clare.  Thank you for reading and reviewing.  Cheers!

Reviewer: RaeRae (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

Fast update :)

I think I love you!!

Yet hate you at the same time for stopping the journey there!

I can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

:)  Glad you enjoyed.  I know you hate me...its easy to do-but I have to leave you hanging-you know this!  *evil laugh*  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.  XO

Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)

so glad he made it to dinner, can;t wait for the journey post soon plesae



Author's Response:

Journey is on the way!  Thanks for reading and reviewing. XO

Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 7(shabbyapple)

this will be good either way... this story is really amazing!!

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