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Reviewer: LadyExcalibur (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 28(Shabbyapple)
Perfection, that's about all I can come up with.
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing-I'm so glad that you are enjoying this story!
There is much more on the way. Many more obstacles to overcome for both B and E.
XO
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 28(Shabbyapple)
sniff
Author's Response: Hi there!
*sniff back* Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm sorry if I made you cry!
Lots more on the way. (maybe even more *sniffs*)
XO
Reviewer: Cora (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 28(Shabbyapple)
She did it! Wonderful, Bella!
You're right, Revelstoke is very beautiful. And now I have a desperate craving for skiing - I haven't been for 2 years and I'm really looking forward to our skiing vacation in February *sigh*
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Go ski! Take every opportunity-no matter where you go-take it all in before you hit that mountain. No matter which one it is, it really is beautiful and meant to be enjoyed.
Lots more on the way.
XO
Reviewer: nightline (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 28(Shabbyapple)
The first part of this chapter was hard to read - I was about to scream when James showed up, and the meeting kinda didn't get better... For the second part, I have no words, but I'm in awe of you for being able to portray such emotions so vividly. Thank you.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, with one demon less to deal with!
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing! I know! It was supposed to be difficult-its how he's feeling-conflicted, trapped, wanting his dream of being in the gallery to come true.This was also an important chapter for Bella-facing your fears, your past, is difficult and she did it!
Lots more on the way.
XO
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 28(Shabbyapple)
Excellent chapter! I loved everything about it!
I knew that it was Edward standing in the doorway! I'm glad he decided to come and support Bella while she faced her biggest demon. =)
Looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Glad you loved it! You guess Edward-yeah! Not everyone did so congrats!
Lots more on the way,
XO
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 28(Shabbyapple)
I was right about Edward :) Now how about some celebratory sex? lol :)
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Yeah-you were right!
Hmmm-celebratory sex? I'll see what I can do. *wink*
XO
Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 28(Shabbyapple)
hope she let go some of the anger that she has been bottling up for so many years.
<3 and wanting to be with bella instead of smoozing with the yuppies. still want him to get his work shown though!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
This was extremely difficult for Bella to confront her fears. It's a release of the past, of anger and resentment. All necessary for the healing process.
Lots more written and on the way.
XO
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
I'm hoping that dark figure is Edward. How do you know so much about wine? Do you drink different kinds of wine frequently?
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Edward in the doorway, huh? Perhaps... but, then again, maybe not. Wine... well, I'm good friends with a someilier and we benefit frequently from his love of wine! I've now come to know which ones I like paired with which meals... oh so delic!
Lots more on the way.
XO
Reviewer: anna42hmr (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
fantastic stories, cant wait for more, fingers crossed its edward come to see her and not james!!!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Glad you are enjoying! Edward, eh? Maybe... maybe not! Lots more on the way.
XO
Reviewer: jeanieinabottle (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 20(Shabbyapple)
Bella dancing again was very emotional. I actually cried. Bella's character in this story is very compelling. While the previous chapters have been about Edward's character being damaged and out of control it seems to me the story is more about Bella's being ready to trust again. I'm happy this is changing from the common Edward f's everything in a skirt to something more.
Author's Response: Hi there!
I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter. It's quite an important one in their relationship. This story is about a lot of things - they both need to heal, in very different ways and hopefully they can find their way together.
Lots more on the way. I hope you continue to enjoy. The road these two will take is not smooth, but in reality, what road really is?
Cheers,
Leslie
Reviewer: acullen-masen (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
Hey!!!
Cliffie...again??!!!...you're sooo bad!!!...don't you any compassion for my poor nerves???!!!...heart attack on its way right now!!!...kidding!!!...I LOVE your story!!!
Andrea
Author's Response: Hi Andrea!
You must know by now how much I love to leave cliffies! I can't resist them! No heart attack though! There's much more to read!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
XO
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
It's Edward in her doorway. Jane conned his ass into going to New York so she can hit it one more time lol
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Edward at the door, eh? Hmmm-possibly. *evil laugh*
Lots more on the way!
XO
Reviewer: jeanieinabottle (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 9(shabbyapple)
O.K. Edward is a user. He has no respect for women and you are going to let Bella go into the lion's den. I hope she takes her whip and knows how to tame him by the end of this fic!
Reviewer: kayphere (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
I continue to LOVE this story! I know it's Edward standing in the door way! It has to be. I love also how you've turned him around to be in tune with Bella... nice transition albeit somewhat rocky... hope he will hold his course.
Thanks for the quick updates!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad that you are loving this story! You think it's Edward, eh? hmmm-maybe...maybe not :) The changes in both E and B are significant. The road will always be rocky when two people who have been stuck in their ways for so long, find a way to change for the better.
Lots more on the way. Hope you continue to enjoy.
XO
Reviewer: jeanieinabottle (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)
Oh, this Edward is a real prick! It's going to be very hard to vindicate him. Will Bella see something in him that is worth the pain? This could get ugly!
Reviewer: lattecoug (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
Ooh another cliffie, you evil woman! Love it! When Edward saves her at the beginning--wonderfully written. My heart was racing. You can really see their connection deepening as their feelings for each other grow. Beautifully written.
James and Lauren? Ewww!
Can't wait for the next update!
Barb
Author's Response: Hi Barb!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Your support means so much to me!
James and Lauren- yeah quite a pair, aren't they? E and B continue to grow together-there's a lot more on the way for them. More challenges to be faced.
XO
Les
Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
noooooo ... dont leave it like that !!!!!!!!!!! gahhhhh ...
Author's Response: Hi there,
yeeesssssssssss You know I can't resist!
Lots more on the way!
Thanks for reading and reveiwing.
XO
Reviewer: twiggs66 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
I hope the dark figure is Edward, maybe New York wasn't as fun as he thought it would be. I'm really not sure who's trying to kill Bella, I thought it was Jane, but now I'm thinking maybe James is just crazy enough or possibly Lauren? Edward has made such a turn around...he's so human now. He was always sexy, but dare I say, he's even sexier? Another great chapter, the dinner Edward cooked w/Jasmine Rice sounds great...post the recipe?
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Hmmm-Edward in the doorway - perhaps! Well, Edward hasn't gone to New York yet, but he will be. I love your theories about who is stalking Bella. We'll have to wait and see!
Both E and B have changed quite dramatically as their relationship develops. He is pretty hot!
Lots more on the way.
XO
Reviewer: kmac17 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
Im finally all caught up...loved it....cant wait to see whos in the door way...hoping its edward. Post again soon please
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Edward in the doorway? hmmmm maybe... maybe not! *evil laugh*
Lots more written and on the way.
XO
Reviewer: warpedweaving (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
Well my hope is that Edward is standing in the door...
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Edward in the doorway, eh? Hmmm - perhaps? Maybe not... we'll have to wait and see.
Lots more on the way.
XO
Reviewer: cullenscougar (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
How many updates to all your stories in a week? Are you superwoman? Just love this story and how it's working out. Edward is so in love with Bella, and vice versa. But who is the mystery stalker? I did think Jane but now hmmm, maybe Jacob, jealous that Bella wants Edward? Looking forward to finding out who the man in the doorway is...if it is a man? hugs Clare x
Author's Response: Hi Clare!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Your support means a lot to me.
Yep, lots of updates! And more on the way!
I'm glad you're enjoying these two - the road may not always be smooth, but it rarely is.
I love your theories on who the stalker is! We'll have to wait and see.
Lots more on the way.
Hugs,
Les
Reviewer: Twijules (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
This is getting absolutely juicy! Love Rose and Emmett in this chapter, the Text between Bella and Edward, really cute. Can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! Lots happening with both E and B!
Much more written and on the way. Hope you continue to enjoy.
XO
Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
holy shit I hope its Edward, I love these 2 together, I was afraid he would do something stupid at the party, or something that would misread
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Edward in the doorway? Hmmm-maybe... maybe not.
Glad you are enjoying these two!
Lots more written and on the way.
XO
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
Great chapter!
It might James or Jane who is following her...It may even be Mike. You never know.
I hope that the person in the doorway is Edward....perhaps he changed his mind and wanted to come support her? Or someone called him after Bella's accident?
Looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I love your theories! Edward in the doorway? hmmm maybe - or maybe not!
Lots more written and on the way.
XO
Reviewer: tone (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
One dayone of these Cliffys is going to kill me!
Poor Bella. And wow super Edward with the bump to the back to the head.
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
You know I love a cliffie-I can't resist!
These two have a lot ahead of them! Much more written and on the way.
XO
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