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Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 31(Shabbyapple)
Poor Edward, Poor Bella. What the heck was James thinking? What a moron!!!
I loved it.
Can't wait for more.
Rox
Author's Response: Hi Rox!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ah James... moron indeed.
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: busyreading (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 31(Shabbyapple)
wow
just wow
this story is one of my most favorites, i love their relationship
i wasn't expecting Jane though! you got me with that one!
poor Edward!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing and for your kind words.
I'm glad that you are enjoying this story and these two.
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 31(Shabbyapple)
Poor Edward! But I am glad Bella is okay!
Please update soon!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Poor Edward for sure!
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: emozing (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
Wow -- I've been lurking since yesterday when I started reading!!! I just caught up with you on chapters.
I don't really know where to begin to review -- would have probably been easier to do after each chapter -- but that's your fault that I didn't. Sorry for the blame. Was just to good to stop.
First of all the story line is so heartwrenching, heartfelt, unexpected and totally different from any other FF that I have read (and I read alot). Not just from Bella's physical challenge but Edward's mental challenge. And then to throw in the friends -- they just seem to complicate with all their love and "I'm just trying to help!" They help take the story to a deeper level of reality.
You've done an awsome job on character development. Bella is so strong, determined yet insecure and loving. Edward is also strong, determined yet insecure and "unloving". Their personality clash has transpired into a love for all times. They are so totally made for each other and were lucky enough to have you as the wonderful author that gave them life.
I have felt every range of emotion that life has to offer. I can't imagine where you take them from here. Can't wait to see how you continue from 'You are my life.'
Well sorry for this review to be so long. But as I have told you on Finding Forever -- you are among the ones I refer to as my favorites. (lostluggate, duders79, lattecoug, swimmingbee, etc).
So please update soon -----
Author's Response: Hi Hun!
Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing and for your amazing words. You made my day!
I'm glad that you are enjoying these two. You totally understand them and how far they have come. Sometimes, in life, when things seem the worst, is when you find something that makes you want to change. That's what this story is really about.
Never apologize for a review! It's a wonderful gift that I am honoured to receive. That you have included me in your favourites along with the talented authors you have mentioned that I love is amazing to me. I am honoured.
Update is on the way.
Hope you enjoy.
XO
Les
Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
Oh my gosh ... I was a few chapters behind, so when I got the story alert I had to play catch-up first ... this story has come a LONG way! I love how the characters have developed, changed and evolved and James, ick ... so slimy! Okay - bring on the next chapter ... and THANKS!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing and for your kind words!
I'm so glad that you are enjoying this journey.
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: BookAddict (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
OMG. I think I've gone a little crazy, trying to fit my new addiction to this story into my schedule. I probably would have foregone work if I could have... lol! This is amazing. I normally am not a big fan of angst... but when you fit in so much beauty and hope, along with some really dynamic characters, well, I'm suckered right in! Update soon, please, and thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing and for your kind words!
Forgoing work! Gah! (*whispers, I write at work somtimes...shhhhh* hehehe)
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: dalzieldawn (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
OH MY GOD that was awesome. I thought it was either Jane or James they are both nut cases. I really love that Bella tried to save Edwards paintings, I hope now that can heal together and finally tell each other how they feel. Bella deserves happiness after everything she has been thru. I really enjoy you version of Renee & Phil. Renee is so over the top but so real and just fits the story. Keep up the awesome writings
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I'm glad that you enjoyed! Ah, Renee! Gotta love her!
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
she's been thru so much and now this
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
She has been through a lot!
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: EdwardxJacob (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
T_______________T Not the paintings!!!!! I think I just died a little inside. But yay for alive characters!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Stay strong! More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
Oh *sigh!*
That klast line is a killer, "You are my life." SO BEAUTIFUL! I love this story.
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing and for your kind words.
I'm glad that you are loving this story.
More is on the way.
XO
Reviewer: Tima83 (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
oh wow, I love Artistward. I had absolutely no clue that it would be Jane and that she'd burn down the studio. I had a feeling, though, that Bella would go back for his paintings. They are just so incredible together--so in sync, so compatible. I adore this story, and will be recommending it at the end of my next chapter (I write a story called Victim).
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and for your rec! That means the world to me. I will go and read your story!
I'm glad that you are enjoying these two. There is more on the way.
XO
Leslie
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and for your rec! That means the world to me. I will go and read your story!
I'm glad that you are enjoying these two. There is more on the way.
XO
Leslie
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
Damn, this girl is like a cat, nine lives and all! Loses a leg, nearly mowed down by a maniac in a car, and now arson survivor! Let's hope the rest of her life can be drama free! So, Jane. She's nearly ruined everything, the psych hospital will be too good for her! What will happen now? Can Bella feel safe with Edward ever again? Will he ever paint again?
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Excellent questions! You are so in tune with this story!
Lots more on the way, where hopefully your questions will be answered.
XO
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
Aww! Edward isn't such a dick anymore. I knew Jane was missing a few screws. That bitch is crazy.
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewinig! Edward has definitely gone through some significant changes.
Yeah, Jane... well you're description says it all!
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: physcofarmgurl (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
Of course it was Jane she was so fucking crazy! What Edward said to Bella at the end was so sweet! I can't wait for the next update :)
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Glad you are loving these two.
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: evelynvm29 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
it was a great chapter and I just loved the end of it.
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Glad you are loving these two.
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: kemp17 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
Really good chapter. I just hope Edward dosent allow the guilt to pull away from her. Loved it and cant wait to get Bella's POV. Update soon.
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Glad you are loving these two. Edward is going through a wide range of emotions right now. His life has turned dramatically in the past few weeks and especially after this.
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
Wow! I thought it was James! lol! Good twist there :-)
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Glad you enjoyed the twist!
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
Never expected her! good concept though. Glad you got rid of her!!!!! The last sentence was fabulous. Glad you used it! Love your story immensely and cant wait to get updates. Great chapter!!
Hugs, Stephanie
Author's Response: Hi Stephanie,
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Glad you are loving these two.
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
Great chapter!
I knew it had to be Jane. She was the only one to be that jealous.
I was scared for Bella and Edward for a moment...I'm glad that they are okay.
Looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: warpedweaving (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
I was really thinking it was James but I guess he's more the straight forward attack kinda guy and not as devious as Jane. I was on the edge of my seat for this one!
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Jane is devious-you are exactly right.
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: anira4 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
This is absolutely lovely. And I'm very thankful that I get to read it. That last sentence made my breath caught, so sweet. Update, soon please!
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I'm so glad that you're enjoying this story.
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: E_Cullens_gurl_09 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
Oh wow...that was good! Something told me it was crazy Jane! LOL
Glad they both are ok...enjoyed the excitment! LOL
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Glad you are enjoying the excitement!
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: leechlover81 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
Poor Bella, she just keeps getting crap handed to her. Wondering how serious her injuries are, hopefully we will find out next chapter. Update again soon, I love this story!
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
More will be revealed about Bella and her injuries next chapter.
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
It was Jane, bunny boiling psycho. Awwww Edward loves Bella, how crazy was Bella trying to save Edward's paintings? They can always be replaced (sort of) but Bella couldn't be, imagine how devastated Edward would be if she had died. Finally she is awake and on the mend. I forgot about Renee and her hippy dippy ways - LOL Can't wait to find out what happens from here.
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
You're right, E would have been devastated-heck, he already is with everything that's happened.
Ah, Renee! Gotta love her!
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: demmy (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 30(Shabbyapple)
oh my god- I read this so fast because I had to see if everything was going to be ok. So, so good!
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Glad you are enjoyed! Reading fast is good!
More on the way.
XO
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