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Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 05:34 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~Foundations and First Sightings~
lol enjoyed Bella's Visions of the wolves and what sounds like a typically mischievious Jacob :)
Author's Response: Jacob will be a little bit mischievious in the story, but essentially this is an Edward/Bella romance. There will NOT be a love triangle and I am not going to demonize Jacob. He will actually get his own love interest and be a major part of this story. :-) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~Foundations and First Sightings~
Great story and writting
Author's Response: Thank yoo so much! I'm so glad you are enjoying it. :-)
Reviewer: LikeAir (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~Foundations and First Sightings~
Really like where this is going. Please continue!
Author's Response: Thank you! Many of the chapters are already written and updates will be frequent. :-)
Reviewer: gr8k8 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~Foundations and First Sightings~
THIS SEEMS VERY INTERESTING. I LIKE THAT THEY ARE OLDER. UPDATE QUICKLY AND OFTEN, PLEASE!
Author's Response: You already picked up on the older thing huh? Yes, it always bothered me that Bella was so young and that Edward looked like a teenager. In my story, Bella is 23 and Edward was turned at 25. It's a bit more flexible. Bella is more fully "cooked" as a person and she won't be a weak, insecure pushover. I hope you enjoy the story, thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Musicallis (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~Foundations and First Sightings~
Oh. My. Gosh. I have to say that this is amazing. I also need to say that if you don't continue to update, I may have to threaten you with a giant, squishy mallet. :D no hard feelings or anything xx
Author's Response: Well, squishy mallets don't do much damage...but I guess if you hurt me too bad, then I wouldn't be able to write. Good choice, LOL. Not to worry! I already have a LOT of the chapters written and updates will be coming out frequently! Thanks for reading! :-)
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~Foundations and First Sightings~
this is brilliant!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: yeuxdor (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 1 ~Foundations and First Sightings~
Wow! What a compelling beginning. Original idea and really exciting. I am very much looking forward to watching this unfold!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am having a ball writing this story. I have a lot of the chapters already written. This is essentially an Edward and Bella love story, but I also have some other interesting pairings coming up later in the story as well. The next chapter should be out soon! :-)
Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~Foundations and First Sightings~
Good background chapter. I'm excited to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I found it hard to "come down" from the excitement of the Prologue to write background material...but it is necessary. I try to inject some hint of what's coming or a bit of excitement into each of my chapters. The next one should be out shortly. I have already written a great deal of the story. :-)
Reviewer: jessicasheehan (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~Foundations and First Sightings~
Holy crap, that was seriously the best start to any story that I have read. I can't wait to get the next chapter.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I have much of the story written already and the next chapter is already waiting for approval. It will be several chapters before we get back around to the Prologue, but things will get very exciting...I promise. Hehe.
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 1 ~Foundations and First Sightings~
Some dream....and some story! Please continue....
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have a lot of the chapters written already, so updates should be fairly frequent. :-)
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2010 05:57 PM · On: Prologue
Oh wow, another great story to add to my favorites! As you can tell, I'm liking the direction of the story thus far. Looking forward to upcoming chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it. I have a lot of the story already written, so updates should be out frequently. :-)
Reviewer: BellaFlan (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 05:26 PM · On: Prologue
Hey Sarita, welcome to Twilighted. Yep, this was the chapter that sucked me in the day I was checking the recently updated stories to see if BBS uploaded. I have to admit, I didn't see you coming *groans at own bad joke* but I sure am glad to have found you :)
Author's Response: Hey BellaFlan! Thanks for the welcome and for supporting my writing--it means a great deal to me. Har har to your bad joke. I hope to keep sucking you in....hehe. I'm glad you found me too! You referred me a whole lot of readers and found me a second beta too. I think I'll keep you around. :-)
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Prologue
really good
can't wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter is in beta and should be out shortly. I have a lot of the story written, so updates should be fairly frequent. :-)
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 12:30 AM · On: Prologue
sounds like fun... interesting premise
Author's Response: I have 23 chapters of the story already written. A lot happens, I hope you will enjoy the ride. I know I am having a blast writing it! Thanks for reading! :-)
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Prologue
This sounds like a very interesting story! I can't wait to see what happens!
Author's Response: Thank you! I have 23 chapters already written and I hope to get them out fairly quickly. Thanks for reading! :-)
Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2010 09:30 PM · On: Prologue
This is a very compelling beginning, and it seems different so far from anything I've read before. That's really saying something! Great start!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. I have about 23 chapters written, so I am pretty far into the story already. I have some editing to do on them (yikes) but I hope to get them out fairly quickly. :-)
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