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Reviewer: wordslinger (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 3: Muffin Briberies and Long Talks
Aw, this chapter made me feel all warm and fuzzy. :)
Author's Response: heh thanks hon! i submitted chapter 4 last night. so it should be up soon. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 2: Home
EXCELLANT CHAPTER - JAKE JELOUSE - CANT WAIT TO SEE HOW THIS WILL UNFOLD - I KNOW YOUR ON FF - SO IF I CANT WAIT - IWILL READ IT THERE - BUT NOW I HAVE TO AH! DAMN!
Author's Response: hehe! i'm gonna try to update chapter 3 tonight sometime. so it should be up tonight or tomorrow depending on shabs busy sched. i think you will like where the story is going i hope. thanks again!
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 1: Of Rainforests and Jet Planes
OKAY HERE WE GO......
LOVE THE FACT THAT YOU WANT TO STAY IN CANON - MAKING LEAH A LESBIAN , DIFFERANT BUT COMPLETELT DOABLE -YOUR TAKE ON IMPRINTING IS DIFFERANT - SMEYERS HAS IMPRINTING AS AN IMEDIATE BOUND - YOU CAN NOT BE APART WITHOUT FEELING PAIN - YOUR IMPRINTING IS DIFFERANT AS JAKE & NESSIS HAVE BEEN APART FOR MONTHS AND THEY WHERE APART WHRN SHE WAS OFF WITH ROSE & EMMETT! THATS COOL A DIFFERANT SPIN.
TWO LINES IN THIS CHAPTER ROCKED
" YEAH SETHY ALL THE COOL KIDS ARE DOING IT" LOVE EMMETT
"DAD WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO ADMIT YOUR JUST NOT THAT SCARY ANYMORE" LOVED THAT ALSO!
TAMMY ( SORRY FOR THE LONG REVIEW)
Author's Response: hehe thank girl! it did cause them both a serious amount of pain to be apart, but is was necessary so they dealt with it. it will cause them more pain to be apart as the story progresses hehe. thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Gerolling (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 2: Home
great first chapters. Cant wait to read more of your story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I plan to update sometime today so check back for that! thanks again for reading and reviewing!! =)
Reviewer: rin1591 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 2: Home
I love it so far... I hope you choose to continue... Thank you for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing! I am continueing it. I have through 13 written, and once I get through this test tomorrow I should have chapter 14 written soon. I'm trying to catch up posting with ff.net. Thank you again!
Reviewer: psund123 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 1: Of Rainforests and Jet Planes
I really enjoyed this I cant not wait till the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm currently editing chapter 2 and should post it sometime later this evening. When that will post on twilighted is up to my awesome validation beta. I hope to hear more from you as the story continues! =) Thanks again for reading and reviewing it is so appreciated!
Reviewer: Todream (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 1: Of Rainforests and Jet Planes
Thought would give a shout out to you over here at Twilighted. You know I love your story and am so excited we are bonded with our love for J/N. I am so glad we have found each other!!!!
Author's Response: you are the sweetest ever! i am so glad we found each other too! thnx bebe you rock my socks
Reviewer: dyingXdasies (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 1: Of Rainforests and Jet Planes
This is cute I love Nessie and Jake stories keep posting.
Author's Response: Thank you! I shall keep posting. I have the first 13 chapters written! =) Thank you again for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: nawaliy (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 1: Of Rainforests and Jet Planes
I think this story is good but the more chapters you put, the more I will begin to see the drama.
GOOD LUCK
Author's Response: Thank you for the words of encouragement. The drama will definitely start soon! I hope to hear more from you as the story continues! The main drama of the story, will come much later on but there are hints within the fluff hehe. Glad you enjoyed it.
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