Reviewer: Nellie2011 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2013 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 30: Bliss
loving this story! It's always great to see the volturi get their asses whipped ( which i hope is comming soon), particularly so that we can see a Jake and Nessie baby ( this whole story will be waaaaaaaaaaaaaay too much of a tease without him/her).
Reviewer: Momica (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 12: Of Conversation Hearts & Spoken Affection
FINALLY THEY KISS... LOVED IT. :)
Reviewer: Momica (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 8: Hiding in Plain Sight
KISS, KISS, KISS..... :)
Reviewer: Momica (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2012 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 6: The Start of a Tradition
I'm really caught up in your story .... but let them kiss already... :)
Reviewer: Siobhan_Ni_Ris (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2012 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 30: Bliss
This has got to be my favourite fanfiction ever written. i have read so manyJ /N ff where the authors have just rewritten twilight with renesmee and jacob instead of bella and edward you really made the story your won with new pltlines etc. I also admire how tuned in you are to the charcaters of the original twilight saga I hate when authors change personalitly traits, abilities and other facts to the way steph meyer wrote them. Kepp up the amazing job and please update faster because i am just dying to read more .
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2012 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 30: Bliss
Poor Brady and his mom! I hope Edward and Carlisle can do something for his mom! I loved this chapter, I loved how normal it was...too bad they couldn't crisen the desk! The'll have to try again! lol
Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: wrighter (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2012 09:05 AM · On: Chapter 30: Bliss
Very well written. I could do without the intimate details but that's why the rating is what it is. I love how you have given depth to the characters andd the progression of their lives. Keep up the good wrok!!! I can't wait for the next chapter(s) but take your time to make them right(write?)
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2012 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 29: Here With Me
This story just keeps getting better and better! I love it!
Dixie
Reviewer: Chope (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 30: Bliss
Thank you for updating. Please update again soon. Loved this chapter it's great they are together. Can't wait to see whats going to happen next.
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2012 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 30: Bliss
Omg. I can't get enough of this story...and now i have to wait for more! Please update soon!....Please!!!! :D
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2012 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 29: Here With Me
this story is amazing. i hope you'll write more soon!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2012 09:22 AM · On: Chapter 27: When the Body Speaks
*fans self* wow that was hot. but i'm not complaining at all!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2012 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 25: Escapism
*wicked snicker* what a bad boy! LOL
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2012 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 20: Truth and Love
*sigh* finaly
and just a side thought, aro is scary and he reminds me of the child snatcher from Chitty Chitty Bang Bang. both seriously give me the heebee jeebees
excellant chapter!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2012 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 15: Letters and Hybrid Revelations
THIS STORY IS VERY ADDICTIVE. LOLZ
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2012 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 12: Of Conversation Hearts & Spoken Affection
beautiful! i'm in tears!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2012 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 1: Of Rainforests and Jet Planes
yep, i had a feeling it would be leah!
Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2012 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 1: Of Rainforests and Jet Planes
I am still loving it :] No, Amber is not a ginger but that really would be wild!
Reviewer: alwayswriting4life (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 10: On the Hunt
this story is sooooo good!
Reviewer: alwayswriting4life (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 9: First Date
love! love! love!
keep up the good work lovie!
Reviewer: alwayswriting4life (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 8: Hiding in Plain Sight
i really love this story
awesome writing and keep up the good work
Reviewer: alwayswriting4life (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 7: Car and Driver
love it love it!
keep on writing!
Reviewer: alwayswriting4life (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 6: The Start of a Tradition
i love this story!
Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: alwayswriting4life (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 5: Thought Police
please continue this story, I will be sad not to see how it ends
Good job on the writing!
Reviewer: alwayswriting4life (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 4: On the Street Where You Live
im not going to lie
your story is so addicitng! I can't stop reading it!
good job
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