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Reviews For Take the Ice
Reviewer: GreenEyes22 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 1: Minnesota Nice

I absolutely LOVE this story!! I happened to come across it while looking at different titles and I'm so happy I decided to read it!! I can't wait until you update again!!!

Reviewer: anne2097 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 14: More Than Words

So sweet ... I loved that!

Reviewer: ObsessiveEdwardDisorder (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 14: More Than Words

-giggles spastically-. teehee. THEY FINALLY DID IT!!! ;D nawwwww, i love that their first time together was so unperfect/ perfect XD.

lovely, lovely chapter. well, story really. i just discovered this little gem while browsing through the 'most recent' section on twilighted, and damnn, i am super glad i clicked on the link.

not to be a bitchy pusher, but i've got six letters for you: u-p-d-a-t-e! :D

i kid i kid, i'll take what i can get. which hopefully includes some smexy time. a lot, actually. a lot of smexy time.

Reviewer: Scar24 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 14: More Than Words

I absolutely love this story. It's such a wonderful idea and I'm an avid hockey fan so it makes it even better. Thank you so much for sharing your wonderful talent.

Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 14: More Than Words

Excellent chapter!  Lots of 'interesting' things... very well written... thanks for updating.

Reviewer: Didi04 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 8: Don't Think, Just Jump

Here's me giving u love. I really like this story havin fun readin it. Thanks for this great story.

Reviewer: Didi04 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 7: Stay the Course

I'm laughing my ass off here. That was a really good chapter.

Reviewer: Nevaeh Rae (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 14: More Than Words

That was perfect!!

Reviewer: Summerlover10 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 14: More Than Words

awww i love seeing them together! kinda like a married couple lol but more fun and young lol :P UPDATE SOON PLEAASSEE

Reviewer: Didi04 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 6: Who Says You Can't Go Home?

I am so getting the feeling of The Cutting Edge, but since I own that movie clearly I am a fan. So loving this story. U r doing a great job I can't stop reading.

Reviewer: Didi04 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 5: Baby, It's Cold Outside

Totally enjoying myself with this story. Poor Edward god he's hot. Anyway keep it up.

Reviewer: Didi04 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 02:31 PM · On: Chapter 2: Unexpected Connections

Getting really into this here story, liking it alot and am glad i tried it out i wont stop reading until your done posting.

Reviewer: Little-lamb (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 14: More Than Words

Wow! This colossal chapter was 19,881 words long. No wonder updates take so long!

I really liked how she's begining to trust Esme - that's sweet. '') I think she should just give up on her Mum, because Renee just doesn't deserve her attention.

I can't really imagen Alice and Edward doing 30's dancing, but you made it sound so good! I'd love to see that in Breaking Dawn or something, if for some reason the director decides to add it in ;)

And of course, the ending scene was especially hot. You should write more lemons ;)

So, all in all, loved it!

-HayleyAgneau

Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 14: More Than Words

AWESOME!  That was a great LONG chapter!  Thanks!

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 1: Minnesota Nice

WOW!  I think it was really worth the wait.  I hope someday SOON that Bella can say the three words back to Edward!

Reviewer: laurell (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 14: More Than Words

still loving this! can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens next! keep writing - laurell

Reviewer: ksw3 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 1: Minnesota Nice

Just found your story, I will keep reading.  I have also read This is not my Life.  i agree with you.  Great story that has now completed.  Looking forward to more reading of yours.  Thank you for it.

Reviewer: ksw3 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 1: Minnesota Nice

Just found your story, I will keep reading.  I have also read This is not my Life.  i agree with you.  Great story that has now completed.  Looking forward to more reading of yours.  Thank you for it.

Reviewer: Tammygrrrl (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 14: More Than Words

AWWWW... so sweet! I just LOVE LOVE this Edward!

Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 14: More Than Words

Lovely.  Thank you!

Reviewer: Nightchill (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 14: More Than Words

yay! it finally happened. I'm glad that they are getting closer. Did Edward ever hear her say "I love you"? I hope the bitch Renee get it together and start beeing a mother to Bella

Reviewer: Kad1282 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 14: More Than Words

Luv it and thank god for a lemon!! I am so releived they got their UST resolved!!

Please update soon I love this story!!

Reviewer: latuacantante98 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 1: Minnesota Nice

Ooh la laaaaaaaaaaa! XD Love the love scene! Totally believable. The first time I did it I didn't come. It would have been bull if she did. LUV LUV LUV!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 14: More Than Words

Edward put the biscuit in the basket! FINALLY! But on a serious note, the whole love scene was so tastefully done and not porno-rific. Thank you for that! It's exactly what their first time together should have been. This chapter was just amazing :)

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 14: More Than Words

I loved this chapter! Everything about it was great!

I can't wait to see what happens next!

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