Holy emotional turmoil, Batman!

Author's Response:

Yeah, I was in a really dark place writing this apparently. See why I didn't stick with it!? :) Thanks for reading!! 

I would have pressed assault charges on that bitch! Crazy mood swing stalker!

OMG!!! Poor Bella.  I agree with Esme, Charlie should have said something.  It would have been devastating but it would have been better for her to deal with it than now when she was already starting to heal.

Author's Response:

:)  Tough chapter all the way around. 

Wow. That's all I got.

Author's Response:

I stunned you speechless - is that a good thing? :) 

I did enjoy the chapter of Edward piecing together is obsession with Bella from his first meeting of her at breakfast after Alice and Bella's graduation.  He never kept her far from him mind.  Wanted to get to know her better.  It just seemed like fate was always against him.  Either she was not in Forks.  She mentioned had a steady boyfriend and was happy.  Crushing Edward's heart and in reality shutting down his ability to establish an emotional bond.  Because he was still in love with Bella.  He finally realized that he has always wanted and loved Bella.  It was time to end it with Tanya.

Can't stand Tanya.  She's pregnant by someone else who doesn't want to do anything regarding the baby.  That's why she's been harping on Edward to move in together and meet the parents.  She's doing it to save her skin.  Also the fact she was 3 months pregnant and has a bump.  Not right.  Normally the bumps show up after the 4-5 month depending on the woman.  Especially for the first child, after that one the body was used to stretching out and bump could appear with 1st trimester.  At least that's how it worked with my first, didn't start to show until about 4 1/2 months.  My second I wasn't even 3 months and had a bulge.  Of course he was born at 10 lbs 1 oz.  Just her desperation towards Edward especially after how she talked to him and treated him in the restuarant and again just outside.  Two hard slaps on his face for remaining calm.  She slapped him based on her assumptions he cheated on her.  Granted he was flirting with Bella and gazing at her with feelings.  She jumped to conclusions and kept saying he cheated even after he denied it repeatedly.  Wonder if it's a guilty conscious causing her to think if she has done, he has also.  Especially the way Edward described Tanya always needing it and wanting it within the hospital with the threat of being caught.  She's ambitious with her career.  Who knows she might have slept up the ladder for more attention.

Bella's POV regarding the anniversary gift from Edward.  Very romantic and relaxing. Victoria is beautiful.  I have actually visited the area myself.  The Gardens are exquisite.  I visited them in the summer (June.) Living in Arizona visiting those Gardens and Seattle area really showed me what the color green really was and the most colorful foliage and fauna I have ever seen.  Very relaxing and beautiful place to stroll and view the scenery.  To finally hear Edward tell Bella he loved(s) her.  For Edward to hear from Bella that she also loved(s) him.  Edward made her feel safe, secure, and beautiful all at once.  He was worshipping every inch of Bella.  Great weekend for both Bella and Edward.  Too bad it had to turn so horrible so quickly after their bliss.

I was so excited to read in the story you had these outtakes. Thank you very much because I was starting to wonder what the hell was going on in Edward's head. That boy threw me for a couple of loops...

All I can say is thank fuck he realizes he loves Bella....

Tanya is one crazy biatch. Great outtake!!

MMMM,the inner mind of Dr Cullen   ,

That was totally wicked!!!

"Hope that made you feel better, sweetheart, because it's the last shot you'll ever get.  Stay away from me and stay away from my family.  The next time you see me, do not speak to me.  Do not look at me.  The only time I want to hear from you or see you is if we happen to be working on the same case.  We're done."

Oh yeah bitch E don't play...

So...ummm...why the hell did I have to go trolling for stories to find this shit?  Like I'm supposed to be your Beta and I have to find this on my own?  Ugh...no respect for the friendship.

Argh!

Author's Response:

*hangs head*

Well, you got it as an outtake (didn't you?) And that was before you were on board officially. Sorry I didn't tell you about it!!!

Forgives? 

wow, well he actually handled that quite well.  Although he should have told this a looooooooooooong time ago.

Would love to be a fly on the wall when he confronts his family (HINT HINT).

Loved it.

 

I love EPOV. Your story is wonderful and I always anticipate an update! Take care

Nut up or shut up = the best line in Zombieland!

Author's Response:

LOL!!! Wasn't it though? I thought it sounded like something Emmett would say and I had to use it!!!