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Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 06:05 PM · On: Love Triangle
The talk with Cat was as could be expected. She even accepted things well, after the shock. She have courage. I try to imagine Jessica or Lauren in the same situation, and can only imagine them going hysterical! :-P
These reunions at Emily's kitchen are always animated. I imagine it is a sizable room, to accomodate all these giants confortably.
I hope Ami and Kaleb can find a way to handle Seth. I know he is just trying to play his role, but they were so happy before... :)
At least Cat made peace with Ami. But I don't see she coming anywhere close to Kaleb in the near future, if she can help it.
Oh, noooo! The Claire syndrome all again!! Luke and Sophie?!??? KIAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!!! X-D
Geez! They really should already have told about imprint to Cat! No options now. At least, maybe, it make things easier with Kaleb. A very tiny maybe. :-}
Ah, Andy, thank you for this story! It is enticing, but light. Pleasant to read like few. ;)
Author's Response: Hehe... you know I had to do a child imprint again, its innevitable. It makes the story much interesting and gives me the reason to do a sequel.
Anyways its my pleasure that you're liking it so much. Thanks!!!
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2011 01:27 PM · On: New Life
Hannah was glaring at Ami. What? Jealousy? Does she already know Ami will be the godmother?
'It was weird seeing him so young and knowing that he was my father.' I imagine. They both must look like around 25 years, like every active shifter. So, father and daughter seems to be the same age. Oh, this must look strange, even for the people in the secret. :)
The talk between Ami and Seth was sweet. Poor Seth, didn't even know what he was doing with Lizzy exactly. Was just a kid! :-]
But, most importantly, all is forgiven, and they can begin this father-daughter stuff from scratch. Don't mess up, Seth!
I'm curious to see how will the new Pack get along with the Cullens. And, also, to see the famous Emma, finally. P-)
Author's Response: Jealousy is an ugly monster... she can't accept that Ami and Claire became closer than her. No she doesn't know about Ami being godmother and also she doesn't like Kaleb. Maybe again jealous.
Yeah they look around the same age, maybe Seth a little older as he had lived longer, but still people could see them as brother and sister.
Not all teenagers are promiscuous and I wanted to show that with Seth. He wasn't stupid, just was a scared virgin....
Thanks!!
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 07:55 PM · On: Unwanted
'Amelia, now that you know, why don't we talk calmly?' GRAARRH! Sam get on my nerves! He can be so dull! He have no empathy!
'The real reason why I don't want to be alpha is because I can't. I think you are the true alpha.' That is very interesting. She just must be the right kind of spirit for the job. I should have known that the old Kaleb would have tried to assume the command. :)
The Cullens came! Wonderful! I hope to know Emma. Hmm, now that I think of it... Seth knows her since before Ami is born. And he is old enough to have the necessary control to stop phasing, if he wants. Nonetheless, he still keeps phasing until today. Why that? Not the typical behavior of a shifter with a mortal imprint... :-}
Author's Response: You know Sam is just trying to still be a leader... he can't see that is Ami;s job now to be the one on top.
Ami is the right alpha because in one of the books of twilight, I think it was BD, Leah said that if Javob wouldn't have been alpha it would have been Seth. I looked it up and I found a family tree and it says that a decendant of Seth was family to the Blacks... thought I would make it interesting to make a Clearwater the next alpha, not a Black like Kaleb.
I didn't answer all your reviews, but be assured I read them. Thanks a lot for reading and can't wait to see what you think of the rest of the chapters...!! :)
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 08:49 PM · On: The Truth
Embry? And Cat? Well, he found his "mystery woman", it was about time. Hmm... Was not how I was thinking in bring Cat into the fold, but will do. :)
But Luke will not like it. To put mildly.
Ooooh, right! Embry and Cat. This is what Amelia was hiding from Luke! I should have figured it out when Amelia described it happening. :-/
So, Alice now can see something of Jacob, Seth and Embry? Interesting.
SETH?!? Geez, I swear I wasn't expecting that! It's impossible that he didn't suspect. :-P
Author's Response: I wanted to give Embry someone special and spicy... who better than Catlyn. You're not the only one who wanted Cat to end up with Luke, but it would have been too obvious.
Its not that Alice can see things about Jacob and the guys, but that she can see better around them. She's getting accustomed to them and they are becoming so much part of her life.
Well remeber the other guys told Seth that Ami's mother was with someone else...
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 08:00 PM · On: All an Act
Be the truce between Kaleb and Luke a lasting one.
Oh, Nessie didn't come! Regrettable. But at least we came to know about Taylor. :)
Seth have someone? Emma? He is my favourite Wolf from the books. I would like to know more about her.
Damn! Things with Cat were as bad as I thought they would be, if not worse! And no imprint. Very bad possibilities for heartbreak here. More, I mean. :(
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 06:09 PM · On: Warnings
Oho! Jacob, Seth and Embry. Good to see then again! They came like the 7th cavalry! I didn't get how many vampires there were total (way more than 3, I guess), but Amelia and the others would be in dire straits without help! :)
Hmm, I think that, if Jacob is there, Nessie can't be far. I hope so!
And I also hope some Cullens come to help, too. Would be interesting to see how it would go with the new Wolves. I wish Bella comes. X-)
Despite Amelia's doubts, I believe when the three say they didn't know about her father. While I'm not certain, Quil is becoming more and more of a suspect. But it can be what you want us to think... :-]
Author's Response: I couldn't go writing without some of my fave wolves.
About Ami's father... it could have any of them...secrets from the pack stays in the pack, that's the rule.
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 04:33 PM · On: Stronger than Imprinting
Oh, no, no, no! Not Luke! This is worst than funny looks, in the bad way! :-{
Oh, well, it did go well. Finally they settled the things between them, Luke and Ami. I just hope Cat can be brought into the fold. :)
'We talked about how it was to kill vamps and what it felt like. Also, about the various things the old pack told us, including the Cullens. With this, he had to laugh that I had a leech in my family.' Oh, it would be fun, see Ami meeting with her cousins... X-)
Uh-oh, things are about to get ugly for someone! I hope it is not for the Wolves... :-|
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 03:18 PM · On: Birthday Gift
Hehehe! What she really wanted. I got it right. ;)
Crap! The thing with Luke was so bad... Please, tell me I won't have to wait until Ugly Truth to see Ami and Luke geting along again. :(
The ending, on the other hand... Wow! Ah, they couldn't keep going that way for much longer, we know that. Not with imprint-level love between them. Neither should they. X-)
I just hope that, since he stopped phasing so long ago, Sam's audition is not the same, or Amelia can receive some funny looks at breakfast. ^_^
Author's Response: Well with a hot guy like Kaleb who wouldnt have wanted something like that.
Some of the old guys from the pack kept a little of their extra abilities... Sam could have heard something, but of course he knew better than to interupt.
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 11:49 AM · On: Lost of Innocence
Ok, ok, I get it. Kaleb is not so bad as he looked in the begining. Not to the core, at least. However, try to explain it to Cat. And Luke! Geez...!
Poor Tommy, having to share the minds of these two lovebirds. The boy will be traumatized! ;)
'The weird thing was that I was hurting like I was denying her something that she wanted.' Which I think is exactly the case. I bet she just wants some space to figure out how to deal with Luke and Cat, and also to conciliate the old Kaleb with the new one in her head. But what she really wants... X-)
Author's Response: Finally you're starting to see Kaleb in a different way... I love him even if he was such an ass...
Tommy will be traumatized or he will learn a lot of thing!!
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 08:49 PM · On: Anger
Hahahaha! Still too weird to see these two together, and all sweet... X-)
I wish Luke changes soon. The fastest he is in on the secret, the better.
And I hope he imprints on Cat, too. Otherwise... :-|
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 07:42 PM · On: The Old Pack
It is hard not to be sorry for a guy that is so down; even a Kaleb. :)
It was exhilarating to see them reach an understanding. Now, what is left is Amelia to find out about her father.
Ack! When Luke and Cat learn about these two... :-]
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 05:21 PM · On: Heartache
As I thought. It wouldn't be fair if the Imprint wasn't both ways. :)
Oh, come on! Sam can't seriously expect her to simply drop the thing about her father!
The good thing is that they can't avoid each other forever. Sooner or later, they will phase together, and then... :)
Author's Response: In all the stories I've read nobody has mentions a double imprint... it sounds interesting so... It would have been weird for only one of them to have imprinted.
Sam will always be the same...stubborn until the end.
Thanks a lot!!
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 03:55 PM · On: Always There
Luke and Ami have such a strong sibling bond...Something like that shouldn't be jeopardized by the secret, no matter what. :(
I can only think of one reason for Ami to be so heartbroken like she is... ;)
Author's Response: I love the way they are too... and it hurt to make them suffer, but I have to make things interesting...
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 03:31 PM · On: The Gathering
Ok, William is really Leah's imprint, and she is happier than never. Good! :)
I forgot to ask before. That cottage Liam and Natasha were using...could it be Edward and Bella's? If so, they would be disgusted by the desecration, I bet.
GAAAAAHHHH!!! What? How...? Imprint?? Kaleb and Ami?!?!?? This is...GAAAHHH!!!
*deep breath* Oh, boy! Ok, ok, I'm better.
Ok, let me get this straight. In your conception, Imprint only happens when both are in human form? Hmmm... Not what I would presume, or other writers around here...But feasible. :)
Man (hmm, I just realized I don't know if you are man or woman), you like a irony, don't you? :-}
Still, I see Karma in action here. He broke many hearts, now his is broken.
Author's Response: The cottage is not Edward's and Bella's... just a ramdom old cottage.
Glad you got surprised by Ami and Kale'b imprint....
To answer about imprinting, yeah it can only happen when you're human. Such devotion and love is a human thing, so that's why I made it like that. I try to write not what is common around the fandom... I don't want to be another wolf story out there.
I'm a woman. My name is really complicated so I use Andre...
And yeah Karma bitch...
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 11:56 AM · On: Thomas
Leah have a kid? Good for her; she was so worried about this! Is her husband her imprint?
This Thomas is the new Seth of the new Pack. I imagine if he would get along with the Cullens, too. :)
The female vamp bleed??? Not canon.
For a first fight, the three of them did well. Now, I'm curious about what could Kaleb be hiding...
Author's Response: Yes, most of the fics I've read Leah ends up leaving the pack without imprinting... I told myself why is that? I decided to give her a happy life, not the tipical bitter one.
Thomas is like Seth, every story needs the happy-going kid.
In Twilight it never specifically said if the vamps bled or not....
Thanks!!
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 11:07 AM · On: Monster
You know, for a while I was worried Luke could be Ami's imprint. Would have ruined things with Cat. :)
To think in Kaleb as the Alpha...BRRRRR! Gives me chills! :-{
I hope this stay-away-from-Luke thing is short-lived.
Author's Response: Luke and Ami... is was too weird. I already thought about them as almost siblings.
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 09:26 AM · On: Out in the Open
Oh, I was hoping Luke and Cat had seen Ami shift. What a pity.
Here now, it wasn't so hard with Cat, was it? I wish well for these two.
And I hope Luke discovers the secret. Would be interesting. :)
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 07:32 AM · On: The Bonfire
Geez! Kaleb's head is a gutter! And he expects to find true love...Well, he isn't doing anything to be deserving. :-/
Hehe! I was right about her dream Wolf. ;)
GAAAH!! Ami is an Alpha?!?? Who the heck is her father?
Well, at least she gave Kaleb some broken ribs. X-)
I just wonder...Did Charlie really have a sister? Or is it just a smoke screen?
Author's Response: Well Kaleb is very confused in what he wants...
And about Charlie, he did have a brother. Ami's mother is the daughter of his brother...
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 06:41 AM · On: Edge of Control
Narnia and Hogwarts? Hehe! Harry Potter must be a classic in 2026. :)
So, Luke likes Cat... I hope he have a chance with her later. But I see his side. To tell her about his feeling when she is with someone else... Tricky!
Kaleb is in serious risk of going to the hospital, at least! My only worry is, since he is Paul's kid, that it may be too even a fight for Ami. :-]
Naive Cat.
Author's Response: Well it will always be a Clasic... and its my fave book.
Thanks a lot!
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2011 06:07 AM · On: The Dream
It won't take long now.
I just wonder who was the Wolf in her dreams. From the description, my guess is that it was herself.
Author's Response: Well you guessed right...
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 06:33 PM · On: Home and Family
Charlie and Sue... Oh, boy! What a pity!
Luke, Sam and Emily's son? I wonder if he knows about his father.
Ack! Kaleb, Paul's kid!! It explains a lot... X-{
I don't know if Sam is still phasing, but he continues a bit of a tyrant, isn't he? And clouded in his judgement. The same old Sam. :-/
Thanks, Andre, for this partial Who is Who of the Rez. Curious to know about the rest of the gang.
Author's Response: Nobody knows about the secret, that's why Ami doesn't suspect what is happening to her.
Yeah, like father like son. Kaleb is like Paul because he wants to be the bad guy, but deep inside his notuch a hot head.
Sam will always be the same. Avting rashly without thinking twice.
Keep reading and you'll find out about the others...
Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2011 06:00 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1: Revealing the Secret
In fact, I generally like OC's; usually mixed with everyone we already know. But don't worry, I will give it a try. ;)
Temper tantruns she was not used to, shaking hands to go along... I advise this Kaleb guy to be veeery gentle with Cat. I think Leah will soon have company in the records of Quileute legends! :)
I just wonder...The shifter trait is awakened in the presence of vampires. With the Cullens gone for the next decades, then what?
Nice start. ^_^
Author's Response: Well I'm glad you're giving this a chance. Hope it won't disappoint you.
Hehe... yeah Kaleb needs to be very careful, specially with his private parts.
The Cullens are gone but there are still other vampires passing from time to time.
Thanks a lot for reading it...
Reviewer: klutz (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Epilogue
that was hell good ! :)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!! The sequel is already posted in case you want to know what happens next...
Reviewer: vampgurl777 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2010 09:30 PM · On: Epilogue
noooo!!!!!! its over!!!!!!! lol. that was a sweet ending. i loved the whole thing. ever since the beginning, i knew that ami would imprint on kaleb. i think that it would be cool if there was a sequil, but at the same time, how could there b? my nephews name is kayleb, but its spelled kayleb. with a Y. lol, u probably got that. awsome job!
Author's Response: There is a sequel... so you can know more about the characters. I love the name Kaleb that's why I gave it to him... Thanks a lot for reading!!
Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2010 09:53 PM · On: Epilogue
I love the story...but you seem to have 'in' and 'on' mixed up. I switch them in my head as I read, but it is a litte anoying. It makes me feel that English is not your first language. Great story though.
Author's Response: My first language is Spanish, so I'm working on my 'in' and 'on'. My betas keep telling me the same and I guess some just slip up without our noticing. Anyways, thanks a lot!!!
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