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Reviewer: 3lli (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Warnings
lol i feel stupid now cuz my comp put the review under the first chapter
Author's Response: No problem... the intention is what matters!
Reviewer: 3lli (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Prologue and Chapter 1: Revealing the Secret
sorry for not reviewing.ive tried but my comp is stupid.anyway,im DYING to find out who her father is! most likely to me is:Sam Embry Seth(the only reason hes on here his cuz he had a fling with her mom) Quil(he only lies 4 a reason...but i though they couldnt keep secrets...). thats it. can u giv me a clue or something cuz im DYING(i think i said that already.lol)?
Author's Response: The same thing I said to Dixie... be patient soon you'll know. Also one of the guys you suspect is the one.
Thanks a lot for reviewing!!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Warnings
Great chapter, it's fun to see the old pack back and willing to help with the vampire problem. It's killing me, who the hell is Emi's dad?...Seth seems the logical choice because he was having a fling with her mom....Embry because Emi in wolf form looks like Embry in wolf form....Quil?...he's lying for a reason...hmmmm so much drama!
Update soon!
Dixie
Author's Response: Only two more chapters and you'll find out... be patient. I'm just going to say you're going in the right direction with who you're suspecting!!
Thanks a lot Dixie...
Reviewer: mickey262 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Warnings
HIM QUIL DONT THINK ITS QUIL WHAT COLOR EYES DOES HE HAVE ?
Author's Response: The color green comes from Ami's mother. So it could be any of the guys...
Thanks!
Reviewer: psund123 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 08:09 PM · On: Warnings
I can not wait to know who her father is It is killing me
Author's Response: Soon... two more chapters.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Warnings
intresting quil? why would he lie i cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response: He's not the only one lying!
Thanks!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Stronger than Imprinting
What an exciting chapter! I'm so glad Luke is now a wolf and understanding everything! I'm so curious as to who Emi's dad is!!!!! When will that bit of news come out? Will any of the old pack be coming back? So many questions…update soon! :)
Dixie
Author's Response: Its funny you ask about the old pack... well the next chapter will answer you that. Ami will know who her father is soon... like three chapters away!
Thanks!!
Reviewer: amandao (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Stronger than Imprinting
it was OUTSTANDING... i loved everything.. i feel like the number 1!! fan to this story :)
Author's Response: Well you're at the top, next to some others who always reveiw!!
Thanks!
Reviewer: yayi2284 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Stronger than Imprinting
omg so fraking good!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!! Thanks!
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 02:19 AM · On: Stronger than Imprinting
SO GOOd. I WANT MORE
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Reviewer: roxieredrose (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 01:46 AM · On: Stronger than Imprinting
so like where this is going
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reviewing!!
Reviewer: ErinJeany (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 12:14 AM · On: Stronger than Imprinting
Amazing chapter! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Erin!!
Reviewer: mickey262 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 10:31 PM · On: Stronger than Imprinting
ooooo...... cant wait for more i still think that it is embry even if there are more to chose from
Author's Response: Thanks... you'll find out who is the father very soon!!
Reviewer: Tysonlane (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Birthday Gift
As always, happy to see an update! Yay! Everyone likes a bad boy turned good by love story. I find myself liking Kaleb more and more too. I know some think Ami is Sam's... but I can't see him doing that to Emily, his imprint! I had forgotten about Seth (especially since his sister got the gene), but figure if it was Seth then Leah would of tried to of been in Ami's life more. Quil's response of "she knows??" makes me think twice, but again I can't see them doing that to their imprint. Hmmmmm.
I'm wondering if Luke hasn't phased for the same reason Jacob took longer too because he was happy with Bella.
Even if I don't review after each chapter, I'm still reading! Your story has captivated me and leaves me thinking and wondering about it longer than a story plot probably should ;) Cheers!
Author's Response: That's the whole point to start liking Kaleb more and more... I like how you speculate who could be Ami's father...
I'm glad that you're reading and reviews once in a while are good!! Thanks a lot!
Reviewer: summer_sparkles112 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 07:09 PM · On: Birthday Gift
PLEASEEE UPDATE!!! this an amazing story i love it
Author's Response: Thanks!!!
Reviewer: mickey262 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 11:06 AM · On: Birthday Gift
ok so i love ur story i think it is one of the best stories i have ever read. and on the father search ive been doing research. (well not really) but i was rereading eclispe and it said that there fur color reflects who they are. and ami has the same type of fur as embry only reverse the colors. it talks about this by the bonfire when billy is telling the ledgons sorry if i spelt anything wrong i suck at spelling things even my own name at times .
Author's Response: Well a lot of people suspect Embry and he's a possibility, but not the only one...
Thanks for liking the story so much, it means a lot to find such great readers... Thanks again for reading and reviewing!!
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 10:49 PM · On: Birthday Gift
I think you really should have made them wait a bit more to take this step. I liked the way they progressed from how they were in the beginning but they kinda jumped into that next step there. Is Luke gonna phase anytime soon? Will they be friends again or will there always be that tension between them?
Author's Response: I took things quickly because I let my characters speak to me and that's how things flowed. Luke is obviously changing physically but he might change sooner or later... no spoilers.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Birthday Gift
I'm so happy for Kaleb and Ami. I feel bad about Luke. As Angry as Luke is getting I'm surprised he hasn’t phased yet! I hope once he phases he'll understand and forgive her.
Dixie
Author's Response: Well Luke hasn't phased for a reason and it will be explained later...
Thanks for reviewing!!
Reviewer: yayi2284 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 10:49 AM · On: Heartache
eeewww ugly but i love the story
Author's Response: What's Ugly??
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 08:51 AM · On: Lost of Innocence
It's nice to see them getting closer :) It's easy to understand why Kaleb was acting the way he was. Another great chapter, now on to the next!
Author's Response: Thanks...
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 08:54 PM · On: Birthday Gift
awesome
Author's Response: Thanks Wendeline!
Reviewer: amandao (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Birthday Gift
OMGGGG!!! it was great
Author's Response: Thanks Amandao!!
Reviewer: ErinJeany (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Birthday Gift
That was beautiful. I know Luke's upset but he'll get over it. lol I'm so glad Ami and Kaleb get together finally. Although I'm surprised they had sex that quick. I figured Ami would want to take it one step at a time. Spend the night together just sleeping together with tense sexual feelings or something. lol!
Author's Response: Well its hard for a normal imprint couple to feel sexual tension, but for them its double as they both imprinted on each other... as for Luke, he'll have his moment of shine in the next chapter...
Thanks for reviewing!!
Reviewer: xjustxbeingxmex (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2010 02:22 PM · On: Birthday Gift
Wow.. was totally not expecting that. Awesome chapter cant w8 to see what happens nxt with kaleb n amelia. Update soon
Still trying to figure out who her father
Author's Response: Thanks!! Well I wasn't expecting that either but I always follow what the character wants... they take over my mind.
Reviewer: kmddeprez1122 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 04:13 AM · On: Lost of Innocence
Kaleb is more understandable now
Author's Response: That's the point of the chapter... so everyone can see why he acts like he do. Thanks!!
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