I haven't paid attention to the Tour de France since Lance Armstrong retired and dumped Sheryl Crowe. As to Audrey and Edward - I can't wait for his reaction to finding out he is a fictional character to say nothing of his reaction when Audrey tells him about Mavis and the partially written book that continues to be added to as Audrey relates all this stuff to him. Or has she negated the whole page filling process by spilling the beans? or has she stranded herself there by spoiling the story by changing the story even more - hopefully that made sense? Glad you updated......

Haven't been here since... forever and reading these last couple of chapters have made me realise how much I've missed this story!!! Just as amazing as I remembered :-D

I am happy that Audrey is now talking honestly with Edward. I am not sure she has come to her senses fully, yet though-- but I hope so. It would be really boring to have several chapters of her being all tortured and wishy washy.

I think Edward figured out that Audrey was from the future from the clues he got from their past conversations (Harry Potter) and he probably was sneaking around her while she was staying away from him and he saw her futuristic ipod. Also probably because when she knows something, she acts like it already happened or was in the past... where as when Alice is having a vision she acts like it is a possibility.

I think Alice's intervention was really too little too late to really help much, the Alice I know is so impatient, I was surprised she didn't show up sooner.

I was glad the Jacob interaction was brief and friendly and not anywhere near the mess that was in the original story.

Anyway... I'm hoping for some action now that we've had our Audrey emo interlude. ;) And I am really curious to see how you'll keep them together in the end. 

Hope all is going well for you at school and that RL isn't kicking your butt too much. 

 

Author's Response: Hi. Sorry that it has taken forever for me to reply. I've basically been doing an internship of sorts as part of my uni course. This next chapter won't be wishy washy. I like what you're thinking in regards to how Edward worked out Dree is from the future. Alice is impatient, but I wanted to do a New Moon style wait, if you get what I mean. Audrey is Not going anywhere near the Jacob mess. Lol Audrey emo interlude! Rl did kick my butt a bit, but i kicked back with awesome uni results and an awesome internship report. Thanks for thinking of me. All the best, Karry.

This is a fine kettle of fish. Kind of makes one wonder what they'd do in a similar situation. I'm not overly fond of Bella (at least as a human) but I can't help wondering if she's better off with or without Edward in this universe. Always look forward to the next chapter. Heck - is Audrey better off here or in Australia? and what really happens when the pages are used up?

Author's Response: Sorry that it has taken me an age to reply. Real life has been crazy. It is a complicated situation. It's one that Edward and Audrey will have to work through and they will have to deal with Bella added to the mix. I hope you enjoy next chapter which should be posted soon. All the best, Karry.

Oh happy days... an update!! :-D

I don't know what to say.. I missed you? Is that ok? hehe

Well, I was quite upset when Audrey refused to talk to Edward.. but of course I can understand why she wouldn't.

Anyways, moving on.. I can't quite figure out the date of this chapter without having to reread the whole story, but I did go back and skimmed the beginning couple chapters and finally figured out why there was no record of Audrey's soccer accident and head injury.. cuz it hadn't happened yet. Timeline wise... I'm so smart!

Anywho, I can only assume that spring break is catching up soon, and with it Bella's visit. I don't know if I'll be able to handle that part. If I remember correctly, in Twilight, spring break is when James and Co. showed up and Bella ran away to Phoenix. I can't be positive though, because my books, along with all my other possessions are still packed away in storage atm. Regardless.. details, details..

Back to the chapter, I enjoyed Alice's visit and the conversation shared. Good information given, although I want to know what Edward heard and did earlier that day. Obviously he didn't go to class. Anyways, I am glad that Audrey finally remembered certain things that Mavis told her and is starting to come around, not quite there yet, but almost. I'm also glad she didn't waste a whole lot of pages with her avoiding the Cullens.

Nice of Edward to show up just in the nick of time.. as his usual stalker tendencies allow. Hehe.. It's still sweet though that he would continue to keep watch over her, in that wierd vampire sort of way. I'm not sure, but I can only guess that part of how Edward figured out she was from a different time is because of her slip ups. What with knowing about things happening before they do, Biology lessons, the car accident, Harry Potter 7. Then also probably from some of her memories that he has seen, like the memory of her mother waking her up. I'm sure there's probably a little more to it, but that's all I can think of. I'm suprised I have such a good memory of some of this when it's been quite a while since I have read through it all.

Anyways, Edward is continuing to express his feelings to Audrey.. to an extent.. and I'm loving it. I am super super super excited for the next chapter.. I hope they get a chance to get closer to one another for Bella shows up..

I hope this review was better than the last. I don't know what else to say.. I think I'll hafta make a twitter and we can chat it up.. lol.

Great chapter and lookin forward to the next. Hope things are well with you.

-Heidi-

Author's Response: Sorry that it's taken me an age to reply to this awesome review. I'm sure you can appreciate how crazy real life can be. Lol it's ok to miss me. Lol timeline wise you are smart. You're right about spring break being when James and co visit. I love where your thoughts are going concerning Edward and Audrey. Thanks so much for the review. We will chat it up on twitter. Hope that you're well, Heidi. Karry.

Great chapter!!! I love that Audrey's finally coming to her senses. I was just wondering if Bella was going to play a part in the story or if she was just going to continue living with her mom and Phil....I don't know what that would be like for Audrey, let alone Edward, but it might be cool to see Edward's reaction to her. Just a thought.

Well anyways, I loved hearing more of this story, and I can't wait for the next update. I hope Edward and Audrey's relationship keeps building so Audrey can finally be almost completely truthful with him (aside from the Twilight thing).

~Madelyn xx

Author's Response: Hi Madelyn. I'm sorry it has taken me so long to reply. Bella is coming lol that makes her sound like a vilain. I think you will like next chapter. All the best and many thanks for the review, Karry.

Totally loved this chapter, i'm glad that the whole time travel issue has come to ahead. But how exactly did Edward figure out that Audrey wasnt from his time? something to do with Jenks maybe?

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm sorry that it took me ages to respond. I can only blame real life. I'm glad that you loved the chapter and that Edward worked out Audrey wasn't from his time. It doesn't have anything to do with Jenks just yet. Chapter 29 should be headed your way soon. All the best, Karry.

Great chapter! Now she gets to come clean to the Cullens. Will she tell them that they are her favorite fictional characters? Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm sorry it has taken me so long to reply. Yep, she does. Possibly, she will. I can imagine Emmett in that scene. Chapter 29 should be with you soon. All the best, Karry.

OMG!!!! What a welcome surprise after a long move across several states.

Well first, glad you're back with us. Hope things are well.

Next, wow, what can you say to that? This story, to me, has taken an unexpected turn. Well, I suppose it isn't that unexpected. But still, what is Audrey doing? Does she really think Edward is going to leave her alone now? Hmmmm...

I suppose Mavis' visit wasn't as informative as Audrey would have liked it. But she did say to live out her remaining pages. I can only assume she wants Audrey to be happy during those last pages. So why is Audrey trying to break it off with Edward? Doesn't she remember that that never ended well during the original books?

Oh I don't know what else to say.. other than I really hope Audrey doesn't try to push Edward and Bella together when she comes for her visit. Gah! You've completely thrown me for a loop. Can't wait for the next chapter! Hopefully I'll be able to fill out a much longer review. :-)

Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I hope your move went well.

All of your questions are answered in next chapter, I think. I'm sorry it's taken me an age to reply, but next chapter has been uploaded and should be posted soon.

All the best and thanks for the continued support,

Karry.

Will she tell Edward the entire truth? Will he be able to stay away? And where is Bella? Your readers need to know these things! This is an amazing story that is original and thrilling. You're very talented.

UPDATE!!! And it better be sooner than the last update or I'll kick your butt!...Thanks...

Author's Response:

Lol. My readers will find these out in the next few chapters, most of them in the next chapter.

Thank you so much. Your comments made me smile.

I felt the kick in the butt, just so you know. I think it gave me a bruise.

I'm sorry it's taken me an age to reply, but next chapter has been uploaded and should be posted soon.

All the best and thanks for the support,

Karry.

Your story is one of my favourites, of couse I'll find the time to read it =) you've no idea how excited I was when I received the notification hehe its one in the morning on a weeknight and Im working on my thesis, so lets say that it was a more than welcome distraction =P

If there's any way in which I could help you with your process let me know, it actually is what I do for a living (I'm an advanced composition professor at a university in Venezuela) and I would love to be able to read what comes next on your story =)

I'm going to sleep. I dont know your time zone, so, have a nice day or sweet dreams, pick the one that fits =) hehe

Daniela

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Daniela.

I hope your thesis is going well. That must take up a lot of your time. I'm glad I could provide you with a nice distraction.

I might take you up on your offer. I'm honoured that you're even reading my story. University has been crazy for me. I've been writing essays and completing assignments left, right and centre.

I'm sorry it's taken me an age to reply, but next chapter has been uploaded and should be posted soon.

All the best and thanks for the support,

Karry.

i am fustrated right now,,,i am not sure with audrey or mavis or you ha ha ,....no jk....seriously though i am sad that she will have to leave forsure,..i just hope it isnt something like that the whole story was pointless and he ends up with stupid bella anyways.,,,that is why i read this story for something different,,,dont get me wrong i like bella most of the time except for in eclipse lol but really i am rooting for edward and audrey and am hoping that she can be with him somehow...whether he somehow ends up in australia or she leaves and comes back to the book...but then the rest of the cullens would be lost and that would be sad and he wouldnt have them,,, :(  i dont know how this will end,,i assume you do but i am worried,,..i get why she wants to pull away but its too late i think she loves him and it will hurt either way,,,i dont want her to pull a new moon and leave him or ignore him,,,i want her to explain things to him and be honest though i dont know how they will react knowing they are a book ha ha ,,,i dont know how i would feel if i knew that,,,but seriously i think that edward and audrey should be together and screw what should be...they are interesting and i like the cullens too...hoping for a happy ending,,,for audry and edward together,,,mavis is confusing  but i think i get what she is saying but then again not really ha ha

Author's Response:

I'm sorry that you're frustrated.

The story is not pointless. I like stories with meanings or happy endings.

I do know how the story will end. I've known from chapter 1.

I'm sorry it's taken me an age to reply, but next chapter has been uploaded and should be posted soon.

All the best and thanks for the support,

Karry.

Wonderful chapter! I loved it, as usual. I kind of want Audrey to tell him now....I feel like he trusts her so much. I mean, she knows his secret, but he doesn't know hers. Don't make Edward have to go through the same as Bella! Knowing him, he would take it even worse than Bella....

Well anyways, can't wait for the update!

~Madelyn xx

Author's Response:

Thanks Madelyn.

I'm sorry it's taken me an age to reply, but next chapter has been uploaded and should be posted soon. I think you will like it. :)

All the best and thanks for the support,

Karry.