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Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2012 11:35 PM · On: One Step At a Time

Ok, I so totally would've danced around like an idiot in my room like Audrey was... but to my own songs... and I would add to the Cullen's confusion by dancing to a song that wasn't released before 2006...

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2012 10:53 PM · On: Bag Carriers

In all honesty, I'm supprised Rose hasn't snapped at her before now...

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2012 06:28 PM · On: Your Thoughts?

I would LOVE to be a scrambler!!! Especially if I were aware of my gift and could do it on command... I mean, who wouldn't?

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2012 11:13 AM · On: House Call

See, if I were Audrey, when Emmett picked up the couch I would've started singing this really annoying song that my friend taught me that has to do astronauts...

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2012 10:34 PM · On: Deja Vu ... Again

I feel like I just read about the Spanish Inqusition...

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2012 10:01 PM · On: Van

Oh, doesn't everyone hate irony? She saved someone life and ended up putting her own life in danger by doing so... well, at least her car is OK...

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 07:54 PM · On: Biology

See, my lie would've been "Someone who had this class earlier told me."

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 07:37 PM · On: Malice, Misgivings, Mirth and Mike

About what Audrey heard in the bathroom: "And here, everybody, we have an excellent example of the rather annoying habits of the typical teenage girl. These habits are commonly intensified in small towns, so good luck with the rest of your life!"

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 06:45 PM · On: Looking Glass

I just have something to say to Audrey... OK, if this is starting in the direction of the Twilight Saga, and she's taking Bella's place, then Edward shouldn't be able to read her thoughts...

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2012 05:41 PM · On: Blank

O.O I would be having a freak attack right about now if I were Audrey...

Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2012 02:17 PM · On: By the Book

I have sat here..well not literally..for 2 days and read what you have so far:)  And i love it!!  Can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: eternityisntenough (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2012 02:24 AM · On: By the Book

About time lady ;) thanks for the Darling/Cullen fix! Wonder how their meadow scene will play out :D <3 MeganWhit 

Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2012 12:53 AM · On: By the Book

Yay! Welcome back! Great chapter- can't wait to see the meadow!

Reviewer: marilau (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2012 05:25 PM · On: Food for Thought

I love all the chapter, really i love it!!! i'm new reading this fanfiction, but i love it since the begining, please updated soon i want see what happen next!

Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2012 01:17 AM · On: Blank

I was looking back at some of my favorites, and I found your story again. I hope you didn't abandon it. Please update soon!

Reviewer: Poupon (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 04:36 PM · On: Food for Thought

I do really love this story, but - oh heavens, I don't want to upset you, but it's truly meant constructively - it needs editing.  The prose is allowed to become too flowery and self-indulgent ("look at me and my erudition") instead of being focused on moving the story along and building character and relationships.  This chapter was better but the story needs better pacing.  It's such a great idea though - and I feel like you're constantly on the verge of being a great writer.  You're skilled and imaginative - just "move it along" as our American cousins would say!



Author's Response: You haven't upset me at all. I am, very much, still learning to write and I appreciate feedback, particularly constructive feedback. I do understand your criticism. I know that I have to improve the pace of the story. Unfortunately, the pace of my life is crazy fast and I can't seem to give this story enough time to write a chapter and then thoroughly review it. I've always had a hard time being succinct and more direct in my writing, even at school, which is odd considering that Maths is my subject and it is very direct and you often look to simplify rather than complicate your solutions. I'd never really thought about my writing showing off my knowledge - in fact, I had to look up what erudition means! I think that my writing, to date, is a product of the only writing I have really done up until writing this story - academic essays. I know that by writing more and by receiving constructive feedback, like yours, I can improve. I'd like to become a great writer. It flatters me that you believe that I'm on the verge of being one. Thank you for taking the time to offer me some advice. I have started another story at fanfiction.net called Adrift. I'd be interested to see if you think my writing is better there. I think that it has improved. "Our American cousins" - are you Aussie , NZ, British, Irish? Wishing you all the best for this Christmas season. I will try and update soon. Karry.

Reviewer: ginger1983 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 08:09 AM · On: Food for Thought

i had suspected it early on, and still do - the whole thing is either audrey in a coma from the train wreck or she's dead. just saying :)

Author's Response: Maybe... Maybe not. You'll have to wait and see what I've had planned. I hope that I can surprise you.

Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 01:34 AM · On: Food for Thought

Loved the update! Can't wait until the Cullens!



Author's Response: Thanks! I'll keep writing!

Reviewer: BeautifulComplication (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2011 06:51 PM · On: Read My Lips

Hi!! I know this is kinda late.. but I just figured that I could still get in a review before your next chapter. 

So.. Yay! They finally kissed. Took a lot longer than for Bella, but hey, it's all the better. I'm really glad that Audrey got the courage to tell Edward the truth and show him the book, even though he seemed to get pretty upset. I mean, who wouldn't be upset if someone they cared about told them they weren't real? But Edward still took it well, and I'm sure that made it a bit easier on Audrey. 

So the kiss. Edward is so sneaky.. what with reading the book after for Audrey's thoughts. I never would have thought of that. But I suppose it was a good way to test that the book is real.

So now Edward has all but completely confessed his feelings to Audrey, I can't wait to see where things go from here. And of course, we still have the imminent visit from Bella and of course, James and co. Lots of action and drama to come. Good, cuz I really hate to end a good story.

Hope things are well, and I enjoyed your new story and will try to keep reviewing for that one as well as this one. Good luck with managing your time :-)

-Heidi-

Reviewer: rbirdy23 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2011 01:25 PM · On: Visiting Hours

i really love your story. I hope you write more

Reviewer: Curious78 (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2011 01:44 AM · On: Read My Lips

Hey Karry,It's been awhile since i have reviewed but I had to tell you that was brilliant.  These kind of stories (either in films or books) often stumble over the reveal scene and all the fun gets sucked out of the story.  You have done a great job with this.  Somehow the story has gotten better and more compelling with the reveal.  So excited to know what will happen.  This is a seriously good chapter plot wise.  Thanks

 

Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 10:27 PM · On: Read My Lips

So happy to see this updated! I was afraid you might have abandoned it. Congrats on university!

So, Audrey finally admits she is in love with Edward. I was wondering if she was going to tell him about Bella.

Reviewer: seraph blue (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 05:05 PM · On: Read My Lips

So good. Worth the wait. The chapter ended at the perfect place, with a dreamy sigh. :-) Congrats on passing your degree!

Reviewer: prachi (Anonymous) · Date: August 18, 2011 12:59 PM · On: Fact is Fiction

Oh come on post a new chapter already........



Author's Response: Lol! I would if I could find the time to write. Fingers crossed that I will Find that time over the weekend. Thanks for the encouragement. :)

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 07:36 PM · On: Fact is Fiction

i think she might think she is off her noodle but the fact that she owns an ipod or even has that book at home proves oftherwise,,,,i am curious what he will say,,,,will he want to be with her anyway,,,,finding out you arent real could be horrifying and possibly freeing to edward and his family,.,,,to know vamps are fiction and he is not a monster,,,,,atleast for real,,,,i really hope they get together,,,,love love your story

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