// two weeks.? awww.... =[

anyways, alice definately saw

something to do w/ audrey. maybe

like they tyler crowley scene.? or maybe

something about where audrey came from.

emmett was definately hinting @ the famous

family meeting from midnight sun! & idk what

their issues might be because i don't know if edward

can read her mind, but i'm almost sure tha he can't. he

would've said something by now. i really wish rosalie would

stop being so mean, she's acting like a jealous girlfriend LOL.

Author's Response:

I'm sorry about the two weeks. :(

I like the way you think! ;)

Thanks for your review,

Karry.

I was so happy to see an update! Thank you for the long chapter, I really appreciate it!  I can't wait to read more.  I understand how stressful university can be (I'm going through final exams at the moment), but please update as soon as you have the chance!  I can't wait to see what Alice's vision was about.  Was it Audrey and Edward kissing or something that would hint that they become romantically involved?  Is that why Edward was so perplexed?  Please update soon! Thank you!

Author's Response:

Thanks, Kate.

Good luck in your exams!

That would be a very interesting thing for Alice to see - Edward and Audrey kissing.

I'll update as soon as I can.

Thank you so much for your review!

Best wishes,

Karry.

I´m liking this a lot

Very very original.

Please keep writing it!

Author's Response:

I'm glad that your liking the story, Fanfilili!

I will not stop writing it until I have finished! I am determined to finish it.  I can already see the end scene in my head. :)

Thank you for reviewing! It's always nice to hear from readers.

Karry.

OOOOOHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Sneaky!!!!!!!! What are the Cullens hinting at? hmmm.....tricky tricky tricky. I can't wait to read more! Keep 'em coming!

~Madelyn xx

Author's Response:

Thanks Madelyn!

Hmmmm... I like making people curious.

I'll update as soon as I can!

All the best,

Karry. :)

...and I can't believe there's only 57 reviews so far...really people!

Author's Response:

And... thanks for trying to encourage people to review. I know I have about 150 dedicated readers so it would be nice if more reviewed, but I'm just grateful for any reviews I can get.

I was soooo happy because I reached 100+ reviews on fanfiction yesterday!

Maybe I should have a competition between websites... something along the lines of whichever website gets to 200 reviews first gets a chapter from Edward's POV?

// NEW READER!!

i love this! i'm so

happy audrey gave

rosalie some sass, she

should give her more. it's

not like rosalie's really going

to hurt her, no matter how much

she thinks she is. LOL. & i love alice

& audrey as friends, they should hang

out more. edward never let bella hang out

w/ alice til' like new moon, so i like that she's

able to spend time w/ her. i love emmett 'darling' =]

update!

Author's Response:

Yay! Always glad to hear from new readers!

I'm so happy that your loving the story!

Yeah, Audrey wasn't going to take Rosalie's rudeness.

I thought it would be interesting to have Alice be the first Cullen to meet Audrey. I wanted to establish that friendship quicker than it is in the Twilight series. I'm glad that you like the Audrey/Alice time.

I desperately wanted to have Audrey interact more with Emmett than Bella did. There is more Emmett to come next chapter.

Speaking of next chapter, I should finish it in the next 24hrs and then it will be sent in for validation by my beta. So keep your eyes peeled!

Thank you so much for your review,

Karry.

I love this! It's awesome finally seeing what Twilight would be like from an actual person's point of view. And nice balk-talk to Rosalie.

Author's Response:

Thank you, very much, Emma!

I really appreciate your comments!

I hope you continue to like where I take the story.

All the best,

Karry.

Karry,

Ah yes! Loved how you described Edward leaning in the hallway, and his words was just so, so....Edward. Mmm,mmm. good! And those fleeting looks he would give our girl Audrey, oh and we can't forget that he was staring at her from behind the wheel of his silver Volvo! Gawd, I love this!

I'll be awaiting your next update my dear.

Thank you!

Author's Response:

You're very welcome, Liz!

I'm so glad that you think I've captured Edward's character well. I was worried about getting Edward's speech right when I was writing those scenes.

Yes... those fleeting looks. Lots more of those looks to come!

I love reading your comments! I'll be awaiting your review after my next update, which, unfortunately, will be in about 2 weeks. :( University work is getting in the way of my writing.

My best wishes for you and your family,

Karry. 

ThisStoryIsGreat!!UpdateSOON!!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I will try my best to update soon. :)

All the best,

Karry.

Hi!

I'm glad to see you've got enough time to update so quickly, more reading to do for me :)

I'm happy about the fact that this character is such a far cry from Bella (don't get me wrong, I've got nothing against sensitive girls, but the helpless/clumsy/depressed atmosphere in the movie really annoyed me at times). This one is feisty, witty and has a sense of humour, thank god!

I'm actually still wondering whether Edward and the others have any real power(s) over her..? After all, we don't know their side of the story. Maybe I'll find out in the next chapters..

Author's Response:

Hey there!

Yes. I did some writing over my mid semester break, when I probably should have been studying, but oh well. :)

I understand what you mean in regards to Bella's character. Perhaps a good discription is damsel in distress? I didn't want Audrey to be clumsy and I wanted her to be a bit more feisty. I'm glad that you're liking her characterisation. :)

You'll find out as the story progresses about whether the Cullens' powers work on Audrey.

I have actually considered writing a chapter from one of their points of view as a bonus chapter or something like that... but it would give too much away and I like the element of mystery that results from only seeing one side of the story.

Thanks for reviewing! I love reading what you think!

Many thanks,

Karry.

Yay for the banners! :) And it's awesome that your Dad is editing for you, you must have a great relationship. 

Wow, Audrey caught the ball. We know Bella would have gotten whacked in the face and I found myself actually pretty surprised that Dree was pretty handy w/the ball. Mike being described as a golden retriever is pretty classic, I can easily picture him standing there w/his tounge hanging out and tail wagging (LOL!). 

Edward called Audrey out on the lie, as expected, but she handled it really well by throwing his own secret back in his face and I loved how she didn't back down to Rosalie in the parking lot. Finally, she is making the story her own and I am loving her fortitude. Alice's happiness at the fact that Audrey wants to be her friend in spite of Rosalie's rudeness is so sweet--always love Alice. I think it is becoming imperative to find out exactly what the Cullens think is up w/Audrey and which (if any) of their abilities work on her...

As always, loved the update. :)

Author's Response:

Yes! Audrey can catch a ball! I wanted Audrey to be a bit more coordinated than Bella. It's just another difference between the two. :)

I couldn't resist using the classic golden retriever discription for Mike, because you're right, it suits his character perfectly.

I told you were very good with your last review. :) I wanted Audrey to show some fortitude. Being that little bit older than a teenager means that Audrey has had more life experiences and that's why the Rosalie snubb didn't sit well with her.

I love writing Alice parts!

All shall be revealed about what the Cullens think of Audrey, soon. ;)

Thanks so much for the review!

Again, thanks so much for the banner!

Until next time,

Karry.

 

 

Oddly enough, it was Alice that made up for the wait.  Don't worry about the long posting time though, it's more important that the chapter comes out the way you want it too than it being done quickly.  I'm not sure how I feel about Edward at this point, but Alice sure has my curiousity peaked!

Author's Response:

Thank you, once again, for reviewing!

I loved writing Alice's and Audrey's interaction in this chapter. I'm happy that Alice made up for the wait!

Thanks for understanding about the long time between updates. I couldn't post a chapter if I felt it was not written well.

You shouldn't have to wait much longer for an update though. Chapter 8 has already been sent in for validation, so I imagine it should be up soon. My beta, aerosoldoc, is usually rather speedy.

Hope you enjoy next chapter. Please keep telling me what you think!

Until next time,

Karry.