Reviewer: eyes of topaz (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 09:12 PM · On: Black and White

Wow!!  I didn`t expect Mavis to show up but it was very intriguing and I am glad that Audrey is going to follow her advice.

 

Author's Response: Yes. Mavis was meant to be a surprise.

Reviewer: eyes of topaz (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 08:43 PM · On: A Picture Paints...

hehehe...i would definitely find a reason to visit a hospital that Carlisle worked at!!!!

Great chapter..I am thinking that Audrey is going to have to give in a little and give them some answers though....

Author's Response: Lol me too! Audrey will give them some answers in chapter 17.

Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 08:30 PM · On: The Mystery of Audrey Darling, by E.C.

I loved that I finally got to see what Alice saw in the picture! Thank you lol I thought she might have been seeing another future with Edward and Bella instead of Dree and Edward.

So the old women wasn't actually in her room she was just dreaming! dun dun duuuun! I wonder how she's going to break the news to the Cullens in the end.

I don't think Edward will save Bella in the next chapter. The chapter will end right before it happens because authors are eeeeeviiiillllll like that ;)

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one

Author's Response:

Muahahahahahahaha... sorry I was practicing my evil laugh. lol. The fact that I have to practice an evil laugh proves that I am anything but evil. Next chapter will definitely not end in the school parking lot.

I'm glad that I could give you some answers in regards to Alice's visions. You're very welcome.

Thank you so much for being so supportive and for being an awesome reviewer.

I will try my hardest to write the next chapter as quickly as possible.

Take care,

Karry.

Reviewer: eyes of topaz (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Escaping Mike

I loved this chapter.  You have captured all of them so well, specifically Alice and I love the fact that the story is familiar yet new...awesome!

Author's Response: I try and make the story familiar but new. Thank you!

Reviewer: eyes of topaz (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 07:35 PM · On: Malice, Misgivings, Mirth and Mike

I absolutely loved the interaction between Audrey and Emmett...how can ya not love Em?? LOL

And I think the anticipation is half the fun so I am glad you are not rushing in to her meeting Edward...

Author's Response: Oh I love Emmett's character and I wanted to let him have more page time in my story than he did in Twilight. I'm trying to write things as they feel right and I think that it's important to establish relationships before moving forward.

Reviewer: writegina2 (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2010 05:37 PM · On: The Mystery of Audrey Darling, by E.C.

Whoo Hoo! an EPOV! J I’ve got my own happy dance… :D It was written differently than I expected and I liked all the flashbacks to key parts of the story.  It seems like you got everything in there pretty smoothly—which had to be a challenge.

Edward worrying about Audrey and the “constricted feeling” in his chest makes it seem like she really has replaced Bella in this story and has become not just a curiosity but a love interest for Edward… which is far more than I had really thought she meant to him before. Makes me wonder what role Bella will end up playing in this story. Nice to see that most of my assumptions were right on w/a lot of other things, though… if I do say so myself… hee hee, did I ever tell you how modest I am?? (But you know that just means that your foreshadowing and story building was really effective.) The “olive green” eyes kind of freaked me out trying to picture that… I even Google searched “human eye colors” to try to find it! LOL! I think I am just going to picture her with regular green eyes… much prettier.  It is also very nice to see that the Cullens picked up on every single one of her innuendos and actions that involved them, right down to the stick in the window.  I was exceptionally pleased to find that it was Edward in her room during the “Mavis night” and that it was he who brushed her cheek and that Mavis was a dream rather than a visitor. Not that that would mean that she wasn’t truly visited by Mavis, just that she was visited in her dreams.  Nice set up at the end… time for answers, indeed… time for the next chapter! Now we’re rolling! Can’t wait for the epic chapter! Yay!

 

BTW, Congrats on the nominations! Will have to check that website! :) 

Author's Response:

Yes! You finally got your EPOV!

It was definetely a challenge to fit all the flashbacks together and make the story flow well. I took extra time planning this chapter because I knew I had to fit the pieces together.

I told you that you were good! lol but I couldn't tell you that you were correct at the time. Well, you are very modest and I've been told that I'm very humble. I'm proud of my humility. ;) Thanks. I'm glad that you think that my foreshadowing was effective.

Olive green eyes freak you out?! Hmmm... they're just a green eye with a slight brownish tinge, but you imagine the eyes however you like lol.

The Cullens are observent. I'm glad you liked Edward's part in waking her up. Yes. Mavis wasn't physically present in the bedroom, but she was very present in Audrey's head.

Yes. It is time for answers. Oh we are definitely rolling!

You are one awesome reviewer, Gina! I can't thank you enough for your continued support!

Hopefully, I can get the next chapter to you soon.

All the best,

Karry.

 

Reviewer: Twilighter001 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 03:31 PM · On: The Mystery of Audrey Darling, by E.C.

I really can't wait until you update! Soon hopefully!

Author's Response:

I will try my hardest to give you the next chapter soon. I'm glad to hear that you're wanting more to read!

Many thanks,

Karry.

Reviewer: eyes of topaz (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Blank

Hmmm interesting twist and you have caught me!

Author's Response: I hope that I can keep you engaged! Thank you so much for your great reviews! I think I've responded to everyone of them. They deserved a response. :)

Reviewer: GabiGabriela (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2010 05:22 AM · On: Snowballing

I dont think Edward actually heard her thoughts. Im going to guess it was illegible, very low or whatnot since he asked her what she said. I really want to know why he stormed out of the cafe though. Will hte EPOV go that far or just explain the happenings from earlier in the story? You are killing me here! I HAVE TO KNOW NOW!!!!!

I have to admit that I find your story more captivating that the books. Audrey is such a likable character. She doesnt seem to be so wrapped up in herself like Bella was.

 

 

Author's Response:

oooo... interesting speculation. The EPOV won't get as far as Edward storming out of the Cafeteria. It will mainly explain the happenings from earlier in the story. I kinda like how the EPOV turned out. It's just awaiting validation, so it should be up soon. I'm sorry I'm killing you. Truly, I am! lol I can just imagine you grabbing me by the collar and shaking me as if trying to get me to spill some information.

WOW! I'm extremely humbled and flattered. My gosh... seriously? You find my story more captivating?

 

 

...Sorry. Someone just had to pick me up off the floor. Well, umm, if Stephenie Meyer hadn't come up with this magnificent world then I couldn't play around with it.

I'm glad you like Audrey. I tried to make Audrey seem as though she deeply cared about people and could easily relate to their situation.

You know what makes this review even more special? You are my 200th reviewer!!!

Thank you so much for the review and the amazing comments!

I love hearing from you,

Karry.

Reviewer: Valentina19 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2010 06:07 AM · On: Snowballing

This story is getting too good! I think if Edward read her thoughts it might have been about Lauren and Jessica and the rumors they were spreading. Thats all i can come up with : (  Im very antsy about the van incident, if it plays out like it did in Twilight then the Cullen's will be "exposed" to Audrey and im very curious to see how Edward reacts to her knowing/ finding out. Also, i just love that Edward was worried about Audrey. So sweet! Please, please update soon!

Author's Response:

I was just about to head off to bed and then I received the lovely surprise of your review!

Is there such a thing as too good?! Honestly, I'm extremely flattered by your comments.

What Edward supposedly heard will be revealed in time, but that's a very original idea about Lauren and Jessica.

Yes. The van incident is on the horizon, but will it play out how it did in Twilight? It will all depend on Audrey's decisions.

I'm glad that you loved how Edward was worried about Audrey.

I'm trying to finish EPOV, which is what I hope to post next. I had a bit of a set back because I stuck my nose in the path of a goalward soccer ball. I stopped the goal, but I hurt my nose. At least my team won the game, but that prevented me writing.

Thank you so much for the review! I love hearing from you!

All the best,

Karry.

Reviewer: melaniemarks (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Snowballing

I LOVE THIS. Just thought you would like to know. 

I'm really curious to find out what he heard and what exactly caused that window to be open!

I am so excited for the next chapter! 

Author's Response:

You were right - I love knowing that you love my story! Thank you for letting me know.

I think that the EPOV might clear up some of what your curious about.

It's lovely to hear that I've captured your interest.

Thank you for the review and I hope to hear from you in the future,

Karry.

Reviewer: dhebabydoll (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Snowballing

WHAT DID HE HEAR?!! OH MY GOSH, COME UPDATE! YOU CAN NOT LEAVE ME LIKE THAT! WHAT DID HE HEAR?!!

& i'm happy she was late, isn't this the day tyler crowley was supposed to hit her? or is that tomorrow? i don't feel like going bck to read LOL, anyways she got some alone time w/ edward ;]

& yes, as soon as audrey decided to chill i her car, i knew edward was going to appear.

yes, i love their interactions... but what did he hear? i read back, & she wasn't thinking about vampires when he heard her, at least not consciously... WHAT DID HE HEAR?!!!

maybe two weeks awww =/

Author's Response:

So I'm guessing you want to know what Edward heard... am I right? LOL You'll just have to wait and see. I don't want to spoil the story for you, but I will write all the more faster for you!

It wasn't the day that Tyler's van was supposed to hit her. That is on Tuesday. Her lateness didn't mean that she missed the van incident. The van incident is what will make next chapter EPIC.

I was hoping people would like Audrey's alone time with Edward.

Maybe Edward didn't hear exactly what was on her mind at the time... ? oooo you've made me drop a hint because of your eagerness. lol

Thank you so much for the review! As always, all the best,

Karry.