YEESSSSS!!! THE EPIC CHAPTER!!!! lol I read this on ffdot net, but I waited to reveiew until you posted it on Twilighted. :D

I think it was kinda random that Dree was like "oh hey, btw's....I know your a dog" so easily lol and that he accepted it so easily, but it helps the story move along, so that's cool. She deff. had a more realistic approach to it than Bella did.

Edward seems a little too lax when Bella said she knew. I think SM's would have been like "OMG! WE NEED TO LEAVE NOW! NO QUESTIONS ASKED!!!" lol But I'm liking your ballsy Edward :)

Can't wait for the long awaited explanation scene!!!

this story is so confusing and interesting,,,,cant wait for the next one

Author's Response:

I'm hoping that confusing + interesting = good! Sorry... couldn't resist using some maths!

 

love love emmett...he willingly spoke to her so i think that he must know something about her ,,,,she isnt the normal student

Author's Response:

I like Emmett's character and I didn't think that his character was given enough page time in the Twilight series. I'm glad to hear that you liked his characterisation.

Yes. He did willingly speak to her. I think by now you would know that the Cullens suspected that she wasn't the normal student.

i dont get why she seems afraid of the cullens,,,she doesnt want them finding out about the future and she keeps a stick in the window like they will attack which isnt the case since they dont drink human blood

Author's Response:

Audrey is still trying to establish herself in this crazy world that she's appeared in. She's not so much sfraid of the Cullens, but she wary of them finding out about her circumstances. She doesn't want to be seen as a liability. She keeps the stick in the window not because she is worried of their diet, but of them snooping around her room and watching her sleep. Currently, that notion is very disconcerting for her. Mainly, Audrey is worried that they will find items that link her to her real life. Audrey believes that it would be in her best interest to appear as normal as possible at the current time.

I hope that helps.

this is crazy lol...no bella...interesting,,,but then she wont have edward when she goes home,,that will be sad,,,i hope somehow its a happy ending

Author's Response:

lol... I hope it's a good crazy.

Any ending I write will have some element of happiness or will give meaning and purpose to the story. ;)

It was so sweet, the short moment between Charlie and Audrey(:

 I think Audrey was very noble in doing what she did, plus, that means she gets some Edward-alone tim(wink, wink) x]

 NOW START WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTER BEFORE I DIE OUT OF ANXIOUSNESS!

X)

 

I'm serious though, start.

 

Now.

Author's Response:

It was lovely to hear from you! Thank you for the review!

I'm glad to hear that you found the Charlie and Audrey moment sweet. I enjoyed writing it.

It's nice to know that you think Audrey's actions were noble. Yes. Edward alone time... (wink back) ;)

LOL

The next chapter has been started and I will be continuing to write tonight and over the weekend. Hopefully I can update within the week. :)

I don't doubt how serious you are. lol I have started.

lol I'll say thank you and end this review right n

I love how you have given Charlie a more indepth role in this story. I always felt he never got his dues for being so forgiving and loving in relation to Bella's stupid antics.  And I appreciate how un-Mary Sue Audrey is in relation to her reactions from the Cullen family and certain circumstances.

The car scene was very well done, I think. And I do consider you evil for making us wait for the hospital scene... Meanie-head. ;)  Thanks for the update and I hope your busy week goes well. All the best.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!

It's lovely to hear that you like Charlie's role in the story. I totally agree with you when you say that "he never got his dues for being so forgiving and loving in relation to Bella's stupid antics". That is so true! I thought he was always very understanding and supportive and I don't think Bella appreciated it.

I'm glad that Audrey is like a Mary Sue. I'll admit I didn't really know what that term meant until recently, but after learning what it meant I am so so happy that Audrey is Mary Sue like.

The car scene was a challenge to write. I was a bit nervous about writing it, so I'm glad that you think it turned out well.

I know... I am pretty evil. lol I don't think I've ever been called a meanie-head! It's pretty cool to be called that, actually!

In all seriousness, though, the cliff hanger was done in the best interest of the story.

You're very welcome!

I hope my busy week goes well, too. It would be great if it... unbusified itself!

I hope that whatever you have planned goes well for you, too!

Best wishes,

Karry.

I absolutely love the story! It's so much better than most OC stories you would expect as most people tend to get a little Mary Sue-ish, but Audrey is perfect in the non- Mary Sue way. Love the ficcy. ^^

 

-Crystal Ball

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that you love the story! I strive to make it different from other OC stories and, if I'm being honest, better. I try and make Audrey seem as real as possible and not Mary Sueish. Thank you so much for the review! I'd love to hear what you think as the story progresses. All the best, karry.

Im loving this story so far. im enjoying how dree is replacing Bella and how Dree has so much more personality than Bella

Author's Response: It's great to hear that you're loving the story. It's nice to know that you like how dree has more personality.

i love chapters that end in a cliffhanger

Author's Response: Me too, but only when I'm the one writing the chapter! ;)

Ooo-more questions! Fascinating POV chapter though, absolutely loved it! Keep up the great work please!

Author's Response: I'm sorry. I try and give you answers and in the process create more questions! It puts a smile on my face hearing that you loved the EPOV chapter. I was a bit worried at how people would respond to it, but reading reviews like yours helps put me at ease. I will definitely keep writing and I will endeavour to maintain my standards and even try and improve on them. Many thanks for the review, Karry.

Wow, this is great! I'm really enjoying this story, and I can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review!

It's lovely to hear that you are enjoying the story. I will try and update as soon as I can. I've already started writing the next chapter.

I'd love to hear from you again,

Karry.