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Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 02:10 AM · On: Visiting Hours

i am sad and scared for audrey that she will be hurt and not end up with edward,,,i know he is a character and audrey is not but obviouslyt things are different now,,,,,and its cute that audrey thinks of charlie as her uncle now in her thoughts and not just as bellas dad,,...i caught that,,,,i hope edwward and audrety dont get hurt and i hope that bella doesnt come but i bet she will...



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm sorry that it has taken me so long to reply. I know that it looks like there could be some tough times ahead for Audrey and that she may not end up with Edward. I'm not going to lie, Audrey will shed some tears, but know that I'm a sucker for an ending that gives meaning and purpose to a story or that is happy. You don't have to be so sad and scared for Audrey. ;) I'm glad you picked up on Audrey referring as Charlie to her Uncle. I wondered if anyone would. You're the first to have mentioned it. Bella will come, but, I'll say it again, although there will be tough times for Audrey and, even though she might not understand some things, things will fall into place for Audrey. I know I'm being cryptic, but I don't want to ruin the end of the story for you. However, I hope I was able to give you a small semblance of hope for Audrey's future. Thank you so much for the continued support. Best wishes, Karry.

Reviewer: writegina2 (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Visiting Hours

Well, Charlie was far more relaxed w/Edward at the hospital than I would've thought--but, I'm sure that there's more than a little gratitude there for Edward's heroics... and the fact that he's Carlisle's son... to pave the way for a smooth start. So glad Audrey didn't have to face Jessica... that would've been a bit uncomfortable. Hopefully Tyler will spread the story around the school before Audrey goes back so she won't have to answer a ton of Jessica's questions. 

It is so depressing to think of Audrey leaving in 300 pages time, and the thing that really makes me wonder is that Alice saw Edward w/Bella before Audrey showed up. Does that mean that Bella really is his mate in this reality? Did Audrey totally mess that us? I can't see how Audrey can really fill Bella's shoes, in Edward's life, if she's going to be leaving in 300 pages time. 

I'm sure Emmett's visit will be fun! Looking forward to it. :)



Author's Response: What you've said is exactly why I made Charlie respond the way he did to Edward. I would think that a loving paternal figure would be grateful and willing to respect someone for rescuing their daughter figure, even if it is a young man. It wasn't the right time to face Jessica yet, but I thought that I should mention her being at the hospital because that seems to fit her character. Yes. Hopefully Tyler will notify the school community of Dree's story, but I still don't think that would stop Jessica. Lots of people have commented on how depressing it will be when Audrey leaves and it probably will be sad. Life isn't without it's challenges, sad times and happier times. To answer your question concerning what Alice saw with Bella and Edward Im going to refer to the movie Ever After. I hope you've seen it. If you haven't you should and if have you been fortunate to see it then you would know the scene when Henry is with Da Vinci by the lake and discussing the idea of true love and fate and if two people on Earth were destined for each other. Check out that scene. Yes. How can Audrey fill Bella's shoes in Edwards life if she were to leave? These are issues that will shape the remainder of the story. It's hard to have. Good story without a complication and this is the main complication in Audrey's story and... In Edward's. I hope that you'll like Emmett's visit. Thank you so much for the review! I'm sorry that it took me so long to reply. Hopefully the next chapter will be up next week. Best wishes, Karry.

Reviewer: sophielynn31 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Visiting Hours

Loving it!  Keep it up!



Author's Response: That's wonderful to hear! Thank you so much for the review and I hope that you continue to enjoy the story as I post future chapters! I'm sorry that it took me a while to respond. I'd love to hear from you again. All the best, Karry.

Reviewer: dhebabydoll (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Visiting Hours

ohemgee, it feels

like its been forever

since i've read this story!

 

good lie dree

telling them your

psychic, but alice will

probably take it hard when

she finds out the truth. i also

wonder if dree will stay for the

rest of the books cause twilight

seems so close to the end now LOL.

i did enjoy getting answers from alice

becuase i was really curious about what

she saw... her visions alone should be enough

to doubt dree's truthfulness. & i really wonder what

edwrad heard in dree's mind. & i'm so happy that charlie

is being nice to edward, hopefully this behavior will continue.

& yaaay, emmett's here... edward just couldn't let alice have girl time!



Author's Response: I'm sorry that it has taken me so long to reply. I'm glad that you liked how Dree decided to handle the situation. yes. Alice will most likely be disappointed when she finds out the truth, but hopefully she will be understanding of Dree's circumstances. Lol although Twilight seems as though it's close to the end, it really isn't. Dree has only been there for two weeks. I'm going to say that Dree will not gi through the same thing with the other books in the series and that's not because I don't want to continue the story - i do . I'm glad you enjoy the answers from Alice. You'll soon find out what Edward heard. Dree will make sure of that. Charlie is very appreciative of Edward at the moment. Charlie's discussion with Dree about Edward is sure to be fun. Yep! Emmett is in the house! Edward isn't very patient when it comes to Audrey. Thank you sooooo much for the review! I love hearing from you! Hope you are well, Karry.

Reviewer: Neea (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 10:15 AM · On: Visiting Hours

Plz update soon!

This is like the best fanfiction ever!

Love it!



Author's Response: I'm sorry it has taken me so long to respond. Unfortunately university has gotten in the way of my reading, writing and responding to reviews. I'm longing to leave the world of maths equations behind and get lost in my writing. Hopefully that will happen soon and I'll be able to update in the first week of October. Fingers crossed. It's lovely to hear that you are really enjoying the story. Your comments make me smile and make me want to get writing so desperately. I hope you continue to like future chapters. Id love to know what you think. Many thanks and best wishes, Karry.

Reviewer: LaughingWithEmmett (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 01:19 AM · On: Visiting Hours

Really enjoying this story. I was surprised that Dree confessed how much she knew of Edwards's background - I would think it would make it harder for her to claim that she has dreams that told her. Hmm... Can't wait to see what's coming up next. I love the Emmett/Audrey interactions.



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sorry that it has taken me a while to respond to your review. I really appreciate your comments and I wish that university didn't get in the way of things. A few people were surprised about that. You're right. Audrey is treading on very thin ice and the last thing she wants is to slip up. ;) Emmett's presence next chapter should make things interesting and fun. You'll get more answers in next chapter, as well. I really love hearing what you think. Once again, many thanks and have a lovely week, Karry.

Reviewer: writegina2 (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2010 12:32 AM · On: Deja Vu ... Again

Hmm, the dream thing is good, but I still think she should've gone w/an Alternate Universe kind of explanation... "I came from a different dimension" or something?? It would have been closer to the truth. Hopefully, Edward never has to know about her little white lies... that would be bad.

"The Count from Sesame street" ... LOL!! That was random! :) But still good w/showing how kind of scattered her thoughts were and how unprepared Dree was for dealing w/the Cullens. Would've been nice if Mavis would've given her a bit of advice on what to say rather than just saying what she absolutely could not reveal. 

So, Tyler was exceptionally annoying, just like in the series. And Edward's "no blood no foul" line was still, classically, there. It was so great of Edward to cover for Audrey w/Tyler's questions--that could've become a real problem. Audrey needs to be a little more cautious if she doesn't want to inadvertantly expose herself and the Cullens to the student body and town of Forks. She doesn't seem to be doing a very good job of remaining inconspicuous, does she? However, I did find it interesting that Edward managed to get his questions answered, but then avoided Audrey's question entirely! Enter uncle "Chuck"... this ought to be good... ;)

I will be really surprised if Alice doesn't first need to know if Audrey knows where she came from... remember, that at this point, Alice doesn't have a clue about her past--and Audrey did just tell Edward everything about his... 

Waiting **patiently** for more to come! ;) Oh, and did the deed and sent my vote for the Hidden Star Awards. Good luck!

 



Author's Response: The alternate universe explanation just didn't seem right at this point in the story. That explanation will come, but, for now, Audrey just wants to appease Edward and the Cullens without bringing in something that sounds more farcical than having dreams, even if it is closer to the truth. Yes. Edward finding out about her white lies would be bad, but Edward hopefully will understand. It's in his nature to think that the occasional lie to protect someone is ok. Hopefully he will realize this in Audrey's case. Yes. The Count was a bit random and to make Audrey's thoughts sound scattered was exactly my intention. Mavis hasn't made things easy for our Audrey. I'm glad that you liked Edward covering Audrey's back in front of Tyler. Audrey is having a hard time staying inconspicuous. Yes. Edward dodged Audrey's question, but that will beq answered in chapter 20. I like the Edward Charlie interaction I've written for chapter 19. I hope you do too. Alice might get ask that in the future, but the first thing that is on her mind is clearing up a few things that have been plaguing her thoughts. Thank you for the vote! I appreciate that and the continued support. I hang out for your review. Lol I'm sorry for how long it has taken to post chapters. I submit them every one to two weeks, but they take much longer to get validated. Best wishes until next chapter, Karry.

Reviewer: angelsmg (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 11:22 PM · On: Deja Vu ... Again

haha



Author's Response: Lol ok. :D Looking at the rating, I'll assume that's a good laugh! Thanks for the continued support, Karry.

Reviewer: Vampme25 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 03:34 PM · On: Deja Vu ... Again

Well well well. Not the Best chapter but i still do love the story and can't wait to read more!!



Author's Response: Firstly, thank you for taking the time to submit a review. It's much appreciated. I'll agree that it wasn't my best chapter, but I thought the content was interesting. I'm curious to know what you didn't like about it so that I can be aware of it and improve it for chapter 20 as chapter 19 is already submitted for validation. It's good to know that you still love the story. Hopefully you will enjoy chapter 19 more. It's a bit of a transition chapter, but It provides an answer to a question that has been on people's minds. It ends with a bang. I hope to hear from you again, Karry.

Reviewer: sophielynn31 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 01:36 PM · On: Deja Vu ... Again

So compelling!  Keep it up can't wait to read more!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's lovely to hear that I've captured your interest. Hopefully you won't have to wait long for chapter 19. It's getting validated. I would love top hear what you think of future chapters. Many thanks for taking the time to submit a review, Karry.

Reviewer: Curious78 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Deja Vu ... Again

Oh Karry!

I am so worried for Audrey now!  The Cullens are going to pick up on the lies pretty quickly - then they will hate her an Jasper may kill her (he was going to Kill Bella afterall!).  I would be surprised if Edward is not already sus on her "dreams" explaination which is flimsy.  Oh sheesh -  I don't know how she is going to get away with telling them that they are in a book etc either.

I can't wait for the next chapter and was heartned to read in the other reivews that the next chapter is coming soon.  I am loving how Audrey and Edward interact.  He is more playful with her because it is more her personallity. 

Can't wait to read what you have for us next.



Author's Response: Don't worry for Audrey. Yes. She will have to face some difficult times, she will get through them one way or another. I can guarantee you that Jasper will not kill Audrey. Edward may still need some convincing, but Audrey's explanations definitely aren't over. I've submitted the next chapter for validation already. So it's out of my hands now, but fingers crossed that it's posted soon. I'm so glad to hear another positive response to how Audrey and Edward interact. Interacting with different personalities brings out different sides of people. Audrey is very different to Bella and so Edward is still Edward but reacts differently. I hope you like next chapter. It's a bit of a transition chapter, but it holds an answer to something that has held peoples attention. Enjoy! Thank you so much for the review! Hope everything is going well for you, Karry.

Reviewer: Neea (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Deja Vu ... Again

More plz!

Love this story, can't wait to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

You shouldn't have to wait long. I've already submitted the next chapter, so it just needs to be validated.

It's always lovely to hear from you!

Thank you for the continued support,

Karry.

Reviewer: Mandaliz8704 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 01:25 AM · On: Deja Vu ... Again

That was a good out she came up with as far as her dreams "explaining" her knowledge...I wonder if it will stick, seeing as how Alice is truly clairvoyant and may try to compare and contrast, as it were.

I'm totally loving this story. I usually don't read the ones that are not complete because I'm such a sucker for instant gratification and I hate waiting for updates, but I can't seem to walk away from this one. :) You're doing a great job, and showing the characters' depth better than ... others... have. I'll leave it at that. LOL

Impatiently waiting for more... :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you liked the dream explanation. Alice is truly clairvoyant, but most of her foresight is disrupted by Dree's presence. In saying that, though, it will be interesting to see if Alice or any other of the Cullens work out that the dream excuse doesn't add up.

It's always lovely to hear that people are enjoying the story. lol Aren't most people a sucker for instant gratification these days? I'm so glad to hear that I have you hooked! I'm seriously sitting here smiling right now!

Thank you for your kind words.

Hopefully you won't have to wait impatiently much longer. I've submitted chapter 19 and it just needs to be validated.

Many thanks for the review,

Karry.

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 01:22 AM · On: Deja Vu ... Again

ha ha the count from sesame street....that was irony and i do love the count though cookie monster waws my favorite and oscar,,,,hmmm

Great chapter...love edward questioning how she knows everything.,,,,i think it is most curious how he cant get a clear read on her,,,,what does that mean? i know alice sees something and not other things,.,,i think she shouldnt get too involved in her lies ,,,its better to say not much at all because i think the lies would hurt him



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the Count irony.

Thanks! It's great to know that you enjoyed the chapter and how Edward was questioning Dree.

You will probably find out about the clear read in chapter 20 or 21.

Yes. That will be the challenge for Audrey - to not get lost in the lies and to be as truthful as she can.

The lies could hurt Edward. That's something that Audrey will have to deal with.

Thank you so much for the review!

Lovely to hear from you,

Karry.

Reviewer: vampireyouth (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2010 12:12 AM · On: Deja Vu ... Again

Love this story, this was a great chapter. I love getting to experience Edward through Audera instead of Bella, it makes me feel like I get to see a difference side of Edward. It makes you wonder if it was really Bella he loved or if it was any girl he was interested in (secrets & blood) and not being able to hear.

Thanks for the chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I was beginning to wonder what was wrong with this chapter, because no one had reviewed it. I was very happy to see your review!

I'm glad you enjoy reading about Edward's interactions with Audrey. I hope that I am keeping Edward's character true to canon, but also allowing you to see how he would interact and bond with someone who doesn't have Bella's personality.

I think that Edward did love Bella, but I'm sure that she initially caught his attention because of her silent mind and strong scent.

I want to thank you, once again, for the brilliant banner you made for the story. Many people have commented about it and have said how nice it is.

Thank you so much for the review! It was lovely to hear from you again.

Karry.

Reviewer: writegina2 (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Van

"Operation Don’t-Get-Squished-By-A-Van"LOL!

Charlie's relationship w/Audrey is really sweet and touching. And it was a good idea to have him drive her to school... initially--until someone else took her place as the victim! Cripes! Well, Edward to the rescue, of course. Even though she was totally injured and in shock--Audrey was too calm and aware in the midst of all the craziness for Edward not to notice. But Edward could've easily thought that was to do with her seeming knowledge of the immediate future. (I still think that Edward thinks that she has an Alice-like talent--from the beginning.) However, I would think that he'd be thoroughly taken aback when she told him to get his handprint out of the metal on the van! Then to follow that up w/telling him how much he'd risked... yeah, she can't get out of it now.

Indeed the tables have been turned--Audrey is the mystery here and she has all the answers. I just can't wait to see how she's going to tell the Cullens those answers... after all, she has been warned that she can't tell them about the book. One thing I am thinking is that every time she avoids one of Bella's accidents, someone else could end up taking her place... that will make Audrey have to run around saving people from the Port Angeles rapists and the nomads. Unless Bella shows up--then Audrey will probably have to save her! Loved the update! :)

BTW, yes--you are mean for making us wait for the hospital scene! :P



Author's Response:

Hey Gina! Once again, thanks for the review! I anxiously await your chapter analysis whenever I update. I really appreciate all the support!

I'm glad you liked my Operation Don’t-Get-Squished-By-A-Van line and how I portrayed Charlie and Audrey's relationship. Yeah. I thought it would be good to have Charlie drive her to school. Yep. Jessica just had to get in the way, didn't she? and Audrey, well, Audrey had to run and try and push her out of the way. lol

Of course Edward had to come to the rescue! Yes. Audrey's actions made it quite obvious that she was aware and that she was not the average student. True. Edward could think that Audrey's actions were because of her seeming knowledge of the future. That's quite plausible.

lol you're right! There is no way out for Audrey now. Not after the handprint incident.

I always thought it would be interesting to have Edward trying to solve the mystery surrounding another person. You won't have to wait too long for some explaining. It will be hard for Audrey to explain things without mentioning the book.

I'll tell you that everytime Audrey tries to avoid something someone else will not end up in her place. She won't be running around saving everyone all the time. Oh Bella will show up. That is a guarentee!

I'm so happy to hear that you loved the update! It would have been up much sooner, but I needed to be allocated a new validation beta.

LOL... Treat em mean, keep em keen! ;)

All the best,

Karry.

Reviewer: GabiGabriela (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Van

You are such a meanie!!!!! I was so into the story and getting so excited about the hospital scene and then BAM! End of Chapter.  I really hope Dree doesnt tell Edward he's a character from a book. Maybe she can work her way around that slight detail. I mean, i wouldnt be thrilled if someone told me i was just a fictional character, it would be kind of depressing, actually. I give you a well deserved perfect 10 for a fantastical chapter.

  



Author's Response:

LOL! So I've been told by a number of others!

Yep. I just had to stop it there. It worked well as an ending and now, I hope, you are really excited for the next chapter. For the good of the story, I just had to end the chapter at that point.

I'll ease your worry and tell you that Dree is really going to try and avoid the topic of fictional characters for the time being!

WOW! Thanks so much! "A fantastical chapter"?! You've made me all giddy!

Lovely to hear from you, once again. Thank you for the continued support.

All the best,

Karry.

 

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 10:26 PM · On: Van

yes i like charlie and audrey's scenes more like father and daughter then bella and charlie but i realize there relationship is different....

i am glad that she let him know things about himself without shouting i know your a vamp at him lol....she seemed very worried about him so much to tell him to fix the handprint whereas bella seemed to in shock to say anything so i think the two reactions are different because audrrey already knew what would happen and what edward would do  and what he was,,,,

Great chapter,,,,please update soon....loving edward and audrey ....very sweet



Author's Response:

Alright, I must start of this response by saying that you are one awesome reviewer! Thank you so much for all your reviews! I think I have responded to everyone of them. I can't thank you enough!

Yeah. I never liked how strained Bella and Charlie's relationship was. I thought that if Bella opened up to Charlie more, then the relationship would have been more relaxed. If you notice, Audrey doesn't shut Charlie out. But you're right. The relationships are different. I'm glad that you like the Charlie and Audrey scenes.

Once Audrey had done what she had, she knew that Edward suspected things and she wanted to subtly tell him that she was aware of his secret. Audrey was concerned for Edward and that's why she told him to remove the handprint.

The two reactions were different.

I'm glad to hear that you like Audrey and Edward.

Thank you so much! It's great to hear what you think! I hope to hear from you again.

I will try and update next week. I'm going to do some writing this weekend.

All the best,

Karry.

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 10:02 PM · On: The Mystery of Audrey Darling, by E.C.

so i knew that there gifts didnt work on audrey which leads me to believe its because she isnt of this world like i said,..because bella only edwartds gifts didnt work on her,,,,

i was surprised how much edwards liked her....i am hoping even if bella comes that he will still like audrey cause she is falling for him....so alice has seen that she has two sisters and seen her in australia but doesnt really see much,,,,

this is intriguing i hope we get more of edwards pov



Author's Response:

You're theory is an interesting one. It's pretty good.

Edward is drawn to Audrey because she is an enigma to him, who is smart and strong in herself. She challenges him and they have similar interests. Yep. Audrey is falling for Edward. Bella's appearance will make things interesting.

Alice's visions are limited but important and they are seriously confusing the Cullens.

I'm glad to hear that you found it intriguing. I will write something from EPOV again, but I don't know when that will happen.

 

Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 08:55 PM · On: Van

Ah! OMG completely disregaurd my previous comment!!! I read a lot of stories and I was tired and mixed up my review half way through. I loved the chapter, and I can't wait to see how their conversation goes. *hangs head in shaaaaaame*



Author's Response:

Yes. The long awaited Epic Chapter!

Lol! Don't hang your head in shame! I'll admit that I was slightly confused by your other review, but don't worry about it.

I was just happy to receive a review. :)

I'm so glad that you loved the chapter! The conversation will be an interesting one.

Thank you so much for the review! Judging from what you've said I won't respond to the other comment. lol

All the best,

Karry.

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Black and White

i agree telling them how she knows about them would be not brtight,,,i cant even imagine ....finding out they arent real...that would freak anyone out,,..how to react to that,,,i have a feeling if she told them then everything would end or something,,,

i love the emmett and audrey interaction...they have a flirtatious relationship but i realize they are just friends but i love the friendship,....

I really dont want audrey with jake in any way....so far he is very annoying lol i realize he is acting like the 15 yr old boy that he is though so that is to be expected....that would creep audrey out to i think since she is legitimately really 20 yrs old.

Really you could expand this story beyond the first book if you wanted ,,,,you have four books lol.,...

Again love your story and how strong you character audrey is.  i like how the cullens interact with her.



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you agree. ;)

The way you see Audrey and Emmett's relationship is very interesting. Yep. They are just friends, but they love to tease and joke with each other.

Audrey will not go with Jake! I'm glad that Jake seems like the 15 year old he is meant to be. You are exactly right about the age gap. It does freak Audrey out and I might mention that in future chapters.

lol Yes. There are 4 books. I won't rule out a sequel, but I'm not sure about 4 stories. Then again, you don't know. I'm just amazed that you would want me to write 4 stories! Thanks!

I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story and Audrey. I wanted her to be a strong character, so I'm happy to hear that she is coming across that way. Well there will be more Cullen interactions. :)

Reviewer: Crystal Ball (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Van

Alrighty here! I loved this chapter even though I was always anxious for it to be up! I think that Audrey had a very good reaction to the idea of being hit by a van and I'm glad she rescued Jessica.

 

I can't wait for the hospital scene or when she has to explain to Edward.



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you loved the chapter!

I'm so sorry that it took a while to go up. I sent it in for validation over a week ago, but my beta retired and so I had to be allocated a new beta and that was what held things up. But now I have a new validation beta, so everything should be fine.

It's nice to know that you think Audrey handled herself well and that you're happy she saved Jessica.

The hospital scene is currently a work in progress. Hopefully, I will post it next week.

Thank you so much for the review! It's great hearing from you,

Karry.

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Surprises

i like that emmett is so involved in the story compared to in twilight,,,i like your emmett and alice she seems like a sister,,,,then a freind....

love the gift from edward so thoughtful....i like that he is interested in and cant wait to see what happens next



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you're liking Emmett's involvement. I guess that Alice is more like a sister, which I think is nice. Alice cares a lot for Audrey and Audrey cares for Alice.

I'm glad that you like the gift. I didn't think Edward could resist. It bugged me that Bella always refused gifts and I wanted Audrey to be able to accept gifts with gratitude and appreciate the sentiment behind the gift.

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 05:25 PM · On: A Picture Paints...

i think carlisle wanted to assess audery for himself though i dont get why the parents would shock her at all...and bella...alice didnt want audrey to leave even if bella came...i wonder what she feels of bella.....



Author's Response:

Yep. Good thinking. Alice is just very attached to Audrey already. She feels as though she has made a connection with a human and someone from outside of the family.

You'll have to find out what Alice thinks of Bella.

Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Game

i am curious if she has had visions of bella and if this is the case i am wondering if this will be indeed an unhappy ending for audrey and a happy one for when bella comes to visit audrey and her father,,,i am torn,,,sigh....



Author's Response:

No need to worry about unhappy endings, but I'm not ruling out some sadness and complications.

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