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Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 10 Report & Until Death Comes
I love how you have tied in all the characters, save for Jacob. I'm hoping he'll show up a little later...now I'm just waiting for some lemons to complete the perfect story!!
Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 9 Feelings
So incredibly sweet! Loved the tender moments!
Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 3 Nervous and Fainting
I am sooo lovin' this story!! I am sort of having a hard time seeing Emmett so straight-laced though. He's usually very laid back.
Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 2 First Touch
YES!! Talk about instant electric connection!! Love it!!
Reviewer: soapladyjen (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 1 Isabella Swan
Alice isn't the only one giggling in anticipation!! I'm clicking Next right now!!
Reviewer: themrs (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 28 Cherished
I hope the he would die for her bit isnt supposed to be foreshadowing....
Reviewer: themrs (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 6 Lunch
Well, I guess this Bella is a bit more forward than SM's. Hahah Maybe it will help them get their show on the road a lot quicker ;)
Reviewer: Red_9415 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 35 My Betrayal For Her
OMG!!! This is the best story ever. you have done an emaculate job and i have completely fallen for this story! Please continue to write!
~A~
Reviewer: twiguyemt11 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 4 Scene 104
you are my favorite author hands down i love all your stories. i got some of the guys at my fire station and my captain reading your stories we all love them. you are awesome.
Reviewer: sperrin17 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 35 My Betrayal For Her
Another Good Story! I very much injoyed it! I just hope you finish... it will be nice to see how you wrap it all up! And the baby names.. CANT WAIT!
Thanks :) :) :)
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 16 Poolside
damn it, James is very resourceful and well funded!
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 15 Photo Shoot
aww...no need to resist, gahh..UST killing me!
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 14 David
hahaha, i'm giggling like a 14-yr old! Any more tension up your sleeves? Bella has to deal with sinister James (well, I'm not laughing at that, of course) , deal with David's lingering attraction to her, her UST with Edward and Edward's jealousy --- not to mention all the work that she has to do! When does she find the time to sleep? LOL!
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 10 Report & Until Death Comes
ahh, so someone from her past. It makes sense. Serial killers like James are looking for affirmation. Bella is now famous because of her experience (she became famous after her book Until death comes) that He had given her. He comes to collect what he believes is rightfully his and she's his trophy.
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 8 Warm Blood and Stay
it's the stalker's blood on the flowers? DNA test?
hmm, perfect timing for Edward. he's younger and seems like he hasn't had a lot of experience, is he ready? Bella's life seems so complicated.
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 5 Fans and Cameras
so far, so good! How old is Edward?
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 4 Scene 104
whoaa...did she accept the role? I like your Bella, she seems confident, powerful and doing very well for herself.
Reviewer: klutz (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 35 My Betrayal For Her
wow
id have to say this is definately this is the best story ive read and i have read most of them
its reallyy good i cant wait for the last chapter/epilogue :)
Reviewer: hehehaha (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 35 My Betrayal For Her
more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 35 My Betrayal For Her
A wonderful stroy I can't believe I haven't read it before, especailly since I loved Up To Speed so much, oh well I have found it now and read all of the chapters in the last eight hours or so (who needs sleep) I just couldn't stop, I had to know what happened next, how the characters would get out of the situation, and what the reactions of the other characters would be. An amazingly well written and entertaining story.
I love how bella managed to get them out, and didn't have to wait to be saves, but I also liked how Edward and Jasper weren't to far away from managing to save her any way. I loved the conversation between Edward and James, it was long over due and adds a lot to the story, like the chapter from James point of view, the last fe chapters have done a lot to reveal more about what motivates James and made him the way he is.
I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, I am sure it will be great, I hope the Babies are OK and that all the stress doesn't bring on an early labour, I think we have had enough drama for one story.
I can't wait to find out what happened to rick, or weather Bela's movie won best picture. Please don't keep us waiting to long, I will be sad to see this story end after the next chapter and epilogue, but I also can't wait to see how you resolve everything.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 34 Oscars
i am glad that she won, and that the start of the day went so well for the both of them, I just love it when he talks to her stomach and their babies. once again you have twisted the story, and I just love it when you do that. I can't wait to see what happens next, but crap it's the last chapter, and then I will have to wait for updates like everyone else.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 33 Boom
awesome chapter, I am glad that Jasper and Emmett didn't die, but I understand that they needed to be removed from security detail to help with the storyline, a big hole in Bella's security will make forsome very interesting chapters, I am sure, although I am soory to say that I don't have to many more to read.
oved the humor from Emmett and Alice at the end of the chapter.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 32 Oprah
loved the interview and that fact that there was no couch jumping. I didn't think I could see Edward or Bella for that matter doing that. once again with the big reveal, I just love how everything is coming together, and I can't wait to read a chapter from Jasper and James point of view, I am sire it will be fasinating, and a wonderful addition to the story.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 31 Nominated
Well at least with Edward I don't see much couch jumping going down. I can't wait to see how the interview goes, and what the reaction to it will be like. I must say that I loved this chapter, very hot and emotional for Edward and Bella, but I also liked how the family was together to watch the nominations and that Bella was nominated twice, as well as the movie.
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 30 Damn Media
hmmm victoriam making an appearance? talk about keeping those twists coming, they just don't stop.
And I have to say that drugged out horny Edward is almost as good as possesive marking Edward, they are both very sexy. the two of them certainly seem to have a thing for medical rooms.
I am going to jump right intp reading the next chapter, but I am sad to see how few chapters I have left to read.
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