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Reviewer: JenKB (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 03:14 PM · On: Escape
Oh how fun! I liked that this was a longer chapter where there was a lot more Edward/Bella interaction. I'm looking forward to seeing if there is an accident similar to "Phenomenon" in Twi, and how their study date will go. I like that this is close to the original Twi/Midnight Sun but not identical. It's refreshing. Keep it up! :o)
Author's Response: OH YAY! I am so glad you are enjoying the subtle similarities! I was unsure of it all originally as I felt it may be too close to the originals and may turn some readers off as it would all come off as a bit redundant. BUT...I have HUGE plans for this story! It is headed in a very interesting direction...
As for an accident similar to "Phenomenon"...well, let's just see what chapter 04 brings, shall we?? ;)
Thanks so much for R & R!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: aubrey kate (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 08:37 PM · On: Escape
this is really awesome! keep goin!
Author's Response: OMG! THANK YOU! I am so glad you are enjoying this story! I hope you continue to enjoy as it goes on. I have BIG...no HUUUUUGE plans for this story!
Thanks for R & R!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: Larifari (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Promise Me
Your first chapters seem very promising. I like it.
Please, update soon.
Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying the story so far! The next chapter is in with my awesome beta now, so the update should be coming soon!
Thanks for R & R!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: Goodygurl (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2010 10:47 AM · On: Promise Me
I liked this chapter a lot. Bella seems like an innocent teenager and that's was a good idea. It suits her and the books better(in my opinion), lol. I can't wait for more! Update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am beyond pleased that you are enjoyin this story so much!! I also like that she is slightly more innocent in this version.
Thanks for R & R!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: JenKB (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Promise Me
Great chapter! It's an interesting take given that Jake already knows the underlying secret of the Cullens. I'm looking forward to more Edward/Bella interaction and seeing how their relationship plays out in your version. :o)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really hope to capture everybody's interest with this story as it goes on. I have some pretty big plans for it and I hope everyone enjoys it!
Thanks for R & R!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 07:19 PM · On: Promise Me
Oo great job! I love Jake!
Author's Response: AW YAY! A Jake lover! I'm not usually onthe Jake bandwagon, but I have a soft spot in my heart for THIS Jake.
Thanks for R & R!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: mybigteddybearemmett (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Contentment
Great job. I like it so far.
Author's Response: OH YAY! I am so thrilled that you are enjoying it! I always like to gain new readers!
Thanks so much for R & R!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: JenKB (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Contentment
Oh I like this! I like the twist where Edward is the newbie. Looking forward t more chapters! :o)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the first chapter. I can only hope to hold your interest through the rest of the story. It is eaded somewhere intense in the coming chapters!
Thanks for R & R!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: trixie11 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 11:47 AM · On: Contentment
Great first chapter. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy where this story is headed!
Thanks for R & R!
xoxo,
AG1981
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