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Reviewer: forever_young_96 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

it was aiight

Reviewer: Sunsquash (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Seth POV drabbles

Love. That's it. I adore this story!

Reviewer: gstout (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 1

I just love these two boys together so much.  I teared up a little at the end, they just so belong together.  Felt a bit sorry for Seth but I'm sure he understood and won't have a hard time finding someone who can love him completely.  The emotions you wrote between Edward and Jasper were so amazing.  Loved the story, thank you and thanks to SilverTwi and SorceressCirce for purchasing the story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

 

Yeah, I don't think our Seth'll have any problems finding someone who can love him and who's deserving of him ;)

Reviewer: Marijee (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2010 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

"My eyes never left them, but my mind took me back to a time where it was me with Jasper, my hands that caressed his sides before slipping under his shirt. My lips that left a trail of open mouthed kisses on the column of his neck. I could almost feel his body press into mine as I imagined my fingers skimming up his abs to his chest - could almost hear his soft whimper as I teased his nipples." Loved all feelings you gave us in this story. The picture you drew of Edward, who was still in love with Jasper. Missing him and not really sure what happened to break them up. I liked your Peter...you really made me want to punch him for being such a prick. Oh and I enjoyed the loving reunion. So well written! Thanks for writing, Nae!

"Just as the song was coming to an end, I saw Jasper school his face and put on a smile right as Peter pulled away." Love how you bring emotions through in one sentence. Jasper is so unhappy!

R&R on FF and just had to leave a response here. I enjoy all the little things you do to make each story complete. You always bring love through.

Author's Response:

Aww, thanks bb :) I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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