srry i aint been on in a little while, n srry i aint been able to review sooner, but iv been kinda busy...

omg this chapter was sooo slow - but good as always :) this chapter was so good and it always amazes me how u always have me coming back for more. its weird, the past few days that i aint been on i find myself thinking of this story, and how everything is gonna playout! ur an amazzzing writer keep it up! ;D cant wait to read the next chapter!!!

OHHHH NOOOOO! I hope he can't get it up, f*cker! WTF? He needs to go find Bella and have sex with her for 5 hours straight, LOL. Can't wait for the update :) XO

Oh SoulReaper, what you do to me with these characters.  It's pathetic how much I love them.  I sat here savoring this (with a bowl of Cheerios) for over an HOUR!  They are hard-candy coating over warm creme and chocolate -  Metallic on the outside and vulnerable on the inside.  And you know just where to bite to find the sweetest bits.

My favorite parts:

"I probably wouldn’t want her spending the night and another day with a guy like me, either. Actually, no. I’d prefer she stick with someone like me. She’d need someone to protect her when I couldn’t anymore."

Awwww!   OMG.  Fuck my candy-coating...I just completely melted. 

Oh girl - Orlando is definitely a poofer in Troy.

"I’d untie her, bend her the fuck over, and take her like a fucking animal. With my teeth at her neck, she’d walk around with my mark for goddamn days."

Yow.  Why'm I thinking their first time won't be like this?  :-D  He's far too 'gone' not to be sweeter than all that with Bella.  This'll be, like, the third time. 

"I may as well have unzipped my jeans to take a piss- no, that imagery was way too... "

No LIE!  He kissed her against the lockers in front of anyone and everyone in the hallway?!  Folks is gonna be tawkin'.

"I tapped the spine of her, my, book."

Mmmm, he liiiikes the idea of sharing everything he has with Bel-la.  He can't even help himself, can he?

“I have… so many comments,” I tried not to laugh. "

OMG, I am SO in love with this man.  And he's all inside your fucking head!!  (I Freudianly typed "your fucking heat" there.  Bahahahaha.)

"...You can’t give me gifts, you cant kiss me like you did this morning and then pretend to hate my existence!”

Alice tried to tell Bella that she gave Edward his space in the afternoons!  LOL!  Get with the program, Bells.

"You made it really damn clear that you wanted me, after I woke up in bed with you, but you didn’t even fucking kiss me goodbye when I was leaving. You disappeared."

Edward.  Really.  That's no way to treat a fucking lady.  God, they're so cute for a coupla badasses.

"I fucking belong to nobody. I’m not having this territorial bullshit happen again.”  What the fuck did that have to do with anything? Why did she keep bringing it up?"

'Cause she was there for that tree-pissing contest with Jasper, dude!  Matter of fact, she's the one who got wet!  :-+

"You catch up or slow down for me."

And there we have High Maintenance Badass Dating 101.  Really though, they've never done this before, how would they know?  He only knows how to chew them up and spit them out...he hasn't ever swallowed!  <evil grin>  And what with Rosalie being her best friend in Phoenix, Bella learned from a pro who should catch up or slow down, eh?

Plus, Edward has had her in the forefront of his mind for some time.  He's come to her rescue, protected her, given her the first hit of the cigarette.  He has done his time.  But Bella, Love - he neeeds his afternoons to brood, lol.

So, SO awesome!  There's always so much to ruminate on between these lines.  I think about it for days after reading!  XOXO

haha...don't get nervous, no pressure :) still going strong! can't wait for the next one!

These two are so messed up it's rediculous...

NOOOOOO! Aww crap. On one hand I totally understand where Bella is coming from, Edward does seem hot and cold, but Bella isn't exactly making anything easy. Why say you're going to see someone somewhere, then just not show up?

And Tanya is just a dumb whore. I hate that bitch.

haha making Jasper and Tanya brother and sister...that's a new one...and kinda hilarious:) But I think I will vomit a little in my mouth if Edward does anything with her. I wouldn't touch her skank ass with a 10 foot pole. He's gonna ruin things with Bella before it even has a chance to start:(

update soon  i love the chapter can't wait love the story 

Awwwww!! I love Edward and Bella together, and even more in this story. I liked the fact that Carlisle got Bella blushing ;) she doesn't stand a chance against Dr. Hot-Bitch.

I was wondering.... Will Bella ever get to 'look' at Edwards tattoos? For real? *you know what I mean ;D)

Hmmm was there a few little hidden tid bits in this? Lol. And so the plot thickens mwahahahaha!

Ignore me, I think my brain is fuzzy with my kids being up early, when schools off they're outa bed at the first sign of light but when school starts they won't get up at all typical. Sorry I'm rambling!

I'm glad Alice approves, I think she sees that they might be good for each other :D

Love this chapter...can't wait for the next, please update soon! You're creating an addict here!!

Aww shit, SoulReaper - I had a whole, long review typed out in this damn white box and my browser crashed and I lost it!  AGH.

Lemme think...I know I was discussing the single-phrase responses (as well as the raised eyebrows and smirks) that Edward uses and how they underscore his badass-isity.  (Hey, I made a word.)  You have him using so few words and for me, it all comes down to the fact that he wouldn't suffer fools, why encourage them?  It also serves to knock the fools to their knees, closing off the conversation so he remains enigmatic.  Bella uses a lot of single-word answers, too, but for her it emits a sense of intelligence ("Habitually.")  She has that abililty to isolate a single word that's as effective as an entire sentence.  Another example from chapter 8 that stands out for me is when she asks Edward why he stood up for her at school.  He asks her, "Which time?"  She replies, "Precisely."  And now we know she's onto his attentions, studying his motives, and calling his bluff.

I had also outlined my favorite phrases from this chapter:

"Edward was a possessive sleeper,"

Never a bad thing!  LOL!

"Respect, he had said. Edward respected me?"

Sometimes giving more insight into the respector than the respectee.  :-+

"Did it really matter? None of them were present now. Unless they were hiding in a closet somewhere, I was the only chick in his bed at the moment."   

Love to see this confidence from your Bella!  The Street-Smart have so little time for pettiness.  I really liked what I saw inside her through this chapter.

“You’re his sister.”

Ahhh...Bella displays the same level of respect that Edward affords her.  She's a good man, too.   :-D  I think they've earned each other's graces.

"His nipple piercing showed through the shirt, I wanted to wrap my tongue around it, to feel it between my teeth."

Mmm, yes, and let's remember this for later in the story.

"Yeah, I sighed as I saw the lavish buffet laid before me. Right..."

Yum...I likes combat boots on my buffet.

SoulReaper, what's mine is yours; use any phrase you like.  Every time you update, you make my day.  It's the least I can do to thank you for the pleasure your talents supply, and to write about what I love and learn from your story and characters.  All the joy you receive from reviews...hell, that's just a tiny portion of that which you put into the world.

and you have sucked me in.........xo