Hi,

Hmmm... don't like Jacob intruding on the story... have always felt that he's such a selfish, immature character... it's your story, so of course you can do whatever you want, but I guess I'm very pro Edward, and always felt that SM really overworked the Edward/Jacob conflict...  And, Chris Weitz also seemed so pro-Jacob, so I guess I'm a bit jaded when it comes to Jackoff, er, I mean Jacob... heh...

Looking forward to the next chapter... you won't lose me as a reader unless it gets too pro-Jacob...

 

i love charlie he is such a sweetie :D i think you wrote him wonderfully not feminine at all yea so my typing may be a little off as its 534 and i havent slept yet but its the first chance ive gotten to get on and read and i had to read this i mean this is amazing and i cant miss it :D im with edward on the jacob hating im surprised charlie isnt more snippy with jake being as hes done his research on edward and jasper i mean yea he would have known if jake got in trouble but seriously just open your eyes apparently and youd see he is up to no good lol i cant wait for more sunshine terrific doll seriously

i find that part there B says being with E makes her more self-confident very cute. . they both have such a brilliant personality and outside beauty, seriously, they need to learn to love themselves much more.

as usual, thank you for the great chapter!

the good news is you have a lot of lemons for us on your sleeves. you're very good at writing them..i just need a cold shower sometimes..heh...but  the bad news is that "the end is visible".. no waaay! please, make it barely noticeable :)

Great chapter... loved the intensity with Bella in teh beginning of this chapter...  great lemons all around.. now let's hope they don't get pulled over by Chief Swan...

Okay first of all: Damn that was one(a few) hot lemons... did it get hot in here?

I adore them being mean to Mike... Mike is so damn stupid in this chapter, it's not even funny.( It's hilarious ;D)

The part where Edward explained to Bella why he doesn't like to use the words 'mom, dad' and 'parents' made a lot of sense.

I have one question though: Will Bella get to beat Lauren up? (again?) please? b**** deserves it.

Thanks for the chapter :D

I have to say that i will be sad when this story ends. It really is one of my favorites.  you will have to write more i will miss chattin with ya! Catcher in the Rye is one of my favorite stories. I am glad to see that edward did have a positive experience with that teacher who cared. They do pop up once in awhile lol.  I found the flashback about edwards reasoning about calling esme and carlisle mom and dad interesting...he considered that a bad word..i guess in his case it would be....bella said something about nobody ever saying i love you...,i am curious since his mom did leave him the money if  she ever said it to him...she mustve loved him.   I would be interested in seeing alice and jasper in a story though i favor edward more then jasper.  I would love to see alices pov on her and edward growing up and all she thinks and feels.  ice cream on waffles lol interesting combination.   i have to say i felt bad for mike....he always gets put down in stories poor guy lol...i actually like the kid,..,,,he is a little bit of an idiot though ha ha ....i have to say bella acted a little crazy over the photo.,,,i can see threatening to kick their ass over the photos and stuff but a knife? i can see why they think she is nuts...its forks not pheonix,,,she has to step out of that defensive mentality i think...but who am i to judge...good chapter look forward to the next!

well, i am happy that they didn't have to kill mike, however i can't believe that he is so stupid! i mean really!! thats so crazy! i liked that part of it though. and the part in the girls bathroom, i hope that those girls are scared! they should be!

loved it....i could see the difference......great job.

 

i liked it when bella scared the shit out of lauren and jessica.....and then the hallway smooch between edward and bella was awesome!  I love reading about sticking it to those dumb bitches!

You didn't inconveinence me...just gotta remember to look on his computer....the 10 month old is getting hungry and the hubs is away on business...

to Mommy-duty.......and beyond!

Very interesting, too many fics that go leather are hyped. I like this, can't wait to see what you do with it. ;)

this was such a sad chapter... aaaaahh, you almost made me cry cose i couldn't help myself recalling a movie Leaving LA. that was the saddest romantic movie i have ever seen and this chapter somehow reminds me it.  E&B are so lost here, his past haunts him. i am surprised Edward  has such a beautiful personality with the history like his. his father was a monster and i am sure there are plenty of them on the earth keeping their families in dungeons for years .

great chapter hon ;) nice PSA at the end about hard drug use... can't wait for more ;)

I nearly missed this one! It would have been a very bad chapter to miss, with Edward FREAKING OUT!! All that disclosure about his past. You say that you have no idea what comes next but girl you sure fly by the seat of your pants very, very well. Running off excitedly to see if the rabid bear does really show up!!