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Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2010 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 4: Teeth in the Grass
I'm loving the Edward and Charlie interactions! And it seems as though Edward really isn't as bad ass as he is trying to look. I guess he just needed some attention?
Author's Response: i'm so completely team charlie that it's ridiculous! any time i can add some quirky charlie-ness, expect it. :D
Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2010 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 4: Teeth in the Grass
Interesting to reverse the characters. Even though we know the story having them in opposite roles is fun. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 3: He Lays in the Reins
Don't go digging for things you aren't ready for the answers, Edward :)
Reviewer: tatie1970 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 4: Teeth in the Grass
Nice chapter. are you keeping it canon to the end, introducing James etc ? Or are you taking your own route ?
Author's Response: i intend to keep it as canon as possible. little twists will be introduced, i.e. leah standing in for jacob and so on so forth. i hope you'll stick with me to find out!
Reviewer: teresaellen1 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 3: He Lays in the Reins
when you going to write more...i need to know what happens!!!!!
PLEASSSSS
Author's Response: i apologize for the lack of swift updates... i'm one of those people who doesn't have anything prewritten. i'm very go with the flow. i'll keep things as quick as real life allows. :D
Reviewer: 123appletree (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2010 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 3: He Lays in the Reins
Interesting and intriguing story.
I like Edward’s friendship with Angela. She appears to be a nice girl. I am glad Edward befriended her instead of Jessica, of course. And I find a blushing Edward really cute (which is something no boy wants to be called, but I like it).
Edward has to be really brave (or really stupid) to stand up to Emmett. And I am sure Emmett is impressed.
I am looking forward to following this story. And maybe even seeing Leah again who – I guess – could become Edward’s Jacob.
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 3: He Lays in the Reins
Very nice. I like this story and Edward is a riot. Update soon.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 3: He Lays in the Reins
Oooh, angry and brave enough to take on the biggest Cullen! I wonder just how they're going to avoid Edward now!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 3: He Lays in the Reins
This is fascinatingf!!!!!! I love how he & Angela are friends and also how he confrontated Emmett about Bella being gone.
Reviewer: IREPAT (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 3: He Lays in the Reins
Go with human Edwards! I have no words. For if it is brave.
I can only say that I loved the chapter, I hope not be too long to update.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 2: Sacred Vision
So, will there be some twists in this tale? Edward's obviously not the sweet innocent who left to spare his mother. So, will Bella be different too?
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 1: Dearest Forsaken
I think that bachelor Charlie and bachelor Edward are gonna get along just fine! I mean, aside from the fact that he's leaving a city with lots of distractions to a town with basically nothing going on, the "man" side of this has got to appeal to him!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Prologue
Sooo, Edward is a bad boy! What exactly did he do with 3 cars?
Reviewer: IREPAT (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 2: Sacred Vision
I loved the chapter. But it will be equal to the theme of twilight or going to be different? Although I have to say I would have liked another type of car for Bella. I do not know, as an Audi or the new camaro, 2010.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter, I hope it's soon.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 2: Sacred Vision
Good job and can't wait for more
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2010 09:28 AM · On: Chapter 1: Dearest Forsaken
Good writting
Reviewer: per lamore di anima (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 1: Dearest Forsaken
I'd love to see more.
Reviewer: MayaCullen20 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Prologue
This is a great story! Can't wait for the next chapter and for Bella to finally appear! Please update!
Reviewer: IREPAT (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2010 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 1: Dearest Forsaken
A place to find your story and I find it very interesting. I'm looking forward to reading it next chapter, you have left me very intrigued with your story. Waiting for it very soon. Especially the reaction that Edwards will have to see Bella.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Prologue
looking forward to more
Reviewer: brain candy (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 11:25 AM · On: Prologue
Great start to a story. Keep going!
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