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Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)
Hi Les!
Poor Sarah ! I wondered if she'd be able to withstand the insanity that surrounds Rob and the others. Then to have to put up with Beth's antics. What an insecure, hateful bitch! I am so glad that Ashley and the sweet, caring, lovevble, hot Kellan were there for her! *sigh*. and that now she is in her element with the kids!
And poor clueless Rob! How can he not see what Beth is trying to pull?! And again the magnificent, awesome,helpful Kellan comes to the rescue sending said bitch home in a cab!!! Good job, babe!
SO.....
MORE PLEASE!
Thanks again for the shout out, darlin'.
Love ya!
Ellen
Author's Response: Hi Ellen! I thought you would enjoy the lovely Kellan helping out! Oh, Beth - she's really not nice, I'm afraid. Rob is clueless-like most men - he sees Beth only as a friend. Lots more already written and on the way. Up next, the children - its a bit intense, this next chapter. Hope you enjoy it and thanks so much for reading and reviewing-you know how much it means!
I'd shout out for you any day - you know that, hun!
Love, Leslie
Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)
Such a great update....OH Rob getting her to stay..he fights dirty.
And Beth..urgh can she get hit by a double decker bus please?
Author's Response: LOL_ A double decker bus! LMAO - Beth---not very nice is she? Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Lots more on the way. Cheers
Reviewer: 3dawns (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)
Why are men so daft and avoidant of confrontation? "Did I do something?" No, you didn't do ANYTHING...that's the problem, dumbass.
Love the story.
Author's Response: LOL-Oh you get it! Yes-Men are clueless! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! It's makes me smile and you've made me laugh on a day when I really need to. Thank you! Updates-lots of them are written and one the way. Cheers
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)
Wow is Beth cruising for a bruising! Seriously, Rob you need to pull your head out of your British toosh and realise that friend of yours wants you for more than a platonic relationship and it's going to ruin your relationship wtih your fiance with you're not careful. :(
Wish I'd been a fly on the wall with whatever Kellan told that snotty she-bitch anyhow! *L*
Looking forward to reading about Rob, Kellan & Ashley (and Sarah of course! :) and their visit to the sick kids. I can only imagine some of the honest little comments that are going to be made by the tykes.
Author's Response: Hi hun! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Ah, Beth-she's a piece of work, isn't she? Oh, Poor Rob-he's clueless-most men are...Time with the little ones coming up...its quite an event. Update on the way. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: dhull (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)
I just want you to know that your fic is the first Rob fic I have been able to read and "get in to." I guess regarding to age and having kids, I can relate to Sarah. It's weird because you are writting Rob's personality like I envision it to be! I have loved Rob ever since I first saw him as Cedric Diggerory in HPGoF.....and now here I am reading fanfic, about Rob! LOL!
AW, I really enjoy your story and look forward to what you have down the road for the two of them to experience!
dhull (Austin, TX)
Author's Response: Hi there in Austin! Oh, that you so much for taking the time to read and review and for your wonderfully kind words. I'm so glad that you are enjoying these two and that you relate to Sarah. Her children, of course, have been her entire world to date and that's going to be quite a hurdle for him to get over. Lots more already written and on the way. Thanks so much again, XO Leslie
Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)
Die Beth , die Bitch , Die BETH !!!! lol I'm sorry I'm so not like that, but it had to be said...... she needs to get a new life Far FAR F A R away from Rob...... did I say far away !!! and I wish Sarah could be a little more self confident in his feelings toward her. nuff said, great chapter..... love a giving back Rob.
Author's Response: LOL- oh Beth-yeah-she's something else...Sarah is trying-its hard for her though-she doesn't want to come between his friends, even though she knows exactly what Beth is doing- Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Glad you enjoyed. More with Rob giving back next time...it will be intense. Cheers! Leslie
Reviewer: craving2read (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)
Rob, Rob, Rob...so clueless. So glad to see you writing Sarah to show her maturity with the situation. Kellan has a good point to a certain degree - Sarah needs to communicate this "Beth" problem with Rob.
Author's Response: Hi there - Oh you are so right! Clueless-most men are! Sarah doesn't want to come between Rob and his friends, but she also knows exactly with Beth is trying to do. Lots more on the way. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Cheers Leslie
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)
Sometimes men just don't have a clue. Sarah handled Beth in a very mature manner. I would have dragged her to the bathroom and knocked her ass out. She is beyond ridiculous. At least kick Derek to the curb first.
Author's Response: Hi there! You are soooo right...men are clueless and this one is no different! Beth is really something else, isn't she? Thanks for reading and reviewing! Lots more on the way. Cheers
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)
Awesome chapter.
Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed! Lots more on the way. Cheers!
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)
There's always a Beth type isn't there......
Author's Response: Sure is. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Lots more on the way. Cheers
Reviewer: Kazbar (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2010 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 23(Shabbyapple)
Time to play grown up Rob. Time to choose your friends and drop the losers, the hanger ons ie: drop kick Beth to the otherside of the Atlantic. WMD Sarah for all the corporate assured woman she is needs to take action and make sure that Rob gives Beth the heave ho!!
Loving the story keep it up bb
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks for reading and reviewing. Hmmm-Beth - she's something, but she's known him a long time and he's a bit clueless when it comes to seeing her for what she is. Lots more written and on the way. Cheers!
Reviewer: skipabeat (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 22(Shabbyapple)
Beth, Beth, Beth, I don't know what to think about her. If guys would just lay off, draw the line and be up front with girls, we wouldn't be psyco....... Naaahhh we probably still would if was Rob!! Great read, looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Hi there! Oh, Beth...yeah - she's a piece of work eh? She's also around for the long haul. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Updates...lots of them are written and on the way. Cheers!
Reviewer: duders79 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2010 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 22(Shabbyapple)
Oh crikey I got so excited when I saw this today, and had to sit down with a nice mug of tea and some chocolate to read it!
"Umm..." Teehee! Such a Rob response! I love how you write Rob, a heady mix of awkwardness and prowess. It's exactly how I imagine he might be.
As for Beth, well, *Go Sarah, go Sarah, go!*. What a snidey cow! Enough said.
The end, gah! Welcome to his world Sarah! Woweewow! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing - it really means the world! Tea and chocolate are lovely together, aren't they? :) Beth - yeah, she's a piece of work and she's not going anywhere. Lots more on the way. Hope you enjoy! Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: banned2010 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 22(Shabbyapple)
I really love this story! As a mom I can relate. I like the humor AND the lemons (extremely sexy)! Please keep the chapters coming! A definite ten!
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for reading and for your kind words. As a mom, she's going to treat this relationship very differently than someone without children - they will always come first and that's a reality that he is going to have to understand. It's quite a hurdle for anyone to get over - especially someone who doesn't have children. Lots more chapters are written and on the way (even a few lemons in there :) LOL). Hope you continue to enjoy and thanks for the ten! XO Leslie
Reviewer: arocora1 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 22(Shabbyapple)
good story can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. So glad you are enjoying! Cheers
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 22(Shabbyapple)
Oh Lordy Lord, I don't think she was ready for his world at all! What a b*tch Beth is. Grr. Way to go for Sarah though, way to take the high road!
Author's Response: Hi there! Oh, its overwhelming that's for sure! Beth---grrrr yeah - she's something else and she's not going anywhere! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Update is on the way. Cheers!
Reviewer: emma217 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 22(Shabbyapple)
omg what is going to happen????/ grrr cliffhangers lol cant wait for the next chapter thanks for updating love it :)
Author's Response: Hi there! LOL - I'm a sucker for the cliffy - love them. Next chapter, and many more already written...update is on the way. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Cheers
Reviewer: emma217 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 21(shabbyapple)
great chapter lots of issuses to work out so little time cant wait to see what else happens
Author's Response: Hi there! Yes, they do have quite a bit to work out and time isn't on their side. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Cheers
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 22(Shabbyapple)
Love it
Author's Response: Glad you are enjoying! Thanks for reading and reviewing as always. It means the world. Cheers!
Reviewer: katie_winkles (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 22(Shabbyapple)
Beautiful - as always.
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're enjoying! So much more on the way! Cheers
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 22(Shabbyapple)
wow!
Author's Response: :) - Thanks for reading and reviewing! Love the wow! Hope you continue to enjoy...lots more coming. Cheers!
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 22(Shabbyapple)
I hope Sarah gets a chance to put Beth in her place soon!
I hope Sarah can handle Rob's world, now that she has a better picture of it!
Author's Response: Hi there! Oh Beth...she's not going away any time soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: wilson0518 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 22(Shabbyapple)
Great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for reviewing! Glad you enjoyed. Lots more on the way. Cheers
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 22(Shabbyapple)
Oh Lord... His world indeed... Can I punch Beth? Grrr....
Author's Response: Yes..Yes I think you can punch Beth...grrrr-she's something else! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Lots more written and on the way Cheers
Reviewer: opalmoon (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 20(Shabbyapple)
Whew....I thought he left her a Dear John letter at the hotel....looking forward to seeing how this all plays out!
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Lots more on the way. Cheers
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