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Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 28(Shabbyapple)
Love this!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Glad you are enjoying. XO
Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 28(Shabbyapple)
p.s. when he lost it in the shower.....so did I, that was heartbreaking.....he totally opened himself up to her, so totally vulnerable.....that's a real man!
Author's Response: Hi again! He did open himself up completely-he's not afraid to let her see who he really is and how he's feeling-it takes a very special person to do that and a special person to accept him for who he is. Lots more on the way. Thank you for reading and reviewing and for your kind words. XO
Reviewer: edwyna (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 28(Shabbyapple)
Wonderful wonderful chapter.... I feel so bad for him, he's desparate, he's so afraid of letting her go. I can't wait for the update.... seeing this chapter up made my weekend! Thank you. Why is he now so scared this won't work?... He should be used to texting and phone calls, lol.
Author's Response: Hi there! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. He is desperate. He wants her to believe in him and he's wondering whether she really does. It's all so new and intense-but you are right...there are phones and emails...and we shall make good use of those *wink* XO
Reviewer: lunaluna72 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2010 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 28(Shabbyapple)
Oh God ! That was wonderful, cant wait for an update !
Author's Response: Hi there. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed! Update is betaing as we speak. XO
Reviewer: wilson0518 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 28(Shabbyapple)
Great chapter
Author's Response: Hi there. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you are enjoying. XO
Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 28(Shabbyapple)
Gaaahhhh!!!! Why do 4 days seem like forever? I wouldn't want to let go either...Great chapter...
t.
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks for reading and reviewing. Lots more on the way...4 days is a long time for these two. XO
Reviewer: imheather (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2010 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 28(Shabbyapple)
Goodbyes are the suckiest. It is IMPOSSIBLE to suck back tears once they've fallen. Lord knows I have tried and tried and tried. I know it doesn't work but I still try hoping my eyes will learn how to do it. These two must be miserable. I know they will be together, they have to.
Author's Response: Hi there. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Oh, its always difficult-especially when things are so new and you've been through everything Sarah has. It won't be easy - but then, nothing worth doing ever is. Lots more on the way. Cheers!
Reviewer: bellemeer (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2010 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
I have been waiting so patiently - OK not so patiently as I have been checking for the next chapter several times a day for the last week. Please do me a favour and put me out of my misery and post the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hi there!--Unfortunately I have no control on when my vbeta posts-she is on vacation-I submitted the latest chapter on Monday-it will be posted once she is back from vacation. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing so far. It means the world! XO
Reviewer: bellemeer (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2010 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
I have been enjoying your story very much and have checked for updates every day - please reward your readers by posting the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: Hi there-My next chapter has been with my Twi-validation beta for the last several days-I think she may be on vacation. Unfortunately, I don't control how quickly validation happens or it would be posted already. Thanks for reading and reviewing so far. I'm glad you are enjoyoing. There is lots more written and on the way. I hope you continue to enjoy. Cheers! Leslie
Reviewer: emma217 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
great chapter cant wait for more thanks for updating
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Lots more on the way! XO
Reviewer: Lamelie (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
Love this chapter... waiting for the next one
kisseeeeesss
Li
Author's Response: Hi there! It's been submitted, just waiting for it to post. Thanks for reading and reviewing. xO
Reviewer: twilightervamp (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
Oh no, the dreaded countdown to the leaving. I know that will be awful for both of them.
Such a great chapter. I loved the talk with MUM!
Hugs,
Louise
Author's Response: Hi Louise! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Countdown is definitely on! Ah, yes Mum talk...gotta have those, don't you? Lots more on the way. Hugs, Leslie
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
Hi Leslie!
Sorry it's taken me a while to review, but I've been away to a Golden Twilight Coven GTG! Awesome!
Wow, what a fantastic chapter! I loved the heart to hearts with mum and dad and the way that Sarah was totally accepted by the Pattinson clan. You make your characters so real that they jump off of the page into my heart! They have become good friends and I care about them!
And Beth...ptewy, boo, hiss! She needs a lesson in what friendships should be like. Why can't she realize that Rob doesn't want her that way? Why does she have to talk about and treat Sarah with such malice? Grrrrrrr!
Okay, darlin' now I want...no, need...MORE PLEASE!
Love you, sweetie, and thanks so much for the rec!
Ellen xx
Author's Response: Hi Ellen! Thanks so much for reading and reviewini-your support means the world. Oh Golden Twilight Coven! That sounds awesome! Beth...yes...she's something isn't she? Just a tad manipulative. This was an imiportant chapter for both of them-she's affected more than she thought she would be by meeting his family. More is on the way hun!
I'd rec you any day-I'm anxiously awaiting your next update.
XO
Lea
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
I loved it.
Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. Lots more on the way. XO
Reviewer: Wilynn (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
I love the close relationship Rob has with his family and that Sarah seems to really love being with them. It is nice that Rob is trying to understand what all of that means to Sarah, with everything she has been through.
Beth really is annoying! I would not mind is she went away...
I am so excited about what will be coming up soon - Rob on her turf.
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Lots more on the way. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. It was an important one for both of them. Ahhh, Beth-what are we going to do with her? XO
Reviewer: RobsHair (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
Your writing is brilliant! I'm on the edge here, waiting to see how their last moments together will be like. Awesome job BB!! xx
Author's Response: Hi hun! Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed! Lots more is on the way-she's leaving and that's going to be harder than she thought it would be. XO
Reviewer: PreciousRubies (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
Wow...Beth really needs to get over herself...not to mention Rob, and grow up.
Ew, sex talk with the parentals! *cringe/eye twitch*
I have a question about the charity event. While Rob was chasing after Sarah, and Kellan was left alone with Beth (I really feel for him because of that)...did he say anything to her while they were gone? And if he did...WHAT WAS IT!?
Can you also make Derek wake up and make him dump Beth's dumb ass?
Author's Response: Hi there! Oh, Beth-she really is something, isn't she? Persistent, this one. Oh, I got a lot of questions about Kellan's little conversation with Beth-I may just have to write an out-take just for that. :) Lots more on the way. Thanks for reading and reviewing! XO
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
Really enjoyed Rob's interactions with his family - especially the quiet time he had with his Mum, even if it did appear to be quite embarassing for the lad. Nobody wants to hear about their parents sex lives! *L*
I do think it's clear how much Rob's family really likes and accepts Sarah. They can see the changes in Rob, they know how he was pre-Sarah and can see how he carries himself since she's come into his life.
I'm kind of dreading the next couple of chapters are they begin to deal with the reality of their situation - that real life is going to separate them and they're going to have to fight for what they have. Clearly they both feel it's worth fighting for, but sometimes when you're most vulnerable the thought that you're in it more deeply than your other half would have to creep into your mind.
Author's Response: Hi hun! Thanks for much for reading and reviewing!--Poor guy, having to listen about their sex lives! Ugh! Oh reality is coming, unfortunately there isn't anything she can do about it...she has to go home. She's overwhelmed by what she's feeling and while she wants to trust him, its still all a bit hard for her to believe. Lots more on the way. Hope you enjoy! XO
Reviewer: joss859 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 02:08 AM · On: Chapter 19(shabbyapple)
Ok, ok, that was so worth the wait! The last few chapters have been great but that was incredible!
But isnt she going home soon? what will they do then? questions, questions.
Reviewer: vfy (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
I really like how you are handling the children thing. I like that she is hesitant to just drop someone on them and is considering all the angles. I also like that Rob is serious about meeting them, how it will impact them, how they will respond. I married a man with a son who did not go through the same thought process as Sarah, but I definately did. Just seems like the right thing to do and I like that you have put this into your story.
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for your review and your kind words. It is extremely important to her-although some people are saying she's thinking about it too much-your children are the most important thing in your life and she just wants to protect them. Her feelings are overwhelming for her and while she's terrified about letting him in, she's slowly starting to. Lots more on the way. Hope you continue to enjoy. XO
Reviewer: joss859 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 14(Shabbyapple)
Your really making us suffer! have some pity on your readers! i thought that by the time they were actually naked and in bed it would be a done deal, but no, you still managed to not write us a juicy lemon!
i love robs text messages and the phone call at the end of the chapter was fun!
Author's Response: Hi there! Yes- that's me...I'm evil that way...can't resist! Hope you enjoy what's up next *evil laugh*. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: joss859 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 11(shabbyapple)
He is so intense, but she is just so reluctant! Quite a long way to go I think! It was so sweet that he was waiting for her outside her room.
Author's Response: Hi there- He is intense! At least, this Rob is - she's been hurt badly, but she wants to believe as well-lots for them to overcome. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XO
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
Man, Beth just really needs to get a grip. I seriously do not like her.
Author's Response: LOL-Yeah, she's a piece of work-persistent, this one. Thanks for reading and reviewing-lots more on the way. Cheers
Reviewer: SonzzyB (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2010 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 27(Shabbyapple)
oooo i just want strangle Beth right now!
great update! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I know...she's something, isn't she? Lots more on the way. XO
Reviewer: joss859 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 3 (shabbyapple)
getting drawn in, yeah definetly that!
Thank goodness there are more chapters to go, I want to see what happens!
Author's Response: Hi there and Welcome! Glad you are enjoying..lots more for these two. Hope you enjoy! Cheers
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