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Reviewer: cullenscougar (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2010 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 35 (shabbyapple)
Hi Lesley, wow I loved this chapter, but then I love the whole story. God Jennifer is so awful and Sean is just an arse. Poor Sarah, dealing with that at work. I can't imagine what that feels like. Rob feels responsible and wants to help her, love him. I love Sarah's interaction with her boys. Really nice. And oh yeah, don't mess with mum and her kids. Good for her, sticking up for herself. can't wait for more. hugs Clare x
Author's Response: Hi Clare!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I'm so glad that you are enjoying these two!
You're so right...don't mess with the mommabear... that's not a good move!!!
Lots more on the way.
XO
Reviewer: bellemeer (Anonymous) · Date: October 05, 2010 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 35 (shabbyapple)
And so the crazy begins...........looking forward to the next instalment!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
And so it does...
Lots more on the way.
XO
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 35 (shabbyapple)
Hi Les!
Gahhhh! Poor Sarah! First she has to deal with the co-workers actin' like silly fangirls and then with papparazzi!. It would be easier on her if Rob was there...or would it? I think the frenzie would rise a hundred fold.
Sarah is strong, though. Most would have caved right after the first story broke in the paper, but not our girl. I think she'll find that, with what she has gone through, she's built up a thick protective layer around herself and her children. Standin' up to that stalker- reporter took courage. But, as you said "Don't get the momma bear mad!" She will protect her cubs vehemently. And I think that she'll protect Rob in the same way!
Rob still has his bouts of insecurity and Sarah's questionin' him about the girl who answered the phone threw him for a curve. Sarah had to reassure him that it wasn't him that she didn't trust, but trust itself. Eventually he will have her's totally and they will both be the stronger for it.
I think that Rob and Sarah will, with the depth of their love, be able to withstand the tidal wave that's headed their way. I worry about Sean and what he may try to do in the face of all the publicity. I have a feelin' that he's gonna be a real prick about it all, and Jennifer will be a real pain in the ass.
I love Daniel! He just takes everythin' in stride and goes on about his business, while Zach is still tryin' to make up his mind and come to grips with it. Anne is too cool and a true friend to Sarah. I want to know how little Jenna is doin' and how the bracelet turns out!
Now, is Sarah gonna call Rob and ask him to get Nick on the problem? Will Rob still come for the next weekend? Will Sarah make her trip to LA? Did Kellan really want ot know when Sarah was gonna visit? ( You knew I'd catch that, right?!)
Really anxious to see what you have planned for this, darlin', and where you take it from here. I absolutely love this story and want MORE PLEASE!
Thank you for givin' us of your superb talent, sweetie! You make everything seem eal, like it could happen. And thanks again for the rec! You're amazin'!
Much love,
Ellen xx
Author's Response: Hi Ellen!
Oh, thank you so much for reading and reviewing! You know how much I adore you and your reviews! You are so in touch with this story and what they are feeling.
I think you are right...it might be worse with him there! Sarah is a strong person-but this... its new territory and she really doesn't have any idea what she's getting into.
Yeah-don't mess with the mommabear... a bad move on so many levels.
Ah, yes-the bracelet is coming up in the next chapter and thereafter as well! I so knew you were going to catch the Kellan reference!! Love it!
Lots more on the way for these two... its going to get bumpy... really soon.
You know I love you and your fic. It's wonderful and I'd rec it any day, my dear.
XO
Les
Reviewer: Mrs Boyscout (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 35 (shabbyapple)
OMG, do not mess with the cubs. Do men not know anything?
I'm kind of loving all the craziness of them coming out of the closet, though. I can't wait to see if it makes the boys more popular at school. LOL
Great chapter. So loving this!
Author's Response: Hi hun!
Oh, don't get the mommabear mad!!! Yikes!
Lots more on the way.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
XO
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 35 (shabbyapple)
Ruh roh Shaggy!!!! Time for the shenanigans to start.
Author's Response: Hi there!
LOL- you're right, of course... its going to be interesting to see how she deals with this now!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Lots more on the way.
XO
Reviewer: lattecoug (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 35 (shabbyapple)
Jeez, talk about action-packed! Awesome chapter, Les. So well written.
Where to start? Bimbo Jennifer & Idiot Sean--they're truly made for each other. I loved the reaction at work. God, I could just picture the swarm of women clustered around her. Amazing.
Oh, the Michelle phone call. Tricky to handle, but Sarah is still relearning how to trust--it will take her a while to work through that sort of thing. And the slimy pap! Grrr... Go get him, Sar. If pictures of the boys end up in the press, both Sarah & Rob will go ballistic. Oh, and I'm afraid of Sean's reaction--that won't be pretty.
Thanks for the rec, hun. You're the best! :)
Hugs, Barb XO & PPP
Author's Response: Hi Barb!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! You're support means so much to me!!!!
Ah, Jen and Sean - cut from the same cloth.
Poor Sarah, its all so overwhelming and now the paparrazzi know where she lives! Eeeek!
Lots more on the way hun! And, I would rec your fic everyday-you know how much I love it!
XO
PPP
Les
Reviewer: totallygone425 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2010 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 34
Beautiful story, beautifully written!!!! Can't wait for MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
I'm so glad that you are enjoying this story.
Lots more on the way.
XO
Reviewer: Cullenbabe1231 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2010 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 34
I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Lots more on the way!!!
XO
Reviewer: emozing (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2010 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 34
Great storyline -- I really enjoy your writing -- I have several that are my favorites -- You are right up there with them.
I have a knack for picking unfinished stories to read -- so I am at the end and as I told you in an earlier review that even though I don't review after every chapter I am impatient -- so I'm freaking out -- there is no "next" button --
I really enjoy the personality of your Rob. You have incorporated not only what we all truly want to believe about him personally, but you have "deepened" him to a point that he is truly a person I think we would all like to see him grow into.
Your Sarah is awesome -- love the switching gears -- I think all women have to do that in real life. I think it is inbred in mommies that have a career and a truly happy love life.
And the boys -- well they are truly little boys, I feel like you have written some of your childrens' personalities into them. Great job.
Your story is very true to life. Can't wait to read more. I am planning to start your other stories also. I'm sure you'll see me there too.
Are you on LiveJournal?
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and for your kind words! I'm so glad that you are enjoying these two and that it rings true for you.
You are so right-women do switch gears and I think it is part of how we manage to cope with everything that comes at us. And yes, some of my boy's and their quirky personalities have been incorporated in here.
So glad that you are enjoying and checking out the other stories-they are all quite different and I'll be interested to see what you think!
I'm not on LiveJournal...should I be?
Lots more in store for these two.
XO
Les
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 34
Loved it.
Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: Hi there1
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Glad you are loving it!
Lots more on the way.
XO
Reviewer: SonzzyB (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2010 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 34
GREAT UPDATE!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you enjoyed!
Lots more on the way.
XO
Reviewer: totallygone425 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 29(Shabbyapple)
Beautiful story!!! Could not stop reading it!!!!!! Can't wait to read more!!!!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
There is lots more to read! Hope you continue to enjoy.
XO
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 34
Ugh, the goodbyes always get me. So heart wrenching I just want to be in that car crying with Sarah. I'd love to see Rob's POV next with how he deals with Nick. I think it'd be interesting to see how he's changing without Sarah around. As always, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Hi hun!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
*sniff* I hate goodbyes... always so hard.
Lots more on the way!
XO
Les
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 30
wow oh wow oh wow
Author's Response: Hi there!
:) Loving the Wow!
Lots more on the way.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
XO
Reviewer: emozing (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 16(shabbyapple)
Poof! Too bad hubby's not around.
Sorry I don't review after each chapter. I am really enjoying your storyline and like your character development. I get so involved I automatically hit next -- just my impatience to get to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi there!
LOL! Glad you are enjoying! There's lots more on the way for these two!
XO
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 16(shabbyapple)
i NEED a Slrupy NOW!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hi there!
MMMMM-slurpy!!! Yeah-they are awesome!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Hope you continue to enjoy.
XO
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 16(shabbyapple)
i NEED a Slrupy NOW!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! LOL- They are soooo good.
XO
Les
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 14(Shabbyapple)
thanks for writting
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Hope you continue to enjoy these two.
There is lots in store for them.
XO
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 12(shabbyapple)
major cliffy
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
You'll notice that I am a major fan of the cliffie! I just can't resist! *insert evil laugh*
Hope you continue to enjoy!
XO
Reviewer: bellemeer (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2010 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 34
Sweet sweet sweet and boy has Rob opened Sarah's floodgate! Looking forward to your next posting - I am totally invested in your story.
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
You are right-the floodgate is finally open and its all a bit overwhelming for her.
Lots more on the way for these two.
XO
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 5 (shabbyapple)
misty morning fog good line
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Ahhh London *sigh*
Lots more on the way.
XO
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 4 (shabbyapple)
so cool
Author's Response: Hi there!
Glad you are enjoying!
Oh, there's a lot more on the way!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
XO
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 3 (shabbyapple)
oh my god oh my god
Author's Response: Hi there!
Hopefully that means you're liking it!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
XO
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 34
I love the way she handled Nick.
Author's Response: Hi there!
Ahhh, Nick! hehehehe Glad you liked that!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Lots more on the way.
XO
Reviewer: dorano (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 34
Wow... that was really intense! He's an intense person, and overwhealming Sarah a little bit... but they'll cope. I can't even imagine in my position (with two kids as well) being swept off my feet by Rob, and what to do about it long term!?!? Can't move out there, he can't move to Ottawa, can't really do long term forever rigth? So what gives? :(
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Yeah-this Rob is intense. You are exactly right! How do you do a long term forever when your lives are so completely different?
These two have a lot of figure out, and both of them are still trying to deal with the intensity of their feelings.
Lots more on the way.
XO
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