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Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 37(Shabbyapple)
Love it
Author's Response: Hi there!
Glad you are enjoying.
Lots more on the way.
Cheers,
Les
Reviewer: BabyBlues (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 37(Shabbyapple)
Aw, cute!! Love your story - been waiting for the update ;)
Love the relationsship between Rob and the boys - hope to see more of it soon, maybe where they can be together for a longer period of time, without the boys leaving with their evil dad (Just kidding!)
Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
*sigh* evil dad... yeah, he's quite something, eh?
Lots more on the way.
Cheers,
Les
Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 37(Shabbyapple)
Fun chapter!
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Glad that you enjoyed.
Cheers,
Les
Reviewer: Joan (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 37(Shabbyapple)
Amazing story,love it so much.You are a very talented writer.I also especially enjoyed this chapter,loved their playfullness,loved the Queen references.Oh and I have BOTH the piercings you mentioned.....Sarah would really,really,really enjoy them....tee hee!!Thanks so much for all the hard work,we fans really appreciate it.
Sincerely,
Joan
Author's Response: Hi Joan!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I'm so glad that you are loving these two.
heehehe- love the piercings. they are enjoyable! *blushes*
Lots more on the way.
XO
Leslie
Reviewer: emozing (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 37(Shabbyapple)
Great chapter -- glad Sarah is getting Rob some downtime.
And the cabin and boat sex -- sign me up!!
I really enjoy the "kid" in Rob. The world is always more beautiful and innocent thru a child's eyes. He gets so excited about Sarah's life that is vastly different from his normal life. It makes me giggle. The milk shake, the lake, the cabin, the boat dock, and driving the boat -- things everyday people take for granted sometimes. You convey this beautifully.
But I also am heartened at the way he just loves Sarah -- he is so warm and caring on one hand and then so completely devilish and hungry for her on the other. Just a perfect balance.
I read the awful review on the last chapter. Those remarks were totally uncalled for. I understand that everyone has their own opinion. I was so proud of the way you answered that review. Your response told me so much about your charachter. And let me say that there are many, many of us out here that appreciate the time and effort that you give to bring us such a truly wonderful story. Thank you for your gift.
Can't wait for next update --
I follow you on twitter -- I'm sparkledamnu there.
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing and for your kind words. They made my day!
So glad that you enjoyed this chapter. You are exactly right- this is about both of them letting their guard down and getting some much needed down time. Their time together is so limited, and at the end of the day, she just wants him to be happy. Her taking him to the lake is a very big step - its a safe haven for her, a place where she grew up, and her bringing him there shows just how far she's come.
Thank you for your words on the review. I know the one you are speaking of. People are certainly entitled to their opinion. I would never deny anyone that and I am always open for constructive criticism. I have to be honest and tell you that I contemplated not posting any additional chapters of this story on the basis of that review. It made me question why I'm writing this in the first place. But, at the end of the day, its a story about acceptance and change and learning to love again after complete devastation. It's also about reviewers like you, who truly understand that. I thank you for reading and reviewing and for coming along with me on this journey.
More to come.
XO
Leslie
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 37(Shabbyapple)
Hey Les!
I'm doin' fine, gettin' better all the time, hun. Thanks for your thoughts!
What a fun, soothin' chapter. The trip out to the lake is so cute! At first Rob is kind of hesitant about them bein' so out in the wilds, but all Sarah has to do is mention: "There's a little country store about ten minutes from it where they make the best milkshakes you'll ever have." and Rob becomes a boy again and asks for a sundae with Smarties!
Mr Personality was a hoot! I've been waited on by him before! Then on to the lake house and his enthusiasm for it. I love the way they play together and enjoy their freedom! No paps or fans, just them and nature.
Two whole hours and Rob is wantin' her again and very erotically, too! That's when masterful Rob comes out! The teasin' about the piercin's was great! Love Rob's swim trunks! I can just see him in them, lol
Oh, last chapter we had "garage sex" and this time it's "boat sex" and a little kinky boat sex at that! Hmmmm!
So now they're goin' out for dinner. I think that Rob's a bit nervous about it!
I totally love your story, darlin' You have a way of drawin' the reader in and makin' us a part of it! Sooooo Good! So, now I'm waitin' for MORE PLEASE!
lOVE YOU, SWEETIE!
eLLEN XX
Author's Response: Hi Ellen!
How are you feeling hun? I'm keeping you in my prayers.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing and for your kind words.
I'm glad that you enjoyed this chapter. Oh, we've all had a Mr. Personality before, eh? The lake is definitely a safe haven for her. And for Sarah to take him there is a very big step.
And um... boat sex- yeah, I'll sign up for that any day!
More on the way.
XOXOXOXO
Love,
Les
Reviewer: bellemeer (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2010 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 37(Shabbyapple)
Please please please do not take so long to update - you have us hanging off your every word and waiting 2weeks+ is toroture!!!!
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
I'm sorry I'm torturing you! I write 3 stories and must deal with Twilighted rules of posting.
Lots more is on the way.
I'm glad you are enjoying.
XO
Reviewer: craving2read (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 37(Shabbyapple)
Time at the lake to totally unwind and recharge the batteries of the soul. Yum. Wonderful that you are having Sarah do this for Rob.
LOL - "Mr. Personality" / "Mr. Ray-of-Sunshine".
Hopefully Rob will be in a better mood after this weekend. Sarah, however, might not like how the spot light will be heating up and cramping her family life even more during the week. And Sean, well, he's probably going to be Mr. Jealous and Center of the Universe and start making demands of Sarah just to try and control her relationship with Rob, too. The writing canvas has so many potentials here.
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
So glad that you enjoyed this chapter.
hehehehe- haven't we all met a Mr. Personality? *rolls eyes* Yeah, I have one in my head right now.
You are right- Sarah really is just starting to see what the spot light looks like and she already doesn't like it. And Sean! yeah- he's quite something.
Lots more on the way.
XO
Les
Reviewer: lattecoug (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 37(Shabbyapple)
Oh my God Les! Boat sex!! Tied up boat sex!!! Holy hotness, woman!
God I love this story. What a wonderful chapter. The setting on the lake sounds gorgeous. Just what they needed--a chance to get away from it all and deepen their connection even more. Perfect.
Can't wait for more!
Hugs & PPP forever, Barb
XO
Author's Response: Hi Barb!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Your support means so much to me.
*gah* Boat sex... hmmm__________________ sorry, mind went into gutter there.
So glad that you are enjoying these two. They do need some down time- its crazy for both of them for very different reasons.
More on the way.
XO PPP
Les
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 37(Shabbyapple)
It's nice that they can have this paps free time together. I am curious about their dinner plans. Mr. Milkshake maker was an ass.
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
*sigh* free time together... sign me up!
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: katie_winkles (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 04:22 AM · On: Chapter 36(Shabbyapple)
Have I told you how much I FLOVE posessive Rob? I DO, SFM!
I always kick myself for waiting so long to read your updates. Twilighted tends to make my eyes bleed, and it's a fucker to read from my iPhone. But when I do, i'm always blown away. I LOVE THIS.
Author's Response: Hi Hun!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
*sigh* PossesiveRob... yeah, I enjoy him!
So glad that you are loving this little story. Lots more on the way.
XO
Les
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2010 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 36(Shabbyapple)
I love that Zach is warming up to Rob! The commraderie between them is really special. I get such a kick out of Sean and Rob interacting with each other, it truly is hilarious. Boys don't grow up, their toys just get more expensive! lol Thanks for another fabulous chapter.
Author's Response: Hi Hun!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
You're so right! Boys never grow up! *sigh*
Lots more on the way.
XO
Les
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2010 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 35 (shabbyapple)
Oh Lordy! I can't wait to see how Sarah handles the pap! Off to read the next chap!
Author's Response: Hi hun!
EEEK! I know! Such a change of pace for her!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
More on the way.
XO
Reviewer: twilightervamp (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2010 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 36(Shabbyapple)
OOOOO, love possesive Rob! So great. Things are heating up between Sean and Rob. I get the feeling the pissing match will come soon! LOL
Hugs,
Louise
Author's Response: Hi Louise!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Oh, Possessive Rob... I'll take one please!
Lots more on the way.
XO
Reviewer: lattecoug (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 36(Shabbyapple)
Hey hun! Oh my gosh--the garage sex almost did me in! *sigh* Wonderful chapter. It's going to be interesting to see how the paparazzi interest continues to grow and how Sarah will handle it. She's still coming to terms with how deeply she feels for Rob, and it's lovely to see how deep their emotions are. Beautifully written.
Oh, Zach--standing up for his Mom. I had to admit that my inner cavewoman was grinning too with the "downed him with one punch" comment! Good for you, Zach. Sean...still the biggest ass on the planet... *rolls eyes*
Thank you for the rec, sweetie. You know how much I appreciate it! :)
Can't wait for more! Barb
Author's Response: Hi Barb!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, and for all of your support. It means so much to me.
Oh, she really is just seeing the tip of the iceberg when it comes to the paparazzi. Things are about to get bumpy, and those cameras aren't going to help.
XO hun
PPP
Les
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 36(Shabbyapple)
Loved it as usual. Really good!
Author's Response: Hi Hun!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
So glad you are enjoying these two.
XO
Reviewer: duders79 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 36(Shabbyapple)
Ohh! Go Sarah with Nick! You tell him how it is girl!
Right, sorry for that outburst...There's so much I loved, but here goes me trying to keep it a reasonable length review and not an essay.
So, I loved how Rob barely took any time at all to explode on the phone! Too cute! In a sordid, sexy kinda way!
Poor Zach...bless...
I adore the fact that Sarah wanted to surprise him with the undies, and then he saw the pics! Awwww! And okay, Sean had a human moment for me, when he got all protective about how he'd kick Rob's Hollywood ass and all!
I loved the visual of Rob dashing across the lawn! And the garage antics?!! Wowzer!!! Favourite visual from the chapter here though - Rob dangling Sarah's undies on his finger! Fantastic! What an image!
I love how Rob was trying to root for Zach and then got the look from Sarah! I love his interactions with the kids. But oooh, Sean and Rob stare down. Liked that! But crikey, possessive Rob...no words....
Loved it as always! Soooo much! Oh, and you rec'd me!!! I am so thrilled! Thank you...Really, thank you. x
Author's Response: Hi Hun!
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
I'm glad that you re enjoying these two as they navigate their way through this crazy relationship. They both have a lot to deal with, and somehow, they need to find a way to tune out everyone else and just focus on them... not an easy task.
I so love how you pick up on the subtle things-the dangling undies--- yeah, um, where can I sign up for that?
hehehehe
I would rec your story any day, my dear. It is beautifully written.
XO
Les
Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 36(Shabbyapple)
Hey, Les!
First of all, I am in awe of your ability to stay rational with one of your reviewers~I would rant and rave all over the house and have to calm down before I could even begin to answer with such grace and kindness! You, my dear are a true saint! Whew! Okay................
OMK!! What an awesome chapter!
First of all, Nick really doesn't understand a Momma Bear, does he. Sarah would lay down her life for her children. But at some point I think that Sarah will have to rethink the Security thing...for her children. Sad, but true!
To not be able to enjoy a trip to a lengerie store...or go shoppin' at all...has got to be frustratin'! (Been there done that, remember?) To have your face plastered in the rags to be dissected for every little move you make! That is somethin' that Sarah has vowed to deal with as long as her children are spared. Again, her children come first, as it should be.
Poor Zach! Yeah right! I think he loved every moment of it! Made him feel like a man. You're right, it's all in the testosterone! "Testosterone driven lunatics?" Poor Sarah is surrounded by them...even Rob! Love the way she talks down to Sean! Such a sore loser, wants to have his cake and eat it, too!
Yay, the butterfly bracelet design is done and everone likes it. "I'll give it to Kel, too. He'll be stoked." Oh yes he will!!!*sigh* Glad it made Jenna feel a little better, too! Can't wait until it's finished and presented!
I was sure that Sarah would get into trouble at work when Rob was texting! He's so cute! And, OMK, I thought that a rogue paps was gonna appear and capture Rob runnin' into her garage! Then I nervously waited until Sarah pressed the remote door closer before I could breathe again! I just hope that there were no windows in there, because that lemon was one of the most erotic that I've read! Had to get up and turn the ceilin' fan on! Of course, all your lemons are lusty and erotic! yummmy
Jennifer is a real looneytoons and Sean deserves her! I love Daniel's relationship with Rob, and Zach seems to be comin' around, too!
And I just love your Rob (notice I said your's now!!) He's all at once little boy and charmer and mastrerful and funny and certainly possessive! Loved the staredown between him and Sean! I think even the bimbo was gettin' nervous!
And the chapter ending makes me want MORE PLEASE! ASAP!
Again, this is just fiction and fantasy. Isn't that what this is all about? Glad your stickin' to your guns, darlin'! I live in my little fantasy, too!
Love you,
Ellen xx
Author's Response: Hi Ellen!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. You know how much your opnion means to me.
How are you! I hope that everything is okay after your time in the hospital!! I'm worried about you, hun.
Well, reviewers are entitled to their opinion. I don't happen to share it, and I think that particular reviewer is missing the entire point of the story, but I can't control that. I'm not going to lie, I was extremely upset at that review and it made me question whether I should actually continue posting this story, but then, I look at the response and the love from people like you and it reminds me that there are people that understand what this story is ultimately about.
You're right about Nick-he doesn't understand the Mom-factor. She is going to have to look at making some changes to deal with what's happening, however. Sad indeed. She really doesn't have any idea what she's getting herself into and Rob is right-its only going to get worse from here on out.
Poor Sarah in a house full of testosterone! I feel the pain-believe me-its overwhelming sometimes!
The bracelet is coming along and will make another appearance. It's important to all of them.
Garage sex..._________________ <----thud... I need to sign up for that! hehehehe
Sean and Jennifer are indeed cut from the same cloth. So frustrating on so many levels.
There is lots more written and on the way, hun. Things are about to get bumpy.
Hope you are feeling better, my dear. I'll be thinking about you.
XO
Les
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 36(Shabbyapple)
Great chapter.
Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: Hi there,
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Lots more on the way.
XO
Reviewer: SonzzyB (Anonymous) · Date: October 15, 2010 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 36(Shabbyapple)
Loved this update! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Hi hun!
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Lots more to come for these two.
XO
Reviewer: cullenvamp_no10 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 36(Shabbyapple)
the story is cute but ...are you sure its not the author's idea of a fantasy filled wet dream? middle aged mom screwing Rob Pattinson a 24yr old guy? seems that way.....far far from what ever could actually happen..almost makes me laugh...but good detail anyway.
Author's Response: Hi there,
Well, thanks for reading and reviewing.
This story is what it is - like everything else on this and many other sites. Fiction... you could say it's far far from what could actually happen-much like vampires or werewolves or aliens. Or you could say its a middle aged mom falling for a younger man- which does actually happen, quite frequently in fact. That is however, not what this story is ultimately about. It's about the struggles of finding out who you after the life you thought you had has been pulled out from under you. It's about learning to love again after being completely devastated. And, its about battling the negativity that comes at you from multiple directions as life throws you its inevitable curveballs.
Glad you enjoy the detail.
Cheers
Reviewer: swan_song (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 8(shabbyapple)
Your pointing out everything is Canadian is so... Canadian! I do it all the time when I am out of the country. "You like Arcade Fire? Did you know they're CANADIAN!" etc etc
Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 36(Shabbyapple)
Awesome as usual! Thx!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Glad that you are enjoying.
Lots more on the way.
XO
Reviewer: swan_song (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 5 (shabbyapple)
I'll forgive you for liking Serena. She was a year below me in high school and was such a HUGE BITCH to me that I refuse to get on her train. She was always talented though, even at our art school.
Author's Response: Hi there!
Oh dear! She went to school with you? I like her lyrics... thought provoking and raw.
Hope you continue to enjoy.
XO
Les
Reviewer: totallygone425 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 36(Shabbyapple)
Fabulous as usual!!!!!! Can't wait for the Lake & MORE!!!!! This is truly one of my favorite stories!!!!
Author's Response: Hi there!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
So glad that you are enjoying these two.
Lots more on the way.
XO
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