i am forseeing this song as a good song for either the whole story or just this chapter

 

 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PT8gcZh_42w

Author's Response:

Hi there!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

That song is lovely and appropriate! Thank you for sharing!

XO

Oh no!   It was kind of coming, but I was holding out for a brief bit of angst and then back to happy times, but this is beter - story wise anyway.  So honest in its approach to this type of issue in their relationship.  Can;t wait to see RPOV!  Thanks for the update!   VFY (NessieFY on twitter)

Author's Response:

Hi hun!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

I'm so glad you see this as honest. It really does get to the heart of her insecurities and his as well. Both insecure and afraid for different reasons. *Sigh*

Lots more on the way.

XO

Les

The last 2 chapters have really hit home.  Needless to say, I have been there, done that, and I have the t-shirt.  But my story did eventually turn out witha happily ever after, an I am hoping this one does too.

As always you are an excellent writer.  I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi there,

Thanks for reading and reviewing and for your kind words.

It's difficult whenee breakups happen-sometimes you get a HEA, sometimes... well, we'll have to wait and see.

XO

I just realized I never left a review for the last chapter.  It wasn't going to say much except Oh dear.   This one is a double oh dear.   They are both idiots but they will hopefully get over it.   Thank you for the indirect reminder that I have to clean out my tupperware cupboard.

Author's Response:

Double oh dear!

Yes, they are both having their own set of issues right now.

You're right, everyone should clean their tupperware cupboard.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

XO

Why must there always be rain before the sunshine? And there had better be sunshine somewhere in the future, or I'll really be pissed. Rob is too young to settle down. I guess he's just tired of the showbiz lifestyle, which he hasn't been living too long, by the way. Oh, well, just fix this clusterfuck, please.

Author's Response:

Hi there,

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Rain is a part of life... you need to have some clouds before the sun comes out again.

Fix this clusterfuck-LOL - I'll see what I can do.

XO

I'm crying!! this is too sad. make it better.

Author's Response:

Hi there,

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

No crying! Stay strong! Make it better, eth? We'll see.

XO

 

I am sitting here, sobbing like a baby, because every single break up I've ever had (before my sweet, wonderful Hubs) came flooding back... you are an amazing writer, hon. 

No, no... Rob is not perfect. Neither is Sarah.  The pain, the emotion was very raw in this chapter and I could feel it with every word. I am dreading the talk with the boys. *sigh* 

I'm of course going to hope for a happy ending, but... not everything in real life has a happy ending. I'm a little upset with Rob for the way it all happened... but I can't wait to see how he tells it.

Author's Response:

Hi hun!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Oh... no sobbing! And you are right, neither one of them are perfect.

Rob is... well, confused and not dealing with things the way he should... *men*.

Lots more on the way.

XO

Les

Ok, so first review failed, let's try again, here goes.....

Oh no indeed.  What was Rob thinking?  Well I don't think he really was only that he needed to play the nice guy and try not to upset anyone, but you can't do that you need to choose and make the choice clear.  Whatever made him think that a kiss or two didn't matter?  Or that letting Beth sleep in his bed, even though they didn't have sex, was a good idea?  He's messed up big time, which I'm sure he's realised now.  In his defence, he's young, he's trying to keep everyone happy, he's naive, he's a man (lol) and he has a lot to learn.

Poor Sarah, I really feel for her going through all of this with Rob after what she went through with Sean.  I hope they can get through this together 'cos I love this story and you know I'm a sucker for a happy ending.....it will be a happy ending.....won't it?

Jane x

Author's Response:

Hi Jane!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Yes! He's messed up big time! And you're right every man does have a lot to learn! heehehe- loved this BTW.

Happy ending? Hmmm-we'll have to see.

XO

Les

He cheated on her and felt she wouldn't care? Why else would he say something so insensitive as 'you're blowing this out of proportion'? Ass

I'm not sure I can continue this if Sarah takes him back without much of an apology, time, or thought.

*shakes head*

In real life Rob would never let this happen or be this way. So, I'm not even seeing this character as 'Robert Patinson' because this isn't anything like him.

*sighs*

This guy was to intuitive at the beginning. He watched for signs of discomfort and even though he blew off Beth that first nigt. He made sure to put her in her place everytime after that.

I just can't understand how it turned out this way at all. If he loved Sarah and thought her husband was so dispecible for cheating on her. Why did he cross that line? What made him think that kissing and holding Beth while she slept, wasn't crossing a line? 

I don't understand. With how possesive he is and one tracked mind that he has. How could he do that?

I just don't get it.

He knew what kind of person Beth was before him and Sarah left. He saw first hand how calous and manipulative she had been in London. Why does he still consider her a friend? Why wasn't he  repulsed or dissapointed that his suppose 'friend' won't respect his wishes and boundries?

That first kiss she forced on him when she greeted him. Should have disgusted him. The only thing on his mind when he went to go find her; should have been to make her feel like a bratty child throwing a temper tantrum(when she was making a scene) and dragged her out of the restruant by the arm calling her a brat and to go the hell back home if she doesn't plan on acting like an adult and take responsibilty for her actions.

He should have then told her he will never have feelings for her like that and if she can't respect him and his desicions. Then they won't be friends anymore. When/if she hadn't replied he then dragged her by the arm to the hotel next to his and told her that she'd be on the first flight in the morning because he can't stand to look at her right now and to think over what she had done. Before she really loses his friendship.

*deeply sighs*

I thought the guy was smart and ready for a relationship. Now I'm not sure he even deserves to be in one to begin with. If he doesn't know what cheating is. I guess that's sign of a guy who can't be dealt with a relationship/

Author's Response:

*deeply sighs right along with you*

Thanks for reading and reviewing. All fantastic questions and wonderful insight. Reading this just from Sarah's POV leaves out a massive part of what happened, which is why I've already written his POV. Remember, we haven't heard the whole story.

Yes, of course you are right, he never should have kissed her, he should have thrown her out like the bratty child that she seems to resemble, however, remember that he has never seen Beth they way everyone else does-is that naive of him, yes, of course it is. He also never said he didn't care how Sarah would feel about all of this-remember, you haven't heard his side to know what he's thinking or feeling or tormenting himself over.

I'm sorry if you feel you can't continue. That upsets me a lot. I never wrote this with the intent of trying to replicate "Rob in real life." Men, even the seemingly perfect ones, make mistakes, as do women. No one is perfect and relationships are not always easy. It's a struggle to figure out your relationship while you're trying to figure out the kind of life you want to have, when you're confused about your future, and when you find someone who you truly love, who you know is not on the same page that you are. You'll have doubts, and sometimes those doubts will get in the way.

I hope you do continue to read. I never promised that this particular fictional version of Rob would be perfect or infallable - I don't think any man is.

Cheers,

Les

I don 't beleive it!

How could he betray her like that? My heart bleeds for Sarah - she has taken all the stuff on the chin that everyone thought she wouldn't cope with, stuff that would freak her out then he turns around and does the very thing that she won't tolerate!

 I can't wait to see where you are taking this.

Please keep the chapters coming. Don't forsake this story at this crutial time for any others that you may be writing.

This story is so good and strong and I really need to get to the end soon.

Cheers

Snail

Author's Response:

Hi Snail,

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Glad you are enjoying. Trust me, this story is not going anywhere. I'm several chapters ahead of where we are now and the rest of it is plotted and drafted.

More on the way.

XO

Fuck.

And, damn.  I was laughing out load at the beginning w/ Drunk Rob.  Now I have no idea what he's going to have to do, to win her back.  Anyone would be pissed, but she's doubled so b/c of her shit of an ex-husband.

I've been here since this started, and still enjoying.

Thanks

Author's Response:

Hi there!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Glad you are still enjoying. That means a lot to me!

I love Drunk Rob too! But now, he's got his work cut out for him!

XO

Asshole, idiot, your basic dumb guy.  They just don't get it.

Author's Response:

Hi there!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Love your review- I agree with everything you've said.

XO