Evil, evil cliffie!  These two really have to get it together.  They are just too good together, ya know?  Looking forward to your next update!  

Author's Response:

Hi there!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

I'm evil... I know!

More on the way.

XO

Les

putting you to favorites so i can read you tonight   cant wait

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Hi there and Welcome!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

I hope you enjoy these two and their journey.

Cheers,

Les

Oh you evil, evil woman!!!!   LOL   Brilliant as usual.  I can't wait for the next chapter.  Pretty please with sugar (or ice wine ) on top.  Please don't let us suffer too much!!!!

Author's Response:

Hi there!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

You know I'm evil like that!

More on the way... hmmm I could be persuaded with ice wine.

XO

Les

Hi sweetie!

Wow, another great chapter...of course! Can't see anythin' else coming from you!

Isn't it amazin' how kids can cut right to the chase and in a few simple words give advice and comfort. Although Zach is hurtin' himself, he's concerned about how his mother is feelin'. Great kid, there!

I understand Sarah's trepidition about this trip. I would be trembling violently from the inside out! She and Rob need to see each other, to sit down and talk about what they're feelin' and where thier relationship can and should go. Fortunately, Rob isn't the only reason for the visit.

Aww, William Robert Sturridge has arrived! This line had mw lmao: "Her tits are amazing!"  And delivered so nonchalantly, too. Leave it to a man!

Bet you can't guess when I let loose and squeed?! *sigh*

Finally, Jenna's bracelet is finished and is doin' wonderful online! *sigh* The whole scene in Jenna's room had me cryin'. It was just so touching. The genuine love and carin' in that room came roilin' up off of the monitor and enveloped me. But, this line scares me: Jenna's expression changes, and she furrows her brow at her mother. "If something happens to me, make sure they keep doing this, okay, Mom?" I sense that Jenna knows something...intuitively...that her time is short.

Poor Tom! Bein' a new daddy seems to be freakin' him out! Good thing Sarah arrived to tell him like it is. he can do the father thing, just like all fatheres since time began. He's just so cute!

Well, now she's forced to see him, ready or not! I'm anxious about what is goin' to happen now. So, MORE PLEASE, ASAP! They just have to get back together soon! It's tearin' me apart, too!

Again, you have blown me away with the depth of your talented imagination! Awesome!

Love you!

Ellen xx

 

 

 

Author's Response:

Hi Ellen,

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing! You know I love your thoughts.

You're right... she's terrified of seeing him. She has so many emotions swirling, its hard for her to get a grip on them.

I'm sorry I made you cry *passes tissues*. Jenna is a strong girl-trying to brave in the face of such an awful disease.

Poor Tom-cheeky boy is freaking out!

More on the way for these two. We're not quite done yet.

XO

Love,

Les

I can't believe you waited til the last of the chapter to reunite them.   It was really good but so mean. :(

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Yeah... I'm evil like that.

More on the way.

Cheers,

Les

Love Tom

Author's Response:

Glad you love him! Me too!

More on the way.

XO

Les

Thank god, she can look ahead.

Author's Response:

Hi there!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Definitely a good sign!

More on the way.

XO

Les

I have to say that as much as I love Sarah and as much as some people don't deserve them, she has a really hard time with the fact that people screw up.  Obviously what Sean did was beyond forgiveness and he has been a major ass about the whole Rob thing, but laying into him everytime he tries to see if she's okay doesn't help anything.  And he has a right to get upset that Rob hurt his sons, just like she has the same right to be pissed that Sean keeps changing girlfriends.  While I also agree in a huge way that Rob screwed up major, she did too.  She didn't try to talk to him about any of it, myabe that's why Sean never tried talking to her either.  Seems to not be a whole lot of middle ground, it's either black or white.  Curious to see where it goes from here.

Author's Response:

Hi hun!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Love your insight as always! You're right-she is hard on him and she did screw up as well. They need to find a middle ground-relationships can't work if there isn't one.

XO

Les

Really good! Love that She's giving him a chance! Can't wait for more!

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Hi there!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

More on the way.

XO

Les

Oh the glimmer of light at the end of the tunnel of drinken wallowing!  Sometimes a guy just needs his family, mummy and his mates to get him back on his path.  Thanks for the update.  Can't wait to see these two reunited!

Author's Response:

Hi there!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

A glimmer is all we need!

More on the way.

XO

Les

GREAT UPDATE!

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Hi there!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Glad you enjoyed.

More on the way.

Cheers,

Les

Ohh, I loved this chapter! Rob is home, where he needs to be. He has his family, he has his friends, and he has hope, finally. Happy sigh!

I like that Richard tried to make Rob see that it maybe wasn't all his fault. That perhaps Sarah could have helped sort things out a little bit too. It's true, I think ... Although I don't think Rob can admit that yet.

So Julie's ready to pop! Yay! Could she have something to do with the unexpected journey, perhaps? Maybe Sarah might come and visit the new baby! Woo, that's my little prediction, anyway!

Such a wonderful chapter, Lesley! I've been sitting here in a park, thoroughly enjoying it! Thank you!

Author's Response:

Hi hun!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

So glad that you liked this chapter! Sometimes, going home is what you need to get things in perspective.

You're absolutely right with your assessment of Rob and hiim being unable to admit that Sarah had a part in this. They both walked away too quickly.

Hmmm... Julie and the baby-perhaps that has something to do with the journey... *evil giggle*

More on the way.

XO

Les

Hi, Leslie, my dear!

Great chapter from RPOV.

I love the way you have him lettin' us know how he feels! And the relationship with his family is awesome. They truely love him and aren't afraid to tell him when he's wrong. The way he knows how they are gonna react to his foolishness and still wants to go home shows what a geat family dynamic they have. Mum and dad had a go at him...lovingly. Vic let him have it, tore him a new one, then, like any big sister should, let him cry it all out on her shoulder. I LOVE this Pattinson family.

Tom and Jules are the perfect friends, lovin' and honest! And even tho Beth is one of them, they are not at all happy about what she did. Love Jules's rant about it being her house and he had to tell her what happened And I loved this line of Tom's: "A real friend of yours would not have flown half way around the world to try to stake a claim on you. We're supposed to support you, and yeah, offer an opinion, kick you in the ass when you need it, but she crossed the line," he continues. He's got it right!

So Sarah finally watch Twilight and like it, and she thought he looked young (He does) and that he was good in it. I'm glad that they're still talkin', and the "maybes" are still there. I liked this. It shows maturity on Rob's part: "Please don't make me promises," she says quietly."I have to. I have to make them to someone who's going to give a shit if I break them."

And this last bit had me squeein' and shoutin':

The frustrated huff I hear isn't a good sign. "What does that even mean?" she asks.

 "Just that I hope you have time... you know, for me. Will you?" I can barely hear my own voice as I get up off the bed, the pacing starting while I rake my hands through my hair and wait on the edge of my sanity for her response.

 And then, she says the word I honestly didn't expect. I have pretty much resigned myself to the fact that the answer would be no. Or if by some sheer miracle I got really lucky, I would potentially hear a maybe.

 But instead, she says the word that changes everything.

 "Yes."

Whoo Hoo! The beginnin' of a new beginnin'! Sweetie, you just gotta hurry with MORE PLEASE, ASAP!

God, I love this story and you for sharin' it with us!  And what's this rumor about a new fic...hmmm? Can't wait!

Love ya, darlin'

Ellen xx

 

 

Author's Response:

Hi Ellen!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! You know how much I love hearing your thoughts.

So glad you enjoy his family. I'm always nervous writing them.

Tom and Jules are friends to the core for him and will definitely give him their opinion-which is honestly, what he needs right now.

*Sigh* Twilight... I think I may need to watch again just for the cafeteria walk alone.

Yes, it is a beginning for them. There are hurdles for them to get over, to be sure.

More on the way hun.

XO

Love ya,

Leslie

PS- new fic should be up in the next couple of weeks. ehehehe