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Reviewer: sarah1988 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

i love this story! i like the cleverness of the characters, they kind of complete each other. i love the sarcastic remarks here and there. and rob is endearing using all these words in his texts. well as you can see: you got me, badly. 

Reviewer: sarah1988 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

i love this story! i like the cleverness of the characters, they kind of complete each other. i love the sarcastic remarks here and there. and rob is endearing using all these words in his texts. well as you can see: you got me, badly. 

Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

yeah, I totally want to know what Rob is thinking.... LOL!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Oh what is he thinking?  Thanks for leaving your comments!  They really do mean so much!  We'll see what he's thinking shortly...Cheers!

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

Too damn cute!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the reviews!  It means so much that you'd take the time!  I'm glad you're enjoying it! Cheers

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 5 (shabbyapple)

:-P



Author's Response:

Thanks!  :)

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 4 (shabbyapple)

That was great!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Glad you're enjoying it! :)

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 3 (shabbyapple)

Yummy



Author's Response:

MMM-yummy indeed!

Reviewer: firegirl11 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

love it..love it...more   more    more   now that we know Rob likes older women   lol



Author's Response:

LOL-Definately a good thing to know!

Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

Love it



Author's Response:

Hi there,

Thanks so much!  You made my day!  Update soon.

Cheers

Reviewer: Edwardia Maven (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

Nice chapter.. however Brits DON'T all sound like something out of Mary Poppins, ergo RPattz, being privately-educated would NOT call and sundry,love.

It's St James's Park, even though that is grammatically incorrect.

Dinner at 6pm is ridiculously early, generic office hours are 0900-1700, retail hours 0900 - 1730. Restaurants open that early would be catering to the pre-theatre tourist crowds.

RPattz would be used to dinner being around 8pm, certainly not earlier than 7pm. Blue collar workers who may finish work as early as 1630 (having started work at maybe 0600/0700/0800) might have tea as early as 5pm or 6pm however.

Novotel is a French chain and so convinced was I that a French-owned hotel would never start serving dinner at 5pm, I checked. Novotel Tower Bridge restaurant is open 0600-Midnight continuously with 24/7 room service too.

Nice chapter interractions etc but sloppy research sorry

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi there,

Thanks for the review.  Love to hear your thoughts.  I've stayed at the Novotel at Tower Bridge many times-the last being a few months ago at which time they did start dinner at 5pm-I was shocked as well at the early time then and even more shocked now to find that they have changed their hours.   Thanks for clarifying-I should have double checked. And dinner at 6-yes it is early--he's eager what can I say and as you'll see, its not exactly all about the food coming up...Thanks for clarifying on the name of the park--it is a beautfiul one.  Cheers and thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: lattecoug (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

This is very good!  I can't wait to see what Rob is thinking!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!  Next chap coming soon!  Cheers!

Reviewer: lattecoug (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

This is very good!  I can't wait to see what Rob is thinking!



Author's Response:

Hi there.  Thanks so much for the review!  Oh...what is he thinking?  Update should be early next week!

Reviewer: tromero (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

Love it!  It is romantic but at the same time believable.  I love that Sarah doesn not overanalyze things too much,  just goes with how she is feeling.



Author's Response:

Hi there.  Thanks so much for reviewing!  I'm so glad you're enjoying it!  Cheers!

Reviewer: ruthhazelton (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

TTYL?????   I love this story by the way.



Author's Response:

Hey there-TTYL-Talk To You Later...glad you're loving the story!  Update should be early next week!

Cheers

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 1

Too funny!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Glad you enjoyed it!  Keep the reviews coming!  They make my day

Cheers

Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

:) aww Rob why can't i fly to London and meet u and u want to jump my body???



Author's Response:

I know...ahhh...we can dream :)

Cheers

Reviewer: Morrisburger (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

Fabulous, very fun to read.



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks so so much for the review!  I'm glad you're enjoying it as much as I'm enjoying writing it!

Update should be early next week!

Cheers!

Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

That was a fantastic chapter.  I loved her little reaction of being in the SUV.  I loved his comments back.  He really does like her a lot and she is starting to take down her walls around her.  I'm so happy that they are going to dinner and I'm looking forward to that.  Can't wait for the next chapter and what he is thinking.  Love it.  Great job.



Author's Response:

Hey there!  Thanks so much for the review!  Love, love, your comments!  They make me smile :) Oh yes...they are going out...hmmm...Rob and dinner...oh the possibilities :)

Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)

I def cannot wait to see what is gonna happen with these two!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks so much for the review...oh they have quite an interesting journey coming up! 

Cheers!

Reviewer: tromero (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2010 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 5 (shabbyapple)

I really love this.  I see myself in Sarah and I can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks so much for taking time to review!  I'm glad you're enjoying it!  So much more to come.  Update should be soon!

Keep the reviews coming!  They make my day

Cheers

Reviewer: nurse deb (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 5 (shabbyapple)

I'm loving this so far!  Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I'm glad you're enjoying it! Update should be later this week!

Cheers

Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 5 (shabbyapple)

You have got me interested in this story.  Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Hope you keep on reading...there's lots more to come.  Update should be later this week.


Cheers!

Reviewer: sarah1988 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 5 (shabbyapple)

awww... she seriously had no idea... :D

i like this story, just read all the way through it. pls update soon.



Author's Response:

Hi there, 

Thanks so much for the review.  I'm glad you like it..there's a lot more coming..update should be later this week.

Cheers!

 

Reviewer: katie_winkles (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 5 (shabbyapple)

i am completely enraptured! i know ive said it already, but this is the first RPF in a long time that has captured me. Your characterisation of Rob is perfect (i think) and the story is intriguing and exciting. I cant wait for more!

Oh and if you see fit to throw a bit of TomStu in there, i'll be yours forever!!!! (They're so cute, going everywhere together, like a true bromance)



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Thanks so much for taking the time to review!  I'm glad you're enjoying it!  Funny you should mention Tom--he's definately in here along with a few new folks you'll meet shortly-'cause I just can't resist. 

Love to get reviews, so keep them coming!

Cheers!

xx

 

Reviewer: SonzzyB (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2010 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 5 (shabbyapple)

this is amazing!

can't wait to read more!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to review!  More is on the way...hopefully up this week!

Keep the reviews coming!  They make my day...seriously!

Cheers

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