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Reviewer: craving2read (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 9(shabbyapple)
Man, I love this line of yours - "It's not entirely your fault. I mean, the overwhelming testosterone in your system clearly clouds your ability to have any common sense whatsoever." So true, so true.
Author's Response: Ahhh yes...It is so true! LOL-So many examples of this...too funny :) Thanks for reviewing!! Cheers-Leslie
Reviewer: wilson0518 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 11(shabbyapple)
Good chapter :)
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. -Cheers!
Reviewer: craving2read (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 8(shabbyapple)
Ice wine is heaven. Great to include that in the story.
Author's Response: MMMMM-Ice wine...seriously the best thing ever invented :) Thanks for your review! Hope you continue to enjoy. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 11(shabbyapple)
Aw, thank you so much for the shout out! That was so sweet of you. I really liked this chapter. I love the uncertainty that Rob experiences with her because she's not just some random fangirl hanging on his every word. Kudos to him for going at it with his management team too. I can't wait to see what's up next!
Author's Response: Hi there! Glad you enjoyed it :) More is coming soon! XO Leslie
Reviewer: naner26 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 11(shabbyapple)
yay!!!!!!It was worth the wait. Can't wait for more...
Author's Response: Hi there! Glad you enjoyed it...more is on the way. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: frackgirl (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 11(shabbyapple)
hey im so excited over the fact that they kissed finally lol and what a kiss! i think all your readers will be jaloux of that kiss im sure...
i do hope we get the know Rob's thoughts for all of this??
and she is right though he should take his life back. he has every right to have a gf and i mean in real life too. im not one of those who will get all jaloux and hate on her im sure she will be a wonderful girl once he finds one if he has not already lol
love Anita, denmark
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) XO Leslie
Reviewer: craving2read (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 3 (shabbyapple)
Love the snark and sarcasm. It would be fun hanging out with these two.
(Pssst, check your use of "they're" vs. "their".)
Author's Response: Hi There! Thanks for your review! I think it would be fun too! Hope you keep reading and enjoying. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: craving2read (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 1
Great beginning chapter. Very catchy and interested in reading more.
Author's Response: Hi there! Welcome! I hope you continue to enjoy :) Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 11(shabbyapple)
Awwww....beautiful :) The way Edward was so...vulnerable when he asked if he'd ever get to kiss Sarah! *sigh* Thank you for creating such a strong female character...that despite how emotional she gets, she's a woman who's been through a lot in her life and she's come out the other side knowing she can fend for herself.
Author's Response: Wow-Thank you for your kind words. It means so much to me that you see the Sarah I've created. She is emotional and she's been hiding for so long behind the wall she's built up that she's terrified of how she feels. I hope you continue to read and enjoy. You've made my day hun. Cheers, XO Leslie
Reviewer: frackgirl (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2010 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 10(shabbyapple)
well wow i cant wait for the next chapter..i dont think i told you this but i really like the way you write your story like your wiritting style you sre reslly good!
your story had totally got me wraped into it i just wanne read more..hehe got to love the Rob fan fictions:)
love Anita, denmark
Author's Response: Hi Anita! Many thanks for your review and your kind words! I'm glad you're enjoying it...I love the Rob fan fics--so many different ones to enjoy! Update is coming soon. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: frackgirl (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 3 (shabbyapple)
well hey again this is really unsual for me to wirte twice in one evening but well wow to this chapter..and what a suprise you drop on the readers having rob asking her to stay at his place lol what is she waiting for...?? i cant wait to find out if she is going to sat yes to his offer...
and now im just curious i hope it is oki but when did you become a fan of rob and how?? hope it is oki for me to ask..i dont know anyone else beside myself that likes him like i do...love Anita, denmark
Author's Response: Hi there! Glad you are enjoying it! I love to hear your comments. Became a fan when I was dragged to Twilight at the theatre by one of the girls from work. I hadn't read the books, I had no idea what it was about or who he even was. Needless to say, I was hooked after seeing it and read all the books within a couple of weeks. Hope you continue to enjoy and review. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: frackgirl (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hey just started on your story here and so far so good i totally love it! it seems diffrent in a good way that is:)
i cant wait to read more and give you more rewives...though i do admit im not good at it giving rewives that is i think it is because im shy or something because it is not that i dont come across very great stories!
i thought that the stewardess was really annoying glaring a Rob like that though im sure he gets that i lot from girls but i think people should pay more respect and not glare just because they see someone hot and famous but that is just my openion....other than that i hate cheating men i really do..i got no respect for people who do something like that towards someone else at all...had a cheating bf before and it is just hurtful and it makes you angry and bitter at least that is what it did to me...
well this is turning out to be a whole norvel lol sorry about that but looooved this chapter and not im going off to read the next one...love Anita from denmark
Author's Response: Hi there Anita! Thank you so much for taking the time to review! It means so much! I've glad that you're enjoying it so far! And I'm in complete agreement with you and your views on cheating men. It completely tears your heart out. Hope you continue to read and review. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: buff802y (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 10(shabbyapple)
Great chappy. Love to see things from Rob's POV. I just hope he doesn't or for that matter even Sarah F*** this UP:) Cannot wait for next posting!!!
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks for your review! Great that you love Rob's view of the world! I'm always worried writing it...update is on the way. Hope you continue to enjoy xo Leslie
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 10(shabbyapple)
I kept expecting her to wake up and lay into him, but I'm glad it didn't. I felt so sad for him, just wanting to wrap my arms around him and hold him. He's been through so much, I truly wonder how he deals with it. Great chapter and now I'm all caught up. So, when's the next one? lol
Author's Response: Hey there! I don't know how he does it-how anyone manages their life with so much attention. Glad you're enjoying--next one is actually betaing as we speak...LOL-XO Leslie
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 9(shabbyapple)
I was sitting there for a minute going, "Why the hell are Kellan and Ashley there?" Made a lot more sense once I continued reading. I do so love the two of them. Kellan seems like he would be so much fun and Ashley seems like she could easily fit into a close friend role. I loved it when she yelled at him too! I curious as to what your take on Nikki and Kristen is going to be!
Author's Response: Hey there-Thanks for the review! Yeah-so much fun for sure...Glad you liked it! Hope you like what's coming up. Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 8(shabbyapple)
I have to say I'm quite curious about ice wine now... And I love that you bring in shoes. Louboutins, ahhh, one of my favorite words.
Author's Response: OMG-You have to go and get some...small bottles but like I said...very deceiving...best, if you can get it where you are is Peller Estates, or Inniskillin-yeah, I may have had a few glasses over the years...or more LOL...Hmmm Louboutins...WOW no words really-Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 10(shabbyapple)
Oh god, someone is getting some serious feelings going on. I'm sooooo excited. It must be scary for him to have these feelings and not sure if she is going to return them. I know that she feels like she is broken, but I think Rob is the one to heal her. I see a beautiful friendship forming between them. Okay now that I'm caught up I'm ready for the next chapter. *tapping foot* LMAO just kidding Leslie.
Penny
Author's Response: Hey hun-LOL-love your review-yeah-some serious feelings for sure-she's had the wall up for so long, its hard for her to imagine anyone feeling anything for her. Hopefully, he can change that *wink-wink*. Update is betaing as we speak.
xo Leslie
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 9(shabbyapple)
First of all thanks for the shout out, that really means a lot to me. Only Rob for leaving her behind to fend for herself LOL, but I think she did quite well. Beth on the other hand, yeah I just want to slap her. *insert profanities* Well I was hoping that she would invite him up to her room. Thank god. Really I think her giving him that information is a BIG turning point for them. SQUEEEEE!!!!!! I loved this chapter and I'm off to the next. Yeah I've been off the radar for awhile. I'm trying to get through this really bad case of writer's block I have half the chapter written and the other half is just sitting in my brain somewhere. My next chapters go together so it has been difficult writing. Almost done editing my next chapter of my other story and hope to update that shortly, it has only been since december. LOL. Okay off to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hey there-Thanks for your thoughts- it means so much to me that you're enjoying it :) I hope the writer's block breaks for you-I know how frustrating it is! I've found often times wine helps :) Yeah Beth...she's something else :) I'm looking forward to your update-xo Leslie
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 7 (shabbyapple)
Thanks for the clarification on the time period. I was thinking it was post Eclipse, but BD had no been filmed. Has it been released too? I don't know why, but I seem to read the Rob chapters at double pace. Gotta love being in his head!
Author's Response: Hey there-BD has been filmed-its 2011 in this story...oh yeah-love wondering what he's thinking :) Thanks for reviewing as always! Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 8(shabbyapple)
OMG I'm so sorry I'm behind on my reviews. Well anyway I loved their date at the Eye. That really was romantic in my eyes and also a way for them to get to know each other. I think you did fantastic on this chapter. Okay off to review the next one.
Penny
Author's Response: Hey hun! OMG-I was starting to get really worried about you! I hope all is well. Glad you enjoyed it...oh so much more to come-as always, love to hear what you think. XO Leslie
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 6 (shabbyapple)
I actually love the fact that she is so guarded and not just jumping on everything he says and does. It makes the story more real and makes Sarah more intelligent, I feel.
Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks so much for taking the time to review-you make me smile. I'm glad you feel that way-some are wanting her to jump all over him right away-while tempting...of course :), she has been through a lot and we've only seen part of it-She's reverted back to mom mode-because it's safe and it's what she is most comfortable with-especially when she starts to feel something that scares her. Thanks for reviewing--I hope you like what's in store :) xo Leslie
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 5 (shabbyapple)
Aw, poor Rob. Accosted even in London where he was hoping for a break. I would've hopped into the SUV no problem, but I gotta agree with her, staying with him would've been a bit much.
Author's Response: Hi There! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Yeah-tempting...but a bit much :) ...ok, maybe not...LOL Cheers, Leslie
Reviewer: SonzzyB (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 10(shabbyapple)
awww bless Rob :)
great update!
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks so much for your review! Glad you enjoyed it. Update is on the way. xo Leslie
Reviewer: enikolova (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 10(shabbyapple)
Lovely chapter again. I like RPOV in this story.
I can't wait for the kiss...
Author's Response: Hi There, Thanks so much for your review. Glad you're enjoying it! A kiss huh? LOL....hmmm I'll see what I can do about that :) -xo Leslie
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2010 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 4 (shabbyapple)
I love the looks inside Rob's mind. I'm so nervous about getting him wrong that I'm hesitant to write anything from his point of view, but you do it exactly as I would imagine it, so bravo!
Author's Response: Hi there-thanks so much for your review! I'm always nervous writing from his POV...glad you're enjoying! You're fic is great! Update is coming soon--Cheers, Leslie
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